M. R. Moore posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 2:21pm

I started going to church for the first time a few weeks ago (Baptist, if it makes any real difference) and even as a quasi-agnostic I can see why those who are religious have a hard time excepting that others have different beliefs. My girlfriend (well, ex- now, apparently she hadn't known I wasn't christian) doesn't like it when religion comes up and I champion that my own view that all the gods that are worshipped here on earth might be the same being simply wearing a different mask for each occasion. Ok, soapbox time is over.

France... What will they do with France? I had this image of the French trying to take Harry and then hordes of fire-breathing camels stampeding through the streets of Paris, and their riders whooping like banshees. It made me smile.

So long, farewell, Auf wiedersehn, good night!

Aliwaheed posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 2:00pm

That cliffy was not funny at all, not funny, it was eh so i dont know what to say. Now we have to wait a week or more to find out what happened i did not expect this from you people. For this Bob i would like to slam this monitor on your head, in fact i think i should do that. Picks up the monitor and slams it on Bob's head, there, you look better like that, laughs watching Bob's head poking from the monitor, dont you think Alyx he looks cute like that.

The story is good though getting more interesting, although i wish you have not really killed Peeves.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 1:50pm

My, my, such a cliffie you left. Then again, it has been a while since you left one, hasn't it? 'Twould appear that things are heating up all over the place, though the French government appears to be following its standard norms.

*smile* I will admit to being overjoyed at seeing Harry let his Slytherin side out to play more; he really should do that more often.

Julian Kozinski posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 1:36pm

Love your guy's stories, even if I may have to trace your IP and in the middle of the night kill you in the most evil of ways.

Anyway on to pointing out why im making my first reply and that is because of your bloopers. Made me really laugh in the fact that,

The first plain is the plain of spirits, that's where you go after you die to be jugged.

You may have missed,

The first plain is the plain of spirits, that's where you go after you die to be jugged.

I dunno, I just wanted to post a reply but it had to have relevance :D well anyway keep up the great work.

Iain Neilson posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 1:06pm

Heh, loved the part about the King disarming Amhar. Harry's travelling is quite a good solution, perhaps it could become more mainstream? The killer of Haven is an interesting plot device. Poor Peeves, he was finally hit with an avada. I hope he pulls through.

Here's a blooper for your next chapter: Irises that help no pupils, just swirling reds, settled on pitch black sclera's.

http://www.ficwad.com/viewstory.php?sid=31505
Queens of Darkness, Ladies of Light, by Thalarian.

When I told a friend about it, he thought I said: viruses that held no pupils, just swirling reds, settled on pitch black sclera's. Which do you think is better?

Logan_MacLeod posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 12:56pm

YOu can not kill off McGonagal. She is one of my favorites. Please don't kill her. Other then that, excellent story I am enjoying it very much

freakyfinger posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 12:54pm

Good chapter. hehe . . I love the way Amhar got his 'rightful justice'!

lilchuckie posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 12:44pm

berger off!
flame on!
yeah, it's a good thing they got rid of the 5th member of the fantastic four... you know, the one who could control barbecue grills and talk to burgers.

yo bob and alyx! come closer so that i may give you a shiatzu ego massage.

story is great (and coming along nicely)
charcters ... shit, i love your charcters more then the ones in J.K.'s books.
and bob? thanx for the cliffie, you spaz.. i hate waiting.
and alyx? if that frying pan gets a lil' worn out i think my g/f has a chuck taylor all-star with +10 damage and + 4 waffleprint bruise you can use (size 9, but the smaller size cuts thru the air faster.. a frying pan is like swinging a fan)

got a question for you guys (if you dont mind me asking) where exactly are you guys located?
a state would be nice, but a city would be great.

if you want to reach me you can drop a line to "lilchuckie@hotmail.com"

thanks guys , keep up the good work (and all that trash)

morriganscrow posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 12:18pm

Wonderful chapter, EVIL CLIFFIE!!
I really do love this story, and am grateful for all your hard work. Please update again soon, so that I'm not forced to hunt you both down.

rippergirl posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 11:41am

Love it but hate the cliffy. As if you needed something to keep readers reading your story. Good to see Amhar getting some comeuppance finally. Hope Peeves is ok. Glad to see some more og him bugging old snakeface. Oh and my final words..."Badger Off!"

Arvin Betancourt posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 11:39am

One thing to say about revenge Bob

FLAMEEEE!!!!!

love story, keep updating

Lurk posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 10:47am

Brilliant chapter guys!

Let's see, CLIFFY?!?!?!? But...but...but, but what about us LOYAL reviewers!? Do we deserve to be tormented so?


....yeah. We do.

I had a lot more to say, but unfortunatly, I got distracted.

Oh yeah! I remember now! Good job with the twins and Arthur. It's not somethign pretty, but it's one of those things that just has to happen to flesh stuff out.

Poor Amy. Whatever did she do in her past life?

Keep itup!

kenny posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 10:43am

the both of you are awesome this chapter really rocked and grr i dislike cliffys but it happens

Graup posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 10:28am

Enjoyed the new chapter. I hated to see Minnie die however (tears).

Crys posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 10:11am

> Amy had returned from her latest adventure.
*sigh* Poor Amy . . .

Hmm. The ghosts are worried about Peeves (now there's a switch ;) But he winked at Malfoy . . .

> Dorothy, his new secretary.
*blink* *snicker* Um, did you ask Dorothy about borrowing her name before doing this?
*read more* Ah, she's a plant. Cool.

Hmm. I suspect that you just gave us enough hints as to the identity of Snape's mystery slave.

Ah, we finally blindsided Amhar! And the King PUBLICALLY stated he wasn't royalty. His influence just fell through the floor. Only thing I can see he can do anymore is direct, literal attacks. And that's downright suicidal. I'm sure you have something else planned, but nice to see him stomped on so hard. Oh, and I DID catch that Harry's now officially a military officer.

Fun story, indeed.

Dale Dietzman posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 10:03am

Hummm....

first plain is the plain of spirits

...must be a plane of very plain spirits, I imagine.

mastapsi posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 9:50am

The first plain is the plain of spirits, that's where you go after you die to be jugged.

Who am I to comment about being jugged. Just don't jug these authors too harshly.

Don't forget about planes and plains.

I for one would rather go to a diferent plane, rather than be stuck on a plain growing corn for all eternity.

Lon Huey posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 9:49am

From a lurking pod type person who doesn't review as often as he should, thank you. Good chapter. We now return you to your regularly scheduled lurkdom.

Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 9:20am

An outstanding chapter, Amhar has lost his position at the ministry and his financial backing, it should be interesting to see how he tries to make a pest of himself now. The bit with King Charles was quite entertaining, at least Hermione, while getting mad, let things play out before she would've blown up at Harry. An interesting evolution across the board, thank you.

Dustin Johannes posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 9:17am

Oh, no!! Not the cliffy!! Whatever shall we do??? Once again, a great chapter on the happenings in Haven. And I do hope that Peeves somehow survived. Hogwarts wouldn't be the same without him if he were truly gone.