AerynS posted a comment on Friday 4th January 2019 10:54am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

I'm reading this knowing that you've gone on to the next adventure. This review is bittersweet, but thank you for the hours of entertainment you've given us. Rest well and be at peace!

Trixtor posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 4:08am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

I love this story.

Lerris Smith posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd November 2011 9:04pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

This is a good start so far. The only obvious issue that comes to mind is in one fell swoop many of the standard Harry Potter antagonists were eliminated, although it is too soon to know what impact that will have. On a side note, this site could really use an interface that allows one to search and list stories meeting different criteria.

Cassandra30 posted a comment on Friday 25th March 2011 12:44am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

What a terrific idea! The Marauders Ride Again!

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Friday 11th February 2011 7:09pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Once again, you two manage to think of something unique. I've read fics where Harry lost his magic, but not where he lost it before killing Voldemort, or their connection meaning their magic was equal even if Voldie did a ritual. Very interesting, although it reads a little like a one-shot. Did it start as one? Anyway, once again, well done.

visjith posted a comment on Saturday 25th December 2010 8:50am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

I loved the end of Great Albus Dumbdork. Great work.

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Friday 15th October 2010 1:04pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Now, this is cute. Dumbles goes from disgraced to *dead*, and in short order. The Soapophobe has Sirius' old suite at Club Azkaban. Nagini takes down both the Rat *and* Riddle. What else will go wrong for anyone not named Harry?

Taly-chan posted a comment on Thursday 8th July 2010 1:56pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

That was AWSOME! And a very original take on the 'Screw the Tournament and leave' plot. I loved it.

purrfus posted a comment on Tuesday 27th April 2010 10:28am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Absolutely delicious.

I don't generally care for Harry / Hermione stories, but when they're put together in interesting ways it makes me want more.

Paul Blay posted a comment on Saturday 20th February 2010 5:25am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

> He had used most of the last of his money to pay the fines for
> forcing a bondage bind on a phoenix. Once the bind was broken,
> the bird had disappeared, leaving him behind.

Use of bind as a noun is rare, and only for certain technical areas. Usually bind is a verb. Either binding or bond would be an acceptable noun for that sentence.

danielosborne77 posted a comment on Friday 19th February 2010 4:52pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

top quality work

lordlugos posted a comment on Thursday 23rd July 2009 7:04am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

That was so totally amazing! Even more amazing, it was only the first bloody chapter! I still have many more to go! Whee! :)

RedRyder posted a comment on Friday 17th April 2009 12:27pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

i am really finding my self liking this story thank you for writing it and for providing a link to this wonderful site.

jonathan snider posted a comment on Wednesday 17th September 2008 12:17pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

uh quick question were any llamas harmed durimng the writing of the disclaimer for this chapter

elked posted a comment on Friday 6th June 2008 9:34pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Dear Alyx, dear Bob,

I've read this story several times by now and still, every few months I come back and read it again because it is just too good to be read only once. Which is something I have to say about most of your work.

Thanks for sharing.

Ikke

azrael91 posted a comment on Sunday 18th May 2008 4:11am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

nice start. like the premise, it's already better than what jk did. she is a good writer, but her plot went all to hell in the last two books

fyrecat posted a comment on Sunday 30th March 2008 11:58am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Magnificent! As always. Thank you.

Cholera posted a comment on Thursday 20th March 2008 4:32am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Brilliant ! i don't know where that had come from, but please, keep on !
Thanks for writing !

Banner posted a comment on Wednesday 12th March 2008 9:03pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Thanks for a satisfying ending. I appreciate an *intelligent* climax; it makes a nice change for Riddle to be taken down neatly and efficiently. It's especially great that the house-elfs were so instrumental in the Final Defeat.
...And they all lived happily ever after.
The best way to finish!

4Dracoseyesonly posted a comment on Thursday 31st January 2008 11:48pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

What a refreshing twist! I really like this idea and will continue to read the remaining chapters.