Anaknisatanas posted a comment on Monday 17th July 2006 2:27pm

I loved the bit with Moody. This is really coming together, I'm addicted to your writing so I hope that you two keep on churning out more fics and stories.

The Goblins coming was great. I was looking forward to reading that bit. The Wizengamot reforming, if that turns into a mess for Harry he should visit the King (I'm assuming that's Charles now) and ask him to abolish it. That would be hilarious to see people like Amhar Coeur de Lion react to that bit of news.

Gary Meuse posted a comment on Monday 17th July 2006 8:23am

Hi, I have just started chapter 1 of Sunrise after my wife and I read Sunset in one day.

One thing, I hope you don't you don't think I am nitpicking but I was hoping that the problems with grammar would have gone away. In some sentences there are words left out or mixed tenses.

It is a very good fic and I know it will get better, as I said we are only on chapter 1.

AcceleratedGlass posted a comment on Monday 17th July 2006 4:33am

good chapter update soon

Robin Westerly posted a comment on Monday 17th July 2006 3:32am

bravo!

Cky Raes posted a comment on Sunday 16th July 2006 10:00am

*sigh* You were doing so well too...

Cky Raes posted a comment on Sunday 16th July 2006 9:27am

Thank you for finally bashing Hermione a little.

LoggingInSucksAss posted a comment on Saturday 15th July 2006 7:53am

I must have been a beta in my past life... I wasn't aware buns could flap, in a breeze or otherwise. :)

Now onto the next chapter! You guys have been in a frenzy, lately... you're just about matching your original posting schedule!

Cky Raes posted a comment on Friday 14th July 2006 3:34pm

All I have to say deals with Harry's leg and that is...Come on you know you want him to get better. I bet you do. Your just in denial.

Robert1 posted a comment on Friday 14th July 2006 11:57am

I kinda hope Amhar tries to lead a coup against Amelia and Harry, so Harry can smack that racist idiot around. We just met the guy, and already he bugs me! About my previous review, I realized I was reading too much into it as soon as I posted the review. It was a case of it’s-2AM-I’ve-been-up-24-hours-but-I-must-finish-this-chapter!

And, of course us Bobs are a gifted lot! All hail the mighty Bob, in all his myriad incarnations!

Cky Raes posted a comment on Friday 14th July 2006 11:08am

HAHA nice Dogma tribute XD

Rob9 posted a comment on Friday 14th July 2006 8:29am

This chapter expands on your genius and shows what especially gifted writers can do. It also shows that you have thoroughly thought out where you want this story to go and I applaud you on that. Please continue with this story that is easily the most enjoyable fanfic I have ever had the pleasure to read.

(Bob please stop torturing poor Alan, I don't like him as well but please give the poor man a break. <Feel free to torture Snape though.>)

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Friday 14th July 2006 5:28am

Really very good!
Epic even! I agree that your characters are far to realistic how dare you do this!! lol!

Keep writing I love the way so many things tie in now to make this a truly epic masterpiece of literature!

Monkey

ctao posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2006 3:06pm

woah good chapter, cant wait til the next one is up. keep up the good work.

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2006 10:31am

Another great chapter guys, Keep up with this update time frame. I can see great battles comming soon. And Harry thought that he was going to stay out of the politcal side, I knew that he was going to have to get involved sometime and now is the time.

Thanks for writing
MPF

Crys posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2006 8:34am

Some good news with the goblins (and tidbits of goblin society to boot), nailing down a future cash-flow source, watching AD sink further into madness, introducing another potential headache in the reforming Wizengamot, organizing the surviving guerilla groups in England . . . Lots of stuff in here.

Ahhh. Nippers is male. So much for romantic possibilities with Dobby (unless this is an elf-slash fic ;)

Katherine Summers posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2006 6:57am

yay! love this story!

BTW, just curious...i was wondering if u were gonna do anything special for HP's Birthday?

either way, can't wait till next month rolls around with the next installment!

Peter Clark posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2006 4:10am

You know, if you left an address you actually would get pizza and donuts? Internet orders to your door, even from here in England ^_^

thewisesirivanthes posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2006 2:37am

I can't wait until you start up the Wizengomet and shock those arrogant purebloods when Harry and his crew take their seats and the purebloods become the minority!

ilovekc posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2006 1:35am

Wow! Dumbledore is an evil little git...I can't wait for that to come to a head. I love Mad-Eye, always have, you write him so well also. Your military terms seem spot on, adds such a grand scale of realism to your work. I can't wait for more! Thanks for addrssing my question...I knew you still cared for the little people. :P

MichelleG posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2006 1:34am

Another great update. Yeah! I love the position you've given Moody and how everything is coming together. The Wizengamot worries me...I sense trouble. :-) I wonder what Harry's answer will be to Amelia's proposition. Please update soon???? I'm curious as to what happens next. Thanks for this update.