Thomas posted a comment on Wednesday 20th December 2006 7:40pm

Thanks for the update, i just love this fic.

A merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!

Scott Sakraida posted a comment on Wednesday 20th December 2006 7:00pm

Great chapter, each chapter just keeps getting better and better. I check everyday just in case u wrote extra fast. Quick question, what drug were they given? Thanks.

vl100butch posted a comment on Wednesday 20th December 2006 6:27pm

One small nit---the Danish Jews were evacuated, not the Dutch.

seishi posted a comment on Wednesday 20th December 2006 5:41pm

Jeez!! A invasion of France? Normandy? Both of you must be clutching at straws, trying to keep us interested until the final assault, huh??? i betcha you are wishing you left Amahar, Ron or Dumbly alive, at least then we could have seen some fireworks!!
Overall a brill chap

James13 posted a comment on Wednesday 20th December 2006 5:32pm

All the varied ways for a man to die, and you shoot him. Somehow, it feels right, an ignomious death for a wretched man.


Excellent chapter, well paced, and I liked the bit about the emergency kit actually being useful.

LifeScientist posted a comment on Wednesday 20th December 2006 5:11pm

Nice job on this chapter, though its too bad that it seems you won't do your world the favor of doing in the French. Too bad. Other than this, a great job all-round.
MW

LifeScientist posted a comment on Wednesday 20th December 2006 5:10pm

matt

LordXander posted a comment on Wednesday 20th December 2006 4:47pm

Loved the chapter, don't change a thing, the plot is unfolding just fine. Anyone who believes otherwise... well... Let's not talk about them.

Oh, and Alyx, I think you should verify Bob's story about Vex and Miffs dropping the Dung Bombs into the toilet. You never know what your husband eats when you're not there!

beauty0102 posted a comment on Wednesday 20th December 2006 4:36pm

yeah great chapter can't wait for more so please update again and soon.

jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Wednesday 20th December 2006 4:26pm

Wow I loved every line of this update and I can't wait to see what happens next. Sorry to hear about your oral surgery Bob, next time don't eat the entire bag of rock candy at one time. Anyways I love the way you killed that scumbag De Lion, I'm glad that nobody got seriously hurt this chapter. I do however agree with Harry that Opperation Headshot would work the best in eliminating the stupid French goverment, maybe the US government should use that in the present day dealings with the french! Any chance on there being a huge battle soon with lots of the fun stuff aka lots and lots of blood and people dieing, I can't help myself I like it alot. DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)

mjc posted a comment on Wednesday 20th December 2006 4:00pm

Damn...not quite up to your usual. I mean a few red-shirt security guards and a lion turd! Sheesh! couldn't you have at least had a few of the plane's passengers get eaten by a shark or something?

Wait, there was the Muggle girl...but that is still only 8 max (you never said the detail was dead...).

Now, the only problem with Operation Headshot, is that Harry is going to be gunning for the wrong folks. But then again, he doesn't know about the Richelieu wannabes trying to run the show. He should do a deep probe on Roach-boy anyway and maybe drop a few time delayed Wheezes on the guy before sending him back...or worse (espeically if he picks out anything about the shadow government from Roach-boy).

Ltank687 posted a comment on Wednesday 20th December 2006 3:43pm

don't accelerate the plot! I love this story, the best there is in the world of fanfiction, and this is one of the last vestiges of good stories concerning Harry Potter. The others have already been written and hte well is drying up, but not for phenomenal writers such as yourselves.

Keep at your pace, enthrall us some more, and I eagerly await your next update!

~Nick

agent fisher posted a comment on Wednesday 20th December 2006 3:42pm

Once again the French balls it up to hell and gone. I'm with Harry. Execute Operation Headshot.

morriganscrow posted a comment on Wednesday 20th December 2006 3:31pm

Excellent!
I love the politics and the complexity of the plot. Extra Peeves are a good thing and the Lion got stuffed.
Keep up the great work, and happy, safe and fun holidays to you both and all your readers.

mekareami posted a comment on Wednesday 20th December 2006 3:22pm

I hope you guys have a great holiday. Thank you for the update and I look forward to the next as soon as the muse speaks.

