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TeoLumos posted a comment on Sunday 11th March 2007 6:09am

Hello, excellent chapter, as usual, even though I am one of those silent readers who nearly never review ...
But my thoughts are with you :)

Just a remark, you have a simili-blopper in here with an "it" twice present :

"Would you explain to this court the purpose of that mission as it was described it to you?""

It never hurts to polish a bit more an already shining gem :D

And should I mention that I strongly protest against the treatment of my native country ? France is not *that* corrupted ... although that could explain why I'm in Canada :D

Good luck and thanks for the entertainment you provide !

Teo.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Thursday 8th March 2007 10:56am

Outstanding, time to kick some ass.

gunny

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Thursday 8th March 2007 5:12am

Very good.

gunny

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 7th March 2007 11:36pm

Very good chapter to an outstanding story.

gunny

o.T posted a comment on Wednesday 7th March 2007 12:28pm

I have some nice liquid lovan that I made up, tastes like paper but it has all the lethal amounts of anti-depressant. YAY!

On another note, with the spell that Harry uses to stiffen his leg and warm it, can he use that on another part of his body? I mean it would be beneficial in the sack..

Also, will there ever be another full smut scene between the main Characters? We always get cut off before the good bits, or any of their bits. MORE BITS!

digeediva posted a comment on Wednesday 7th March 2007 10:02am

Excellent chapter as always. This chapter had me wishing for more on the subject of religion. Alim's conversation with Harry about God was truly moving. I actually paused and thought about that myself, it was so good. It would have been nice to see Harry go to service with Hermione et.al. If anything, to see if Harry can rationalize what God is to him (or if he even believes in God).

The rest of the chapter is putting me in mourning because it seems that the end is nigh (sad sigh). Hopefully we get to see Arthur get married (maybe the twins too).

As to your medical news Bob, I am sorry to hear about it. My family, as well lives with a chronic condition (my daughter, though not diabetic) so I can relate to the stress it causes. As a bit of unsolicited advice, If you're still on injections, you might want to try the BD Ultra-Fine II 30 gauge syringes (that's if your doc didn't RX them). The needles are super thin and quite short that cause very little to no bruising or bleeding. That's what my kid was using til her doc switched her to the pen (but still uses a 30g ultra short needle).

If you're on pills now, that's great! Just eat healthy and listen to what Alyx says! BTW, the sugar-free cookies and cakes at Wally World (Wal-Mart hehe) are actually very good (no cardboard taste).

Take care Bob and Alyx and as always, impatiently waiting for the next chapter.

Digeediva

Alex00 posted a comment on Tuesday 6th March 2007 12:26pm

Good work.

DizzyG posted a comment on Tuesday 6th March 2007 12:12pm

Sweet! Coming up to the big fight.

One scene we are still missing though - when and why exactly did Fawkes leave Dumbledore?

Apart from that, carry on!

knightsbridge posted a comment on Monday 5th March 2007 12:14pm

"God Is." In the troubling times our world is going through, I really hope those that should read that explanation did so. I realise that's not WHY your wrote it as you did. I'm a Brit and born and raised CofE (or Roman Catholic Lite, if you prefer)and watch as sects pervert their own religion to suit their own needs, not realising that "God Is."
I have no idea what JKR has in mind for #7, but I agree Snape is all for what will keep him breathing. He was due a dirt nap...thanks. I never cared for Cho either, but doubt she was the villian other authors make her out to be.

ladyimmortal posted a comment on Monday 5th March 2007 11:32am

As usual - fantastic!

I commend thee, dear writers, on a well-crafted and well-paced chapter.

Oh - the scene with Peeves and his 'brothers?' - I was laughing so hard I could barely breathe. I blame you if my asthma acts up. And then I blame my computer - but I refuse to blame myself. That would just not be proper... (heh heh)

(more tears in eyes as she recalls the Peeves scene)

I'm so ready for this battle to happen! You're building up the suspense nicely (damnit, lol!).

