By Bobmin
Reviews
Dustin Johannes posted a comment on Sunday 4th March 2007 5:40am
Thanks for this great chapter you guys put out. I had been looking for it for a couple days, during which I found and read your ficlet you put up a couple days ago. In the meantime, I've been re-reading the entire SOB series, just to refresh my memory.
You guys are killing me. I really got a bang out of that 'Weasley Wizarding Wheezes Flaming Flatulence' potion. Had me flying high there with laughter.
Also to be noted is the passage of time in this chapter...nearly a full month. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and the nearing end of the story. So until then...
Dustin a.k.a. Dudeous1492
Crys posted a comment on Sunday 4th March 2007 4:18am
Good conversation on religion. Kind of an outsider's look, so to speak.
Probably repeating other reviewers, but: When Alim says, "You may not believe in him, but I think he believes in you," the "Him" and "He" should've been capitalized if you're following the standard capitalization rules.
> Peeves turned and rooted around in the box, finding two more potion bottles containing the same label.
*wince*
> Dustin, still pinned to the ceiling by the exhaust from his own personal rocket engine.
*deeper wince*
> The red headed weasel twins would be so proud! Peeves thought.
Now that's a laudable goal . . .
Gathering allies, it seems.
Now we know what happened to the Angels. And they're having kids, even.
[Crys rubs his hands gleefully] Okay, the next chapter look like it'll be the big one . . .
fountaam posted a comment on Sunday 4th March 2007 3:11am
Typos: a Catholic would be capitalized. catholic uncapped is an adjective like puritan beliefs.
He wanted to breath! breathe
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Enjoying seeing it coming together.
Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Sunday 4th March 2007 2:42am
Nice chapter, it's interesting to see things spooling up for the final battle. Great job, thank you.
shadowtrey posted a comment on Sunday 4th March 2007 2:13am
*chuckles* I'd been wondering when we'd come to Invasion: Hogwarts. I've been a silent reader of Sunset and Sunrise since y'all began, and I've spread the word to several people who enjoy your story too. All I've gotta say is that I can't wait to see Voldie's reaction to the recaptured Hogwarts.
Voldemort: WTF?!
Harry: j00 pwnd, f00.
Hee! Just... please, please, please, please, please don't kill Luna or Hermione at the end! Those two are my favorite characters, mainly due to how they handle thheir two men.
Anyway, loving the story as always!
~Trey
Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Sunday 4th March 2007 2:10am
Poor Susan but the bright side is she'll be able to keep sleeping with Terry for an extra 2 weeks. More please. Good chapter. I especially liked the scenes between the Angels and Dementors - I suspect Voldemort won't like it one bit.
es posted a comment on Sunday 4th March 2007 12:53am
Sends A Giant Chocolate Cake... and some granola ;)
DrT posted a comment on Sunday 4th March 2007 12:33am
Good chapter. Liked Peeves. Would write more, but as you suggested, increaded meds. . . .
"T"
Tabraiz Rasul posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2007 10:46pm
haey great chapter as always. this is one of the best harry poter stories i've read. looks to me like you are about done with the story so keep up the great work and post away. thanks for the wonderful story to pass away the boring time.
bratling posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2007 4:36pm
Bravo, bravo, more, more! I've just spent the last three days staying up far past my bedtime reading Sunrise and Sunset. I can't wait for the next chapter and hopefully soon, the downfall of MouldyFarts.
Princess Fictoria posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2007 3:33pm
Thank you so much for giving us, your faithful readers, another wonderful chapter in this incredible story. I love the way the battle plans are coming together and look forward to seeing just how well Harry's plans will work out now that Voldie is calling so many troops to Hogwarts for the 'Final Battle'.
I am sorry that you were unable to enjoy the virtual cookies that I sent you. I am even more sorry to hear about your stay in the hospital. Having just spent 8 days in the hospital with my brother, who was undergoing some rather important tests, I can honestly say that you never truly appreciate your home until you spend time in hospital. Please accept these flowers as a belated get well.
And for your snacking pleasure, I found these low carb, low fat, chocolate cookies. Hopefully you can enjoy them.
The Midnight Poster posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2007 2:51pm
Anther great chapter. Arthur's asking Melinda's to marry him had me in stitches!
bratling posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2007 1:37pm
Glad he's dead. Idiot deserved it.
Jim_xinu posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2007 1:13pm
Cool, the attack begins on my
B-day. :-)
Good chapter, thanks for sharing it with us.
noylj posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2007 1:01pm
Well, if we end up with Lucy and Moldie dead, you will have a near perfect story. Of course, to be perfect, you have to have Dray dye a particularly horrible way--but you have redeemed him and his death in your story would be sad.
Glad to see another chap out and glad to here you are on the mend. The thing is, I have yet to find anythink that is sugar free and tastes good that doesn't have a high fat content. Likewise, if it is low fat and tastes at all good, it has sugar in it. Splenda, as good as it is, just doesn't seem to be a winner except in iced tea.
Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2007 12:47pm
Another brilliant chapter! Things are really starting to heat up...makes it hard to wait for the next update!
Particle_Accelerator posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2007 12:36pm
Wow- this was an amazing chapter. The scene with the DE's in the dining hall was so funny I almost fell out of my chair laughing. I never expected THAT! Peeves and his brothers are a little, off aren't they? Even for poltergeists.
I am also really amazed at the amount of detail you're putting into the support forces for the Botherhood. It really gives the story some girth and staying power, all that attention to detail. Good job on getting Arthur to finally step up to the plate, as well as tackling the "spiritual issue" that had been hanging over Harry and Hermione's head. Very nice assessment of it all, actually. Now that
that topic has been addressed, and Voldemort's time looks to be coming to a sticky end, will everyone's favorite little bookworm start thinking about a family? I've liked how you've held off on that particularly well-used plot device, but I could see Hermione wanting to start a family rather soon after Voldie is dust. But maybe that's just me. Anyways, loved the chapter (as always, even if I don't review that often) and keep up all of the great work.
a_wanderer posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2007 11:35am
I am certain all virtual cookies have no transfats, cholesterol and all other such dangerous compounds. So you can eat virutally all you wish.
lbfan posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2007 9:57am
Wow, super-author. You outdone yourself again. Posting a new lengthy story and the wonderful chapter with-in days is worth merit.
Treat yourself a pizza and send the bill to me. :'
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beauty0102 posted a comment on Sunday 4th March 2007 6:15am