By Bobmin
Reviews
seishi posted a comment on Saturday 16th September 2006 7:44am
Hey,
Brill Chapter, one of your best, id say! Cant wait for Dumbly and Harry to duke it out in Haven next chapter,
one question, shouldnt the wards around haven prevent dumbly from entering?
One final question,
Is this story only going to be a win win situation for the good guys? or are you going to plan some tragedy and some angst in later chapters? This story is going to be very predictable in future, if it is going to be like that. Why not have a mission that fails?
Bobmin356 replied:
Seishi,
Not all of the missions will be a success or have low casualty counts. However the Haven troops have the advantage of superiour training and that is going to show every time. The Death Eaters are not trained to fight as a cohesive unit and that will hurt them, badly.
Wards have ways of being circumvented. It's just a matter of knowing how. The ward around Britian has the added problem of being out to sea, which makes most methods of circumventing the ward useless.
Princess Fictoria posted a comment on Saturday 16th September 2006 7:34am
Fabulous chapter. I love how Narcissa and Remus were able to withstand Amhar's vendetta against them and came out of it with him losing more face than they. I see that our missing Council member returned... is he working for the correct side now?
Good job Harry on protecting the King. I am amazed that the muggle government is so thrilled that so many magical people were saved from England and yet the pureblood elitists treat the muggles as if they were barely a step up from a house-elf.
Anyway, I eagerly look forward to more.
Donald McLeod posted a comment on Saturday 16th September 2006 7:30am
Good chapter. Also I like your bloopers replay it's like watchind the movie endding out=takes from a Chinies Action hero movie star, but only with visual words. Once more you two write a very good story and thank you for letting me read it.
Lurk posted a comment on Saturday 16th September 2006 5:51am
w00! Great chapter guys! I'm assuming with the bloopers, you don't want all the ones with Hermioon, Hermeyeohnee, and the like. Too bad, I've read so many.
I love all the details in this! And I really love the interaction between the characters.
Dumbledore's REALLY scaring me now...that giggle reminds me of a guy (whose name I cannot remember) in a Sherlock Holme's story. It's just plain creepy.
Keep it up!
t_gebhardt posted a comment on Saturday 16th September 2006 5:28am
Dumbledore has 60 men and plans to take on Harry? Depending on when and where he attacks he might do some damage, but it is more likely that his attack will be a very short one, more so if the brotherhood is in the mix. I doubt that his "militia" will fight to the deaths, nor do they know who they are to go up against.
If he goes to Britain an tries to take on Voldy and his death munchers he might have a higher chance of success, but it would still be very slime.
Ronnie McMains posted a comment on Saturday 16th September 2006 4:30am
Good story as always. Question: Will Tommy-boy's attack on Harry run into Dumbles' attack on Harry and the two forces beat on each other until the Haven Aurors calmly walk over both of them? (snerk)
(Wanted: set of 150-plus-year-old marbles. Lost somewhere between 1945 and 1980. If found, please contact APWBD.)
So, will Largo be able to charge Amhar with treason; will Harry get to challenge him to a duel; or will he call Luna before the committee, say something really stupid, and wind up run through by a Crumple-Horned Snorkack? ^_^;
As to your blooper section; I highly agree. A good half-dozen stories on my ff.net favorite list need betaing badly. (Two particularly egregious cases come from the fact that the authors don't speak English as a first language; most of the rest are a result of bad punctuation or homophone abuse.)
Next on ffa.net: When Betas Attack!
Do please keep up the good work!
mathiasgranger posted a comment on Saturday 16th September 2006 4:20am
My apologies on that, I was so accustomed to replying through fanfiction and it wouldn't allow me to do so.
On to the chapter, I am guessing you got the idea of Largo from the Bond movies also. Harry saved the king, eh? Maybe he can ask old Chuck to change the saying to Harry save the king as a thank you. Just a thought.
Otherwise a very entertaining chapter, you squeezed a lot into it and pushed the story along nicely. Keep up the good work and update soon.
