By Bobmin
Reviews
MasterKtulu posted a comment on Tuesday 14th November 2006 7:44am
Okay! Okay… Relax… Just relax Bob… There’s no need to start ending chapters in cliffhangers just because you want something… I get it… I’m cool man… You want all the people who don’t usualy write reviews (Like me) to start communicating with you more, fulfilling that deep longing inside of you. But are you sure that’s what you really want? Or better yet, need? Yeah? You’re sure? Well all right, don’t say you weren’t warned… Here I go… One review coming up…
I mean it… I’m gonna do it… This your last chance Bob… Once it’s done, that it… There won’t be any going back… Alright then, without further ado, here is my review for Sunrise Over Britain, Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters : Great chapter, update soon.
I wish I hadn’t had to do that Bob… But you left me with no other choice… Now maybe you’ll think of the consequences before doing another Cliffy…
scwhitehouse posted a comment on Tuesday 14th November 2006 4:17am
Both this story and its predecessor are some of the best fanfic I've read. Keep up the good work!
Helen posted a comment on Monday 13th November 2006 8:45am
I got lost some time ago and just tonight got caught up. I really love your stories and can not wait for an update. I undestand killing Dumbledore, but McGonagall????? WHY OH WHY did it have to be her??? That is only going to piss Harry off, but then you are the writers, so you know it will. Can't wait for an update!!!!!! Hope it is soon... Can't stand the suspense!! Sorry about the typo's but I have been sick and brain is foggy!!
Helen, or as my friend BJ calls me, Dexi!
chris13 posted a comment on Monday 13th November 2006 1:08am
hey Bob & Alyx, i dont normaly review every chapter, but your crack about teh Metatron was bloody brilliant! Rickman is much better as the voice of the lord than that greisy git snape. Another FANTASTIC chapter, cant wait to get further into your story!
Star_Ranger4 posted a comment on Sunday 12th November 2006 11:23am
Ah, but Bob... Silence is a good thing. It means we are chewing mightly upon your latest course and are content.
Its when we get whiny you should start worrying.
shelley posted a comment on Sunday 12th November 2006 10:23am
I love your story and the authors' notes are hysterical. Poor Alyx! Will she ever win an argument?
I was so glad to see Ahmar get taken down a peg or two.
Here's a suggestion for your blooper notes,
"Harry spoke again in parseltongue and a set of spiral stairs pooped out of the sides of the wall".
Sounds stinky!
Harry Potter and the Fulfilled Prophecies. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3183619/9/
la13 posted a comment on Sunday 12th November 2006 9:12am
another awesome chapter! i was so glad to see that the Wizengamot is stalled...if only temporarily. you've definitely got me on edge about the hogwarts student, so i can't wait to see how that plays out.
Donald McLeod posted a comment on Sunday 12th November 2006 6:16am
Good!!
AcceleratedGlass posted a comment on Sunday 12th November 2006 4:40am
good chapter update soon
Kari posted a comment on Sunday 12th November 2006 12:16am
Blooper to share!
It made me giggle.
=)
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2463285/9/
It's called First Comes Marriage, Then Love
"Hermione shivered in the cold night air and Fred put an arm around her shoulders. She looked up at him and smiled. Only he could make her feel worm just by placing an arm around her."
Can't wait for the next chapter! Woot!
-kari lou
Sophophobia posted a comment on Saturday 11th November 2006 10:14pm
Evil....
Update soon(please) or I will be forced to use...dramatic music... the Pickle of Doom! (dun dun dun!) woman screams
By the way, I like the story. :) It only took me forever to get around to reading it, though....
Ta,
Sopho
LoggingInSucksAss posted a comment on Saturday 11th November 2006 1:23am
Burger off
Berger off
Bagger off
Hasselhoff?
blind-phoenix posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 5:29pm
you know, there is one thing that irritates me no end.
and that is the misspelling of Voldemort.
I've seen 'voldmort', 'voldimort', 'voldermort', 'voldemont', and by no means least, 'Voldermont'.
I'm not the greatest of spellers but my screen reader has a hell of a time with these pronunciations. I just wish people would learn to spell Voldemort first.
great chapter as always guys, oh and the burgger off blooper? I submit the author was a might peckish, and wasn't keeping his/her mind on the fic at the time.
either that, or the burger they'd had was slightly old.
pjedge posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 1:11pm
I am glad to have the opportunity to tell you both how much I enjoy your writing. I am a 58 year old woman and have only recently been introduced to "fan fiction". My son had been begging me to read some and recommended your stories as ones I would enjoy. He was indeed correct. I find your work innovative and wonderfully creative. Your plot line is well thought out and your characters have depth. I especially enjoy your sense of humor as shown in the disclaimer and the authors' notes. Thank you for giving me pleasure. I will just sign off with my old D&D character name - Dreamdancer.
