By Bobmin
Reviews
Oldwolf posted a comment on Thursday 12th January 2006 5:21pm
I actually feel quite sorry for Charlie. By the time he realises just how badly he's screwed up it's going to be too late. I am honestly expecting him to try and slip Harry some of the <I>Liquid Imperio</I> which he may or may not live to regret depending entirely on how quickly he talkes and explains the whole idea was Idiot-dore's.
On a different note, I'm glad to see Arthur is starting to get over Molly and develope other interests.
Whatever power Ginny is developeing, I hope she learns to trust soon for the sake of all Haven.
As for Dumbledore, serious question, is he a fugitive from the British Ministry in Exile or is he still regarded mostly as an interfiring pain in the rump? Because his best chance of meeting Harry is when the drop the charm hiding Haven. However, if he is considered a fugitive, as is fitting considering the list of things he allowed to happen to Harry that they should still have evidence of, as soon as he shows his face, he is going to be arrested. Even if, by some mircicle, he escapes Harry will be aware that he is in the country which should ensure the meddling old man isn't free for overly long.
beauty01021 posted a comment on Wednesday 11th January 2006 4:14am
yeah great chapter can't wait for chapter 5.
jalva200 posted a comment on Monday 9th January 2006 3:51pm
:D man you guys (and girl) are awsome writers and i cant wait till you post another chapter.
Hehehe i love that part with the orge and draco, that was funny. God id of pissed my pants if i saw that thing.
Well thanks for the story you are writing and i cant wait for your nect chapter.
Oh and i was just woundering if molly is still alive. You probly not going to say but still asking :p
Snapesmistress005 posted a comment on Monday 9th January 2006 8:54am
wow! i really liked the ceremony, good stuff that! i liked the little look into draco/luna and neville/ginny. they bring an interesting dyanmic in. i also can't wait to see how dumbledore reacts when they lift the fidelius (spelling?) charm off of haven. great job guys and i can't wait to see more! much love!
Manatheron posted a comment on Sunday 8th January 2006 2:27pm
Excellent chapter, as always. I can't wait to see where you take this, I am especally interested in what Charlie is going to do once he manages to talk to Harry. I would think that something like liquid Imperius would leave a visable effect, Glazed eyes, Trouble focusing, things like that, also There is the possibiliy that the ritual has left the entire group immune to mind altering spells, I really don't know what you have planned, but it's going to be really fun reading the next couple of chapters,
Please keep up the excellent work!
Michael69 posted a comment on Sunday 8th January 2006 1:44pm
Wait...if everyone else seems to be fixed...isn't there anything Muinteoir can do for Harry's leg? Or his scars?
Zytka posted a comment on Sunday 8th January 2006 9:14am
i'm very glad i found you guys again. i like your stories and i'd go on and on again gushing about your stories but i say basically the same thing every time. i think you're very GOOD authors and that your stories ROCK , but should i say more i'd be repeating. so i shan't. update soon, PLEASE, i'm sucked in.. . .
Zytka
Foreverread posted a comment on Saturday 7th January 2006 9:52am
Your story just keeps getting better and better. Keep up the good work. An idea for a pet peeve might be how some authors are always misspelling think like the house names, and I've even read one story where they misspelled hogwarts, repeatedly. Keep up the good work, it is appreciated.
Jarrod posted a comment on Friday 6th January 2006 1:07am
Woot, we finally get to see the Brotherhood in action.
Maybe I missed it but why is it that Charlie is looking so hard for Molly and Ron and not going to meet up and talk with the rest of his family right away? I'm really curious to see how the whole Charlie story arch pulls out.
Keep it Up you two, gotta love long stories that rock!
atlantis-rob posted a comment on Thursday 5th January 2006 6:18am
Wow! Awesome! Great job with the ceremony for sure! Excellent job on the whole thing, the cure for remus, the magic changes etc. Also very amusing that dan appears to be an enchanter now also. Damn dumbledore and kudos on Peeves! That was great! Excellent job with hermione's help to harry on the naked-ness. excellent job there...
atlantis-rob posted a comment on Thursday 5th January 2006 5:54am
Oh man what a thing to do to harry with Hermione's running off! Jeez! Great job with the setup of both rituals...damn greezy snape and stupid charlie...I am curious who got him, but I have a few candidates. Excellent job on harry's talk with the goblins and authur's talk with the widow! Cheers!
atlantis-rob posted a comment on Thursday 5th January 2006 5:41am
Wow! Great chapter as usual. I loved the bit with winky bonding to hermione...excellent bit of work there. Damn that dumbledore and his dumb ideas. Excellent job on the rescues also!
