By Bobmin
Reviews
azureguy86 posted a comment on Wednesday 30th August 2006 1:26pm
I love your writing skills, it's just so refreshing sometimes to read a fanfic where i actually understand what is written. Keep up the good work and i'll be waiting for the next chapter.
SailorAlgol posted a comment on Tuesday 29th August 2006 1:57am
Great writing, as always.
Just a quick question:
What would the soundtrack be during Wizengamot and their comitee's scenes?
SailorAlgol
pheonixX posted a comment on Thursday 24th August 2006 10:02pm
I have read all of your stories so far and they have taken me a bit of time to read including the one's on Fanfiction.net and they are hot!! One of the things I like most is the way you portray harry you dont make me unrealistic which is what some authors do. But anyways off topic....Great work....LOVE IT!!
PheonixX
Erik Wiggins posted a comment on Thursday 24th August 2006 7:04am
Thanks for great chapter, where was my e-mail letting me know it was in? I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter!
Donald McLeod posted a comment on Thursday 24th August 2006 2:29am
Agean welldone. your story has great cliffies and flow; I love it.
erin_colien posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd August 2006 3:25am
great update looking forward to the next.
xandrian posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd August 2006 5:21am
I've spent the last few days getting caught up through this series and your other on FF. I've enjoyed the series overall, so I just wanted to thank you both for keeping the story coming so quickly.
Best wishes to you both feeling better soon.
Lang posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd August 2006 3:51am
So, I hear you guys are going to have words, sentences and paragraphs in your next chapter. I don't think it can be done!
There's absolutely no way you can put all three in one chapter.
And, if you are able to, i'll allow you to use me in your disclaimers.
(yes that was me trying to be sneaky using reverse psychology to get in a disclaimer)
Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd August 2006 2:09am
I rather like the effect of the Wizengamot on proceedings as it makes sure the war is being fought on more fronts than one. Moody helping out the British army is also extremely fun. More please. Excellent chapter. And finally, ouch! Poor Neville!
Mel Evans posted a comment on Monday 21st August 2006 10:21am
Firstly, I think I should thank my lucky stars that I have never met anyone like Amhar. What an absolutely horrible human being!
I'm loving the story so far, although I would definitely like to see more of the pranks that are going on at hogwarts.
How good would an enounter between Peeves and Lucius be? and surely the hogwarts ghosts could do something particularly humiliating to Snape as well while they're at it? I'm not nearly creative enough to come up with a good suggestion, but I'm sure between the two of you he could be sufficiently punished! Perhaps in the leadup to the missions to the two prisoner of war camps, the ghosts could steal all of the DEs clothes or something.. have them all turn up in the nude to defend the camps. Would give the aurors and harry's friends some interesting targets if nothing else..
vl100butch posted a comment on Monday 21st August 2006 3:02am
Amhar needs to die, painfully. I personally think it would be a hoot to have a Royal Navy Sea King land outside of Haven with two individuals on board...King Charles III and the Duke of York (aka Prince Andrew) who would then visit and dissolve the Wizgemont (or however the heck it's spelled)
I hope you have a scene where Harry & co are taken to see the massed armada at sea --- proud names, Ark Royal, Invincible, Enterprise, Wasp, Hornet, et al...and a scene where the pure bloods get the total crap scared out of them by the opening of the air bridge into Ireland.
Crys posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 11:33pm
*groan* Ahmer's line of hating to be ignored. So all of his shit is EGO driven? Not ideological, but greed and ego. Short of stringing him up, I can't see any other way of stopping an utter fool like that. Damn he's an annoying prick.
Nice to see there is some kind of resistance still ongoing at Hogwarts. Penelope and the unnamed (?) slave of Snape.
Watching the ruminations of the DE is seriously creepy. Which is the point, of course. Very well done.
Liked the little scene in the classroom. Someone is spreading ugly lies, and the only counter is information and making the kids think.
Feeder? *snicker*
On Dobby's behalf, I thank you.
LoggingInSucksAss posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 11:04am
Blofeld?
Bwa-hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha-coughcough
Michael3 posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 8:42am
Bob, my dear, old, and good friend. How ya doin? That's fantastic. The ol' lady treatin' ya well enough? Even better.
I come on behalf of my sanity, or at least of what is left of it, not to mention my hate. They've asked me to ask you if you would for the love all things scary and dangerous that you kill off Coeur de Lion. Heart of Lion my ass, he's the slimiest (yes, that is now a word if it wasn't before) git I've ever read of in FF. So for everyone's good, including the Lion's own, kill him. Or I will. Or I could just bribe -- I mean offer you doughnuts.
Any way, other than the little mishap that is Coeur de Lion, this is an excellent story and I can't wait for more. Especially Lion's painful death. And no, I will not just settle for his humiliation within a Disclaimer.
Adios, Ciao and all that other good goodbye stuff -- Michael.
Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 8:28am
Well, an interesting chapter. Though it seem Amhar is making himself a much more than minor annoyance. If he keeps going, I would think he'd be due to get squased. Great work, thank you.
aengus posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 6:44am
You two should put in a list of songs in your next "Dreaded Author Notes" that could be your offical soundtrack!
That would be so cool.
I love your stories and can't wait for the next chapter.
Q: Are you going to tell us who this mystery killer is?
Aengus
rippergirl posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 6:19am
Now let's see how man people get the line at the end of your author's notes. Older people might but I don't think the younger ones will. Great show though BIFF! BAM! POW!. Anyways your chapter is great as always. So cute that Dobby and Winky are in lo-ove. Nice to see some more love going on during the war. Would like to see some more about the going's on at Hogwart's with Peeves and the Death Eaters. See what new tricks Harry gave him to use in that task. Can't wait till the next chapter as always.
Lurk posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 5:07am
Great chapter! I have to say, I actually enjoyed the bits with the Wizengamot.
Though Snape is an utter bitch. GODDAMN, I hate him in this fic. Growl.
Erk. Anti-muggle sentiments. That's not too good. Why can't they just say you know, something like "We are taking into consideration separating Muggles and Squibs from wizards. All wizards who wish to be removed from such filth, please raise your hands."
Then send those who do out on the front line, and if any survive, kill 'em. Assholes.
Couldn't they just, you know, ASK an Angel or two (who aren't mating, if there are any) to come with them?
Yay Charlie! He's recovering!
Growl. I HATE whoever is telling the older kids to pass those messages, those LIES, to the younger ones. Grr, grr, grr, grr, grr!
Keep it up!
Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 3:32am
Excellent chapter. The Wizengamot is not only a monkey wrench dropped in the Geers of Harry's plans, but with Amhar's bribe, it becomes deliberate sabotage.
But he'd never let voldie's friends know about Arthur's slip of the tongue, would he? (Boy, I hope he gets executed as a traitor!)
Liked the lesson in class. Hope they get the murderer.
Good story! Complex, complex!
Question, though; what have you got against Amy? She's trying to do her job and is being tortured by the twins. Doesn't seem fair.
Is Amy a "friend" that you have put into your fiction for private reasons?
Looking forward to more.
Tom A.
mathiasgranger posted a comment on Saturday 2nd September 2006 10:30am