Joe Ritter posted a comment on Thursday 9th November 2006 11:52pm
You're EVIL! Obviously I had to say this. It's in the reviewer's handbook, "You must reply with, 'You're evil!' to any cliffie." Of course, that's not rule number one. Rule number one reads "Only review when you have something to REALLY whine about."
Anyway, as I'm a proponent of the critical counter-intuitive methodology, let me just say, This was one of the better chapters. But probably because you two slipped and forgot to hurt Harry in this one.
Anyway, ignore us whiners and continue to write your sick, sadistic and twisted visions. Of course, you know that's why we continue to read them.
Holly Snow posted a comment on Thursday 9th November 2006 2:27am
nice story
i thought i would wait until i had gotten the entire way through whats written before writing a review and just my luck thats the chapter you put a cliffy.
so neway thanx for an awesome story now please please please update
thanx Holly
Jenni posted a comment on Wednesday 8th November 2006 11:31pm
Amusing... a touch of silliness... well written... fast read this time out. still loving it.
Roy1 posted a comment on Wednesday 8th November 2006 2:17pm
OKAY , I will confess I have read each and every chapter of this and al previous stories you have written, but this (I think) will be the first review I have left. Sorry, but somehow Loved it please post soon, seems, well...a bit cheesy. Every chapter you have written have been incredible, I find myself going back and rereading chapters I have already read repeatedly.
The Characters are well thought out and very much multi-dimensional, I have read too many fics that are plastic and quite superficial. Scanning over areas that could have been developed more but to appease the whinging masses of Lemmings, rush the chapter to say "Look at how nice I am for keeping up and posting regularly".
I find myself agreeing with many reviewers in that there are a multitude of characters that I would like to see "removed" from existence. But I must say that I find it interesting that you have written "King Charles" as some one not only to be respected, but as having a spine of his own.
Okay last but certainly not least the standardized lemming chant of the masses, please post soon. While I understand that great work cannot be rushed, like many things, to be enjoyed one must wait for the wine to breathe for the best flavors and aromas to savor. I am looking forward to the next chapter, whenever it is ready for us mortals, and pleabian authors to read.
lelila posted a comment on Wednesday 8th November 2006 4:47am
ok, i thought i'd finally review to let u know i'm not a pod person. well, maybe i am. it's been a while since last i checked. i suppose it is a bit evil of me to have read all of the 'suns over britain' stories and not reviewed. blame it the evil pod person part of me.
what can i say but that i have no complaints. this is the 1st hp story where it's an actual war of britain, including the muggles, monarchy, racial issues, even the ghosts and the politics of it all. the detail into all those different facets r just great. the jumping around from point to point between characters gets to be a bit much but it's understandable as there r so many parts to a war.
the brotherhood was just inspired. it starts out as some odd comment and fate's basically like 'hey, that's a great idea!' gotta love situations like that. will more be said about hermione's clashing beliefs and the brotherhood beliefs?
i kind of like the fact that harry's leg bothers him. it truly sucks for him but it gives u a reminder that harry isn't all powerful and that he's still human.
i'm a harry and hermione shipper so i do hope that hermione is preggers. i'm evil, i know, but if susan caused a lil trouble, i can only imagine what hermione might do while pregnant. u keep hinting it that i imagine that the jokes will continue until finally she finds out she really is with child and no one believes her at first.
draco and luna together, completely crazy but it's crazy like a fox way. this is the 1st story i've read of their pairing and as odd as it is, i can almost believe it. i just like luna in general so if she's happy with it, that's all that matters. i like the way u explain her powers and ablities a lot. draco, well, he's been thru a bit of a change so it's ok that he's different but i like him.
though u didn't mention him in this chapter, it's nice to see neville with more confidence and harry showing a lot of support to him and vice versa. neville was indeed raised in the pureblood family withouth the prejudice so it's good that harry lets him take care of those politics. i like ginny with him.
i do hope that snape dies a terrible death.
i think that about covers everything. well, almost forgot there's 1 thing.
U LEFT A CLIFFY!!! HOW COULD U DO SUCH A HORRIBLE THINGS?!
*cough* *cough* yes, well, i hope u lot r happy now!
Dale Dietzman posted a comment on Wednesday 15th November 2006 4:08am