Chris Carter posted a comment on Wednesday 4th January 2006 3:01pm
For the most part I've really enjoyed reading this story and also 'sunset'. I like the humor you put in the story (not to mention the disclaimers, I loved the reference to dogma), your characterizations are good, and in general I like the new characters you've added. But did Harry and Hermione really need MORE powers/abilities? I mean Hermione was already supposed to be a stronger than average witch (also the brightest of her age), then the first ritual was supposed to boost her power by fifty percent, then the coven ritual gave her another boost, not to mention that she also inherited seer powers, the girl's averaging a power increasing ritual about every ten chapters. Harry can already do just about everything short of flash boiling oceans by cicking his heels, I'm afraid he's going to start changing in phonebooths and spending his fortune on building a fortress of solitude. Maybe I'm wrong but I thought in 'sunset' that during a talk about the prophecy that LV would take England, Remus told Flitwick that Harry and Voldemort couldn't fight yet because the conditions of Trelawney's prophecy hadn't been met because they weren't equals because Harry was so far ahead of LV, and so LV had to catch up? If that's the case another power/ability boost would seem to push a final confrontation back that much further.
Jamie46 posted a comment on Wednesday 4th January 2006 1:27pm
Really, really good. As usual. :) I caught a few typos, but I only point it out because my friend got irritated with me because she says I subconsciously edit *everything* and when I found myself doing that in your story, I nearly banged my head (a la House Elf style), thinking "dangit"... But I shouldn`t rant. ;) hahaha. Anyway. Good stuff with Charlie and Dumbledore; I feel bad for the poor red-head, he`s going to be led so astray and used (i.e. DD wanting Harry`s 4000 people `following him`). And I have a question that`s been bugging me for *months*: what is the proper way to spell out the Unforgivables when spoken as words, not as incantations? I`ve seen the `loss of free will` one written both as `the Imperious` (all italics), as `the Imperius`, and as `the Imperio-us` (with the `us` not being in italics. Is there anywhere that this could be checked? A lexicon of spells or anything? It`s really bugging the heck out of me... But it didn`t stop me from enjoying your chapter!! :-D hehehe, thanks a bunch for such a wonderful update!
Tildessmoo posted a comment on Wednesday 4th January 2006 7:14am
"How can we have notes when it's a new story?"
Well, technically it's not a new story, but a dilineation within a larger story. Besides, you had notes on the first chapter of Sunset.
Gawl posted a comment on Wednesday 4th January 2006 5:46am
Great chapter, I liked the summoning, and I'm looking foward to seeing what happens when Dumbledore finally confonts Harry.
shadowmist posted a comment on Wednesday 4th January 2006 5:14am
You know, i question Charlie's logic in choosing to go to britain before going to Harry. Didn't Ginny send a letter to Charlie? Thus, wouldn't Charlie go to a place where he knew people were? Even if he thought they wouldn't help him find his mother, he would most likely think that having a safe place to start looking for his mother to be more logical than jumping into a location known to be taken over by death eaters. Would i be incorrect if i guess that the reason you didn't have charlie do such was because you wanted him with Dumbledore? If so, i think that perhaps Dumbledore should've written a letter of sorts to get Charlie over there? It would make more sense...
Anyways, I love this story a lot although the opening disclaimer things tend to feature unknown people (and i'm too lazy to google search) and the sexual things are a bit oddly placed. Anyways way, this story rocks and i hope you update soon and stuff.
freakyfinger posted a comment on Wednesday 4th January 2006 1:18am
To what extent can Remus control his were-animagus? Is it just that he can change form at will, or that when he does transform, he won't need a wolfsbane potion to have rational thoughts?
noylj posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd January 2006 3:20pm
Great story, but the circle scene was not very descriptive. Why waste nudity if you aren't going to describe anything?
Please keep the chapters rolling. So far, you are the best writers in terms of good story and reliable updates.
Robert Hope posted a comment on Thursday 12th January 2006 5:33pm