patrik svensson posted a comment on Wednesday 5th July 2006 7:30am

Great story,
keep up the good work.

aengus posted a comment on Tuesday 4th July 2006 10:33pm

I just have one question then a statemant.

Q: Are you ever going to kill Dumbledore or Voldemort?

I must say... This, and it's first part, are some of the best fanfics ever created. It had inspired many a budding author, like myself. And, even if some of us (Us being readers) don't review we still love your chapters and wait for them all impatient like.

Sorry about the spelling

Aengusneggbert@austin.rr.com

Jimbocous posted a comment on Tuesday 4th July 2006 12:22pm

Nice update!
"So, do we have a problem with Christians? Not if they are well seasoned and cooked right! "
Err, I think your Heinlein is showing. Might want to tuck that in ... or not ...

Lurk posted a comment on Tuesday 4th July 2006 4:26am

Oh, I like that flobberworm idea, though I'm not sure whether the weight would crush him first, or he would drown from choking on the resulting slime.

Great chapter guys!

I really enjoyed the way you figured out dealing with Hermione. If you've made a mistake, get a bit of shit about it, and don't do it again.

Loved the bit with stealing Draco's office. Draco keeps a toilet in his office? That's.....new.

Hmmmm, intriguing bit with the shields. Why are two shields impossible? Couldn't there be a very strong thick first shield, with a thin, smaller, but still strong inner shield, as a just in case?

Nice bit with Ollie. =^-^= Of course the twins would call him that. Very nice touch.

Keep it up!

unperfectwolf posted a comment on Tuesday 4th July 2006 3:11am

You guys never cease to amaze. This was a most enjoyable chapter. Thanks!

James13 posted a comment on Monday 3rd July 2006 10:56am

Hmm...a slow chapter, but I think, very important in the long run. You just set up a lot of threads to follow.

As for the idea of killing people and fighting, and not having mental scars, ha. Anyone out there a cop or police man? a soldier? Being shot at is SCARY. Shooting back is chaotic and everything is blurry except your target, and did I mention scary?

Someone once said, "Nothing is quite as invigorating as being shot and missed."

So true. After action, people do crazy stuff. If you take a life, well...most people aren't mentally set up to take a life and not feel anything. In fact the only people I know who DON'T feel remorse at taking another human's life are psychopaths. So if Harry and Hermionie are a bit too touchy feely, well, I can at least understand.

Cheers and good work with the story, by far the only Potter Story I've been drooling over lately :)

Foolhammer posted a comment on Monday 3rd July 2006 6:52am

Nice chapter, you two! Really loving this story, it's one of the most developed Voldie War II tales I've ever stumbled across- and your disclaimers and authors' notes are a hoot! Looking forward to more as soon as you can grind it out!

P.S.- I think the flobberworms would be a better fate for Evil!Dumbles than Harry. ;)

Ginger posted a comment on Monday 3rd July 2006 6:17am

I love the author note. They are getting to be as funny as the story. "Someone wants to know if we have a problem with Christians. Not in the least, they make excellent lion food and are great at BBQs. But seriously, from a Wizarding standpoint I would say YES! They would have a problem with Christians, especially the rabid brand we seem to grow here in the US. Eocho would have a major problem with these little suckers as they are directly responsible for the death of his culture. So, do we have a problem with Christians? Not if they are well seasoned and cooked right! (And for those whose sense of humor was surgically removed at birth, THIS IS A JOKE!)"
Wonderful

HermioneGreen posted a comment on Monday 3rd July 2006 3:36am

A most wonderful chapter. I'm glad harry is on the mend. I think it would be interessting if Harry and Hermione's handfast could be concluded sooner than the year and one day . . . that opens up avenues of possibilities that could either complicate their bond or strengthen it . . .

keep up the good work

'Mione

Voldemort is Dead posted a comment on Monday 3rd July 2006 3:16am

This is so good! I really wish you would update sooner. I often have to start over from the beginning, just to understand what the update is about!

