Clinton posted a comment on Thursday 22nd May 2008 5:18am

Hello Bob and Alyx. I have to say you are some of the best fan fiction author's I have read. I really like this one shot you did and am wondering if I can use it to work out a fan fiction using the idea's you worked.I am thinking of a fic covering all seven years and beyond if I can do it. I have never put anything on the net and I had a large number I had been working on but lost them all when my computer crashed. I am trying to get back into the writing but it is not easy. I would appreciate having you permission to use the idea's from this story, it may never end up on the web but I do this for the fun of it and to have something to do.

MARIDEE posted a comment on Tuesday 13th May 2008 2:18am

Hillarious!!!

noylj posted a comment on Tuesday 6th May 2008 1:08am

Nice. Like to read the whole story. Would not have given Dumbles more than a couple of minutes to "see the error of his ways."
Love Dumble bashing.

Darksnider05 posted a comment on Friday 18th April 2008 11:20am

Evil Cackles is all that comes to mind.

Clell65619 posted a comment on Friday 4th April 2008 1:11am

Beautiful.

Prongs1977 posted a comment on Monday 31st March 2008 4:22am

Interesting, I know someone who could really run with this sort of plot bunny, would you be interested in letting them? If so, e-mail me "prongs@potterheadsanonymous.com" and I'll forward your addy to them.

Aelita posted a comment on Wednesday 26th March 2008 10:30pm

Awwwww man, if you guys are ever bored here is an idea for a sequel...but thats just an idea, anyway great story

riegert8 posted a comment on Wednesday 26th March 2008 10:18am

This is really good story, it sad that Wizard world is going to have to pay for Dumbledore mistakes. It funny that Dumbledore would called Neville the boy who lived just because he a pureblood, even with the fact that he is only a half-blood. I do think that Dumbledore knew that Voldemort is also a half-blood, I did think that in this story that Dumbledore is a pure-blood but decide to go with thinking that he is a half-blood. It sad that Hermione & Ginny died because of Dumbledore test, I like that Harry and his wife are going to get some training. To me that Harry left the world to defend itself for some time is because he was never had a reason to protect it, if he had friends that would be danger might have changed his mind but who can tell.

Vilkath posted a comment on Friday 15th February 2008 1:21am

Good times, for a short story it is surprisingly good. We have all read enough of those 'Harry was not he boy who lived' stories either by Nevil or some twin brother, sister etc. Still this short fic was very interesting in showing what would happen if Dumbledoor never caugh on, and Harry did not care so much.

I always found Harry's character a little hard to believe from the books. He is a quiet subservant boy all his life with the Dursley's... and then suddenly a rash stuborn boy at hogwarts ready to lash out to defend himself and his friends from malfoy and snape.

I love your Harry, willing to let the world rot because no one in england showed him any real reason to care magical or muggle. Also loved how you had both Ginny and Hermonie die. They aren't to bad of people, many more are higher on my 'I wish they were dead' list. Still it is amazing how many Au's or cross overs change harry drasticly and then have every thing turn out okay any ways. Having Slytherin Harry still friends with ron.. still rescuing Hermonie etc. Nice to see a more practical aproach. It was pure luck that so many of Harry's adventures turned out okay, any change could make them turn out fatal easily.

ctao posted a comment on Saturday 9th February 2008 6:08pm

Good story, rather funny plot. But it needs a sequel :P

lafbnz posted a comment on Saturday 2nd February 2008 2:34am

love it.... a great one-shot to add to this would ruin a great story.

thanks for sharing

azulkan2 posted a comment on Thursday 31st January 2008 12:34pm

I absolutely loved this story. Dumbledore got exactly what he deserved.

Judy Webb posted a comment on Thursday 31st January 2008 6:55am

Gurgle - No sequel? **** Not even of the 3 of them at the TA??? ;-( Loved it

Ezra'eil posted a comment on Sunday 27th January 2008 1:13am

Would you write a sequel if I asked really, really, REALY nicely?

JP posted a comment on Wednesday 16th January 2008 9:21pm

Sweet. Verry verrrryyyy sweet. I particularly like snarky Slytherin Harry (sex god extraordinaire)
The only question is where is Luna? Safely made off on the technicolour llama I hope.
Wombat

NateGold posted a comment on Friday 28th December 2007 5:28pm

Ok, I can see not doing a sequel...but how about a prequel? I'm curious as to how Susan and Tracey managed to corral Harry. Very interesting backstory there.

But, It looks like that tale will never be told..(sigh).

Jeffrey1 posted a comment on Monday 10th December 2007 8:57am

you write some of the most entertaining stories,i've ever read.

immortal7 posted a comment on Sunday 9th December 2007 5:20pm

great sense of humor. sad that their is no sequel, but oh well i can just imagine the look on Albus's face as Harry left and it leaves a smile on my face.

Ezra'eil posted a comment on Tuesday 4th December 2007 7:21am

Thats sad about the no sequel, but HEY! what can ya do? Good little ficlet by the way!

I'd give it 4 stars!

Mionefan posted a comment on Sunday 2nd December 2007 10:31am

Oh, you have a nasty sense of humour. I love it!