So, what are the chances my asthma is going to act up again the next chapter? <GGG>

--Lady I - going to hunt for her inhaler...

Joyce Caldwell posted a comment on Monday 5th March 2007 4:58am

Crose: I'm sorry, but I'm one of those people that truly dislikes Snape. In my mind, even in canon, Snape works for Snape.

I am so glad somebidy besides me recognises this.

Love the story, but I usually don't read the disclamer. Just a little too bloodthirsty for me.

Joyce

Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Monday 5th March 2007 2:01am

I like the outhouses. An almost interresting fact, outhouses used to have the moon symbol if they were for women and a star for men, but the men't outhouses were usually in such bad disrepair that everyone wanted to use the ones with the moon on the door. Eventually they just stopped designating men's and women's in that way.

Small correction:

"Normally, I would agree. But your hand is trembling a bit too much for my peace of mine. I'd like to drink my wine, not wear it," she teased.



This should be mind.

Thank you for writing. This was an excellent chapter.

Mike (MoA)

uthamm posted a comment on Monday 5th March 2007 1:36am

*Laughs* You know, you would think that I would learn to read the reviews before I review, but hey, I *am* a slow learner - just laughing at the review talking about the *SOB* series. That is just . . priceless.

uthamm posted a comment on Monday 5th March 2007 1:34am

Good Chapter - Here it comes! I am glad that you have still been able to share this with us. I was sorry to hear about the health issues - Hope that it all works out for the best. The Susan/Terry interaction was good and I assume that there was a point to the double interaction but I haven't figured out what it is . . . or did you do that to throw us off? Is this an Easter thing? You both plan too well for this to be random, right? RIGHT? AARRGH! Well, here's hoping that my brain doesn't short out waiting for the update!

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Monday 5th March 2007 12:08am

Very excellently done, and looks like things are building to a climax soon. Harry's feelings at the final fate of Cho was rending, though it's nice that Hermione has grown as well, and she understands what Harry needs to keep going and do what he has to, while also helping him along as well. She's really changed a lot from Hogwarts, and has grown into the woman that she could become in canon, if JKR would let her. Looking forward to what happens next, and how this might go when things turn out right or wrong, and the final battle.

BJH posted a comment on Monday 5th March 2007 12:05am

Go ahead, kick the puppy! Kick its little nose in! Use steel-toed combat boots!
Kick it! KICK IT I SAY!

BJH

kainboa posted a comment on Sunday 4th March 2007 11:36pm

great chapter as always, can't wait to see the next one.
and here's some low everything, great tasting choc chip cookies just for you, you aren't allowed to share with yer wife :P

keep up the great work :)

Meg posted a comment on Sunday 4th March 2007 1:34pm

Excellent Chapter.

I've read this 2x in the last 2 days, and what keeps sticking for me is not the parts that I usually enjoy, but Harry's talk with Hermione about G-d.

I know y'all aren't trying to be preachy, but it struck home for me, being a "former" Catholic who still has beliefs and going though the death of my atheist fiance's mother, and having to comfort him.

He's not a fanfic reader, but if y'all don't mind, I might just C&P that whole section and email it to him. :)

So, thanks. A new one shot and a great chapter of SoB all in one week. Feeling spoiled here! I know, though, that we shouldn't look forward to any more of those non-SoB bunnies until SoB is over. But oh! The wait! :D I'm sad that the end of SoB seems so close now. Yeah, in spite of wanting another chapter NOW! ;)

Meg

jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Sunday 4th March 2007 10:06am

OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! I can't wait to see what happens next. As for the low carb, low cal, low everything but taste chocolate chip cookies I'm not sure on that one, I've never heard of anything like that. I hope that when Harry kills Voldemort that he dies via a very painfull method. Maybe you could kill him by a reductor curse to the shrivled up things he used to call testicles!!!! DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)

Donald McLeod posted a comment on Sunday 4th March 2007 8:56am

Good lets start the bang bang shoot em'up. Oh the blood and guts. Anyway I like you planning lay out for the big battle. Thank you for this fantastic story.