Matt
beauty0102 posted a comment on Saturday 16th September 2006 4:17am
yeah great chapter can't wait for more so please update again and soon.
theM posted a comment on Saturday 16th September 2006 3:40am
Here's another one for your bloopers... "Bare with me"... Really Bob, keep that sort of thing to Alyx :) Very nice chapter, a nice bit of rest after the mass action in the previous one - but things still keep happening.
Pete posted a comment on Friday 15th September 2006 9:22pm
Hehehehe. Ernst Stavro Blofeld makes it to the Potterverse. I love it. It's been forever since I read On Her Majesty's Secret Service. Tell me, Mr. Bond, does he have earlobes? :-)
Cheers, and keep up the great work,
Pete
seishi posted a comment on Thursday 14th September 2006 3:05pm
Hi,
Me again, third review in 2 weeks for this chapter. just sending you a blooper, but Whydoyouneedtoknow's dangerverse
This from Sirius "I will never kiss a girl in public" Black. (Lupin)
When did he say that? (Danger)
Fifth year. James asked him if that meant he’d kiss a boy in public. I’m not sure he ever found all his teeth (Lupin)
hmmm, is Sirius Gay???
Brady1 posted a comment on Thursday 14th September 2006 9:31am
would you be able to send me a pic of a celtic cross and knot that you spoke about in the chapter i wanted to get that as a tattoo. my email is hphotshot5@yahoo.com
otaku_lord posted a comment on Thursday 14th September 2006 8:50am
I hate to double post but I have a quick message for everyone about the little obnoxious guy that pops up around Luna .... THAT IS A CRUMPLE HORNED SNORKACK!!!
sorry... please continue
dave su posted a comment on Thursday 14th September 2006 8:27am
oh yea btw... i was wondering if u guys have read the psychic serpent by barb as well as its two sequels... its a really good story i got hooked almost as fast as i did with your stories... its taken me a ton of time to recommend them because i was trying to decide if it really was a good story, the first one got some sort of really good award or something... anywho
http://www.fictionalley.org/authors/barb/HPATPS.html
http://www.fictionalley.org/authors/barb/HPATTOGI.html
http://www.fictionalley.org/authors/barb/HPATTP.html
hope u enjoy
otaku_lord posted a comment on Thursday 14th September 2006 7:51am
I can not even put into words how incredible this story line has been.
I read Sunset in two days. I read Sunrise in three (up to chapter 19) and now I am going through withdrawals.
Your plot line and character development are exceptional.
Please keep up the good work.
BTW, per JKR, she is planning on killing off two of the main characters. She gave a brief interview while speaking about fighting with customs to carry her hand-written manuscript with her on a flight! She was afraid that it would be stolen.
Tabraiz Rasul posted a comment on Wednesday 13th September 2006 3:40am
great story so ar. can't wait for the update.
soloven posted a comment on Monday 11th September 2006 2:54pm
First off I love the Story.
as far as Amhar Coeur de Lion and a few of the other Wizengamot members goes I think someone needs to snap them back to reality. They have no real power and will not have any for quite a while, Even after they get back to England, several key points for this.
1) Haven is an IRISH Town, Regardless of who owns it or who lives there.
2) What punishment can they possible hand out, There is no Prison and Harry is the only one with money.
3) Going back to England is not as simple as just winning the War, rebuilding is going to take years. First the treaty between the Goblins and Britsh Ministry of Magic will have to be renegotiated since without money nothing else is going to happen. Then the actual rebuilding can begin, and lets not forget what requirements the King, the Prime Minister and all the other involved govements are going to impose to ensure that this doesn't happen again.
4) They are still going to have to convince all people to move back. Most people cannot afford and are not willing to start all over again.
Niels posted a comment on Monday 11th September 2006 12:11am
Here's one for your bloopers :) It's in The New World of Bellerophon30. He/She/it? is a great writer, but even the greatest make mistakes.
"A bit too much, yeah. Until Hogwarts I’d never been out of England, let alone the country."
Fanfiction.net The brave new world
I love your stories. Please don't ever stop writing :)
dave su posted a comment on Sunday 10th September 2006 9:01am
Amhar Coeur de Lion has seriously got to die soon
Fortune posted a comment on Saturday 16th September 2006 8:43am