Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Friday 10th March 2006 9:22pm

Brilliant chapter. The scene with Luna and Hermione discussing Dementors towards the begining was brilliant. The battle was up to your normal standards (excellent). Everything just was a joy to read in this chapter, thank you.

Fozzie Bear posted a comment on Friday 10th March 2006 9:09pm

LOL... Rhiane Raine just updated! Your Updateless List seems to be working! ^o^

The fic was good as usual and I'm looking forward to seeing what Luna discovers!

I agree with other reviewers on Mad Eye...where the heck is he??

Well Off to read some more! Wakka-Wakka!

--Fozzie Bear

Bobmin356 replied:

She's updated? Not on Fanfiction.net she hasn't. Perhaps you'd care to share a url? :)

Mickey posted a comment on Friday 10th March 2006 9:00pm

Very nice chapter, I liked Dumbeldore using non magical means to hide himself and the battle sceneswere great.

A couple of sugestions for your updateless list:

Hogwarts Apprentices I: Gentry Green
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1551751/1/

The Mirror of Maybe
http://www.greyblue.net/MidnightBlue/Mirror/default.htm
(yes, it is a Harry/Snape story but a plausabile one something I would have bet is impossible before reading this. Most of the changes to Harry which make it a plausabile relationship occur 'off camera' although they are mentioned so it might be almost more acurate to call it a Snape/OC story.

ridmania posted a comment on Friday 10th March 2006 7:15pm

good god, what a awesome chapter like always!!!!! keep up the great work you bloody legend and i hope he next chapter comes out soon and is even better than this one!!!!

shlager_5321 posted a comment on Friday 10th March 2006 7:02pm

hey great chapter again as usuall
but i have a question that i have already asked at least two times and for some reason you chose not to answer it.
what happened to Mad-Eye after the fall of britain?? - i dont think that he was captured so where did he go??
answer soon

Davideg posted a comment on Friday 10th March 2006 6:45pm

i loved this chapter it was fantastic please keep up the great work

AcceleratedGlass posted a comment on Friday 10th March 2006 6:04pm

good chapter update soon

fashizzlism posted a comment on Friday 10th March 2006 6:00pm

i must say, love the chapter... i was getting worried when you hadnt updated... sorry about the bite btw... i tryed to find the answer on your Yahoo group... but since there are like 100 new message on that a day! i gave up....

Love this chapter, i was really hoping that dumbledore would throw his guts.. by hey cant have everything in life :P... personaly i dont see harry being fooled by DD, in fact i dont see any of the inner circle being fool by DD if they happen to pass him by... i hope charile dose not do anything to stupid and sometimes i feel like bashing him over the head with a shovel.... the dragon dung fumes must have messed with his brain :)

Congrats and update soon!

Luke

darktail posted a comment on Friday 10th March 2006 5:56pm

Molly's definitely dead...? :|
Oh bugger, I was hoping she was Snape's Slave, what a twist it would have been... :/
Oh well, other than that, I just loved this chapter, especially the scene at Washington D.C., I just cracked up after reading it. XD
Keep up the good work, bye. :)

M2 posted a comment on Friday 10th March 2006 5:36pm

Love it! Keep going! I'm literally on the edge of my seat here. I've been at the computer for so long my mates will think I've died or something.

Seriously, this is a fantastic fic and you've really done youreselves proud. Congratulations!

Best wishes,
Ginger Hobbit

AzureSky posted a comment on Friday 10th March 2006 4:51pm

Nice chapter.

Pwn Master Paladin posted a comment on Friday 10th March 2006 4:11pm

Once again I am very pleasesd to see this story out, and much distressed to here about the bite. The damn things always hurt, but what can you do?

Anyway...Great chapter, as usual. I try not to be too over flattering in my reviews, but I acn not help it sometimes, such as this story. ITS BLOODY BRILLIANT!

On another nte, I am plannig a story that would greatly benefit from having a Brotherhood much like the Brotherhood of druidic Knights, and with your permission (and obvious credit in the disclaimer when I start it) I would like to borrow the idea.

Peace and Out,

Pwn Master Paladin

Dreyd.Faer posted a comment on Friday 10th March 2006 4:06pm

Although I've been registered and reading for quite some time, this is my first review. Sorry! It has much to do with why I haven't updated Cleansed Power too (long story, not a good excuse anyway)

Most likely the greatest thing I admire about your writing is that you do it together. Even if your story were horrible, that part would warm my heart.

Overall, the plot strikes at the mind, the perfect renditions of our favorite (or hated) characters strikes the soul, and the post-chapter wit strikes the funny bone.

It is truly enjoyable to read a piece of fan fiction that no longer fits what my mind can consider a fan fiction, and shows just what the English language can achieve.

(And I swear to you! My fic shall be updated! I'm actually timing it to the public release of a wonderful new fic site now. If you like, I'll post the link, but I wouldn't presume to do so without your guys' okay.)

Dreyd.Faer ~ Doreedo

agent fisher posted a comment on Friday 10th March 2006 3:49pm

Very nice. I see you had the same idea I had when it came to american wizards and their military. Give them guns that shoot curses. Of course, in my story, there are alot more guns and such. And most are muggle guns. But still! I salute you.

kittykatluver posted a comment on Friday 10th March 2006 3:29pm

HA! 1:30 IN THE MORNING, AND I'M THE FIRST REVIEWER!! YEAH, BABY! GO SPLEENS!!!!

kittykatluver posted a comment on Friday 10th March 2006 3:28pm

(Hands you a ginormous cupcake) Why thank you! I love cupcakes. I'm glad you actually read read your reviews. You know, some authors will ignore most of them.
Can you believe Abraxan's Time of Destiny is over? (Sob) I feel so depressed! (Glares at miscellaneous book on shelf)
Here's an idea for another disclaimer: Overdose him on allergy pills. And Viagra.

Erik Wiggins posted a comment on Thursday 9th March 2006 2:02pm

God, I love your stuff! Just please dome a favor, almost every story I've read (Probably about 15 after Dumbledore's Army and it's Sequel) have yet to do the battle between Harry and Voldemort justice. I have been surprised to read these stories that the authors have spent so much time on, only to spend a paragraph or two on the actual battle - please this is such a good story- Make the battle Epic! You guys can easily do it! -Erik

jackstraw posted a comment on Saturday 4th March 2006 12:23am

This is my first review after reading all of Sunset and this much of Sunrise. The story has really been wonderful (I love Super!Harry and H/Hr), but the pace is starting to bog down in all the preparations for war. Though the detail is great, there have been seven chapters of preparation. It is time for Harry and crew to go on the offensive! Keep up the great work!

Schokki posted a comment on Friday 3rd March 2006 7:14pm

By the way, I know a story which is worth to be a part of your updateless list (in my opinion)!^^

So if you're interested take a look at this story: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1155341/1/

It's called "An Alternate Adventure: Goblet of Fire". It's well-written, but the author hasn't updated for nearly 2 years! -.-"""

You don't have to like it, it's only a proposal!^-^

So keep up the great work! =o)

So long,
Schokki

Schokki posted a comment on Friday 3rd March 2006 6:58pm

Argh!!!!

Bloody cliffhanger!!!!!! -.-"""" ;-)

But a great chapter!^^