Little Flower Princess posted a comment on Wednesday 20th December 2006 3:08pm

This was good but are all the girls pregnant or is it just Susan's cravings effecting them?

Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Wednesday 20th December 2006 3:04pm

Uh, Bob (I never blame Alyx if there is a potential mistake) you say that Metamorph's cannot change into anything but a human, but all that is changed on Tonks is her 'duck bill and feet', and she was able to change her nose to a pig's snout. Should this have said something more like her not being able to change that radically or...something?

Wow, you're making me paranoid. After the talk of the internal security's potential violence, and then switching to Ginny getting a massage that she was not expecting, I thought it was going to end violently. See, you're keeping us on our toes.

Ginny...really...is she supposed to be an idiot in this? I can't believe that she would be so gulible without a hex on her to take an oar on a trip to Paris, much less a ski pole and whatever else they told her to take. But then she proves to be brilliant with using the tools available to her to change a dangerous situation to her benefit. I just don't know. I guess that she is just too trusting of friends and family.

I loved this chapter. Great logical plots.

You speak of Harry not being the one to knock everyone of the bad guys off, but...he didn't get to kill Ron (good thing because he still remembers Ron when he was a friend), he didn't kill Dumbles (love that little lamb-like creature, what could be better, cute and deadly) and now another enemy has died in a inconsequential way. You seem to be denying the dignity of a final hard fought death in battle to all of your bad guys that have any signifigance. I'm just waiting for one of the bad guys to be bitch slapped to death while they are on the run, because they decided to distract themselves from their crumbling plans and misplaced loyalties by groping Zsa Zsa Gabor's rear end on 34th street in downtown New York City in front of the Macy's while the green outfitted highschool girls with gingle bells on their pointed, upturned slippers try to lure children to sit on Santa's lap inside the overpriced store, thus draggin their parents in where the children will see all of the prominently displayed electronic games and toys and bug mommy and daddy for this or that new, hot thing.

Thanks for writing.

Mike (MoA)

JDD posted a comment on Wednesday 20th December 2006 2:40pm

love the story. you have, once again, taken the magnitude of Robert Jordan and coupled it with the genius of JK rowling. And what you have is Bobmin. Freaking awesome, and i love the way that you killed amhar, a man like that should die unnoticed by everyone.

Locathah posted a comment on Wednesday 20th December 2006 2:15pm

I was just reading your comments at the bottom about someone getting through the wards because they didn't "think" they were evil wether they actually are or aren't.

The problem with this concept is that I highly doubt that many evil people actually think they are evil... some of your more sadistic death eaters might but that's really an extreme case and many of them probably think they're just fighting back against the evil muggles who's influence is degrading wizarding heritage.

O.k. I don't buy that one either but I'm sure many of the pureblood raised sons and daughters in the death eater corps are brainwashed to believe they're following a righteous cause... most have to be able to justify their actions to themselves as perfectly rational and acceptable or they'd be doing somethign else.

I can't help but think that any ward which based its discrimination on the subject's own perception would be useless.

I'd been assuming that all your wards were based on more fundamental things like what they'd actually done, an actual taint left behind by their actions perhaps. Actual evil rather than perceived evil.

rippergirl posted a comment on Wednesday 20th December 2006 1:59pm

Yeah that bastard finally got what he deserved. Died by a mugggle weapon and almost stone cold poor. How the rich can fall when they suck. Love that Peeves has his brothers around. Can't wait to see the tag team in action again at Hogwart's. I want to see what is going to happen with the situation in France as well but I guess I will just have to wait until next year. Aww man. JK. Have a awesome Christmas with your friends and family and HAPPY CHRISMAKWANZAAKUH!! to all!