By Bobmin
Reviews
Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Tuesday 13th February 2007 10:58am
An excellent chapter, though I would think that Amelia would have a few choice words for Harry. She's on his side, and was apparently inclined to rule the way he wanted on the Dilly matter. His idea was a good one, but it wouldn't have hurt ot give her a heads up. The bit with Cho at the end was great, it was nice to see her stand up for herself and try to make things right, or as right as she could. The whole sequence from last chapter and this one with the counsel of Avalon was very well done, thank you.
rippergirl posted a comment on Tuesday 13th February 2007 10:49am
Yay.It's good to see that you listen to us readers. Now if you behave and get the next chapter out in a good amount of time I might be convinced to properly dispose of the voodoo dolls.(though I'm sure there are a few people out there who would like a bit of Bob and Alyx. Ebay here I come) Oops did I say that out loud? That was supposed to be a private thought. Anyways about the chappie. Awesome. Luv the blood and guts then it came to Snapie biting the big one. Good to see that the council survived and I hope that their plan for the french gov't will work. Hope old moldyshorts is permanently scarred. The painful burns will match his red eyes lovely. Anyways I will leave you alone, for now, and godspeed with the next chapter.
P.S.I'll send you something good to eat if you get it out soon.
CRose posted a comment on Tuesday 13th February 2007 10:47am
You know, I was kind of hoping that Snape would eventually reveal himself as a true spy for the light side. Someone willing to go that extra step to prove himself worth to the dark lord, only to betray him at the final second and injure the dark lord's forces almost fataly even as he died.
snaps fingers. so much for that. Heh
Cho Chang was a surprise though. Great Job with that.
I'm interested in seeing a bit of aftermath with the French though. Seeing if they really can take control of their government back. I have my doubts as they would probably have a plan in place in case something like this ever did happen. It has always been a possiblity. They were save so long as no one knew of them, but now, the game has changed and they'll have move fast to save themselves.
noylj posted a comment on Tuesday 13th February 2007 10:44am
More Amy! It's too bad, but if you kill Drake, he will die as a hero instead of the inbred idiot he really is.
Great couple of chaps.
Lurk posted a comment on Tuesday 13th February 2007 10:18am
Great chapter guys!
Hmmm....methinks Harry's getting a little too big for his britches here. I mean, okay, him planning to kidnap Dilly if something went wrong, fine, okay, that's Harry. Him loudly announcing it? Seems like something the old Draco Malfoy would have done. Too arrogant. ::shrugs:: But then again, everyone's entitled to be a little arrogant sometimes.
Nice to see Harry standing up for the French though! Yayness!
Keep it up!
John8 posted a comment on Tuesday 13th February 2007 10:17am
"Is it bad, isn't it?"
I beleive that should read "It is bad, isn't it?"
He getting dressed when Dobby reappeared
That one is just missing the 'was.'
Aside from those two points, I noticed no other Grammar issues.
I rather enjoyed this chapter, I am simultaneously happy and sad to see that the story is beginning to draw to a close. I look forward to seeing how it will all turn out, but I will miss reading new chapters of this every so often.
Fishburne posted a comment on Tuesday 13th February 2007 10:11am
fishnuts. booooooo.
FNORD is an excellent word, full of meaning.
One one hand it can mean "Boffo! Excellent use of imagery in uttering the phrase "Explosivio Castrado", whilst on the other it could simply be a ring made of porcelain with the words "Sherman made a mistake and passed through Atlanta on the way to Savanah, just to get a better quality of Mint Julep."
Also, I really dug the whole Elf kills Frenchy bit. It was really yummy.
Now figure out which half holds the brains and which half is just ass. :)
Fish
Listening to my daughters ipod is like aural sodomy...
Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Tuesday 13th February 2007 9:44am
Excellent chapter. Liked it! Loved it. Didn't want it to end.
Okay, my mind is blank or a more well rounded review, but I wanted to express my thanks for a great chapter.
Mike (MoA)
werewolph posted a comment on Tuesday 13th February 2007 9:42am
The Dancing Singing sheep? It might have been the sheep from the animated short movie on The Incredibles DVD, called Boundin'.
All the same, another great chapter that you two have procured from the depths of slightly warped, yet wonderful minds. Keep up the great work!
Crys posted a comment on Tuesday 13th February 2007 9:31am
Something occurred to me (laugh all you want, Bob. I know Alyx is too nice to laugh at me.)
Luna was 9 when her mother died. Her mother planned on having kids every 10 years. She could well have been pregnant when she died.
Don't know if that little factoid will become important or not, but that conversation between Cissy and Bertrand is a little too pointed for the information not to be used later in the story.
seishi posted a comment on Tuesday 13th February 2007 9:26am
AHHH! You killed Snape!! Fantastic chapter! Glad to see the French get what they deserved!!
Oh, that reminds me, what is wrong with Orla Orke that has many authors use her as a victim? This is like the 5th story ive read where orla suffers greatly and dies a painful death. What do you see in her?
Erik Wiggins posted a comment on Tuesday 13th February 2007 8:45am
It's almost the end of the pay period and while I should be working right now, I find myself reading your latest chapter. Shame on you! You couldn't release it at 8:00 or 9:00 pm? Once again, great chapter. As much as I am looking forward to the Harry vs. Voldie, I don't want the story to end. What a vile, ugly, obscene piece of work Snape turned into. Thank you for finally killing him. I want to marry Luna, is that so wrong? Keep up the great work - Erik
Erin posted a comment on Tuesday 13th February 2007 8:24am
good update looking forward to the next.
Greg Johnson posted a comment on Tuesday 13th February 2007 8:23am
Another great chapter!! Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work.
freakyfinger posted a comment on Tuesday 13th February 2007 8:09am
Ya, that short on the DVD, its on the bonus disc of the Incredibles set.
Ya! Snape is finally dead . . . I was waiting for that greasy bas . . er . . git to die . . .
Duane E. Peters posted a comment on Tuesday 13th February 2007 8:03am
The short is called "Boundin'", and it's on Disc 2 of The Incredibles. Hope this helps. [grin]
Jenni posted a comment on Tuesday 13th February 2007 7:49am
Yay! Happy Dance for a new chapter. Good resolutions to pressing issues and continuing build up for the rest of the story!
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Tuesday 13th February 2007 7:18am
*chuckle* Now that was an interesting chapter. I did like Harry's intervention for the French people as opposed to their government. The whole situation with Dilly was quite enlightening, showing the development and maturing of English wizarding government.
Finally, I weep not for Snape, he made his choices and has to suffer from the consequences; that said consequences resulted in his death at the hands of an outraged "slave" is all to the good.
Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 13th February 2007 6:38am
This was a great chapter. I am so glad Harry is being himself and giving himself away as usual. (The scene where he says, "At least I don't have to kidnap her now." is perfect.)
Thank you so much for Snape's deserved ending. I was surprised it was Cho. That was a good added touch. I loved the way she royally pissed off Voldemort by taunting him with the solution to his problem and then eliminating his access to it! That was great! It is too bad people have to die but, "This is War!"
Thanks for writing and thank you for updating so consistently. pms
Rolaytaum posted a comment on Tuesday 13th February 2007 11:33am