Kathleen posted a comment on Sunday 2nd July 2006 12:10pm

Best moment in ages: OLLIE! :)

Great chapter. Keep it up, please!

rippergirl posted a comment on Sunday 2nd July 2006 10:17am

Great as always. Don't know what else to say but can't wait for the next chapter to be updated. Glad that they are coming out faster again but I didn't mind as long as they came out so that we could read them. Hope to hear a little bit more about Oliver's recovery. Hope the twins aren't too hard on him. Oh and great prank with the taking of Draco's office furniture and toilet. Reminded me of them promising Ginny that they would send her a toilet seat from Hogwart's.

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Sunday 2nd July 2006 8:08am

Great chapter again, and you are getting back to your old update timeline again(which I like). I can't wait see see the part when who ever you send to see Moody, it should be a great question and answer period you know CONSTANT VIGILANCE! and all that.

MPF

Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Sunday 2nd July 2006 4:08am

Well, at least they've realised why and how everybody screwed up. There still needs to be a way they can make sure they can reach Harry if needed. At the end of the day, he is the HMFIC which means he needs to be reachable, always. A great chapter, thank you. The bit with Moody and Dumbledore was entertaining, I think Albus has completely flushed any chance of ANY person looking up to him with any respect in the future.

Fozzie Bear posted a comment on Sunday 2nd July 2006 1:35am

Are we ever going to see the return f the 'Updateless List'?

Crys posted a comment on Saturday 1st July 2006 11:07pm

Good job explaining why each of the three was the culprit.

Liked Moody. Especially his kicking AD out of the house.

Good cameo for Oliver. Nice to see some of the secondary good guys are still around.

You're pairing up just about everyone, here. So does that mean Dobby will fall madly in love with Nippers? :)

Oh, and if you do visit (unmedicated) I'll be sure to prepare a proper welcome.

freakyfinger posted a comment on Saturday 1st July 2006 10:54pm

Maybe Moody can come train some aurors . . .good chapter!

Panaka posted a comment on Saturday 1st July 2006 10:45pm

I love this story. It's one of the few very well written stories that combine the muggle world with the magical and do it in a way that I can believe.

All characters are acting in character or close to it.

scott2 posted a comment on Saturday 1st July 2006 7:01pm

Liked it alot :) have to admit I am one of those who wanted hermione to get a smack around the ear but that is mostly because she was acting (to my thoughts) a little OC in the jumping to conclusions and actions, then agian I like godlike harry who can do no wrong or Azkaban harry with idiotic hypicritical friends/family, hermione included.

As such my only complaint is that you make them seem human with human imperfections and reactions (waggles finger at authors) shame on you for not having 2 dimensional characters with the emotional range of a...ron :)

As always great chapter and hope for more soon (pause) like now! (pause) how about now! (pause)no?

Well whenever you get around to it :)

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 1st July 2006 4:52pm

Thank you so much for this chapter. I really like the fact that Harry and Hermione are growing up! It is about time. I can really appreciate the fact that they are telepathic to the point that they can discuss things like Harry's anger and actually do some healing and growing in their understanding of each other. I know in war their are mistakes made on both sides and people no one wants to lose are lost. The bad guys are playing for keeps. If the good guys don't do the same they are going the same direction with the bad guys. (Down that road in that hand basket!) It isn't something anyone wants to hear. Like the reporter that reacted in a racist manner about killing pure blood death eaters, this is war and if we don't fight to win the other side will! I think it is great Harry is going to entertain the goblins. I really hope he takes Moody seriously. He would be a great ally. I can see why they are being caucious though. Moody would be proud! "Constance Vigilance!"
I am really enjoying this story. Please keep up the good work. Pay no attention to the people that gripe. I am really thankful you update as often as you do. Take as many chapters as you want to complete this story. The more you write the more entertainment I receive from your efforts. I understand that long chapters take a while to write. Of course when I read a story that is fast moving and something new and exciting is just around the next bend I want the rest of the story ASAP. In reallity I am just so glad that you choose to write and share these great stories with us over the internet. All I can do is tell you how much I like your stories and encourage you to write as often as you can. Thanks again for your efforts. They are really appreciated! pms