lunachic posted a comment on Tuesday 8th January 2008 3:34am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Oh! I forgot my question. Is there going to be alot of military talk like there was in Sunrise? Let me know so I can brush up on my terms. (I had a hard time understanding so of it the first time around). God, now I feel like Hermione, reading to prepare myself for some pleasure reading. Kind of makes me sick as I'm sure it does you.

Bobmin356 replied:

Nope, no Military terms for this story. Can't promise to hold to that for future stories.

lunachic posted a comment on Tuesday 8th January 2008 3:29am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Hey guys thought I'd let you know how much I enjoyed this chapter. I thought the bit about the Dursley's was extremely brilliant although I would have enjoyed reading about them being thrown out on their fat/bony asses. Its a thrill that I can only now fantasize about unless you decide to do it later after they can no longer afford living expenses and make me an extremely happy girl. Oh, and Alex, I happen to love the way you do AN. Tell Bob that and to put a sock it it (or incert cruel punishment of choice). I think its hilarious and I give props to both of you.

andyman528 posted a comment on Friday 28th December 2007 4:31am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Huh. This looks like an interesting story. I'm curious to see how it's going to turn out. I loved Sunset and Sunrise, so when I saw this, I was very excited. Thank you for continuing to write :D.

Amit Patel posted a comment on Thursday 20th December 2007 12:34am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Hi,

Just read your story and I have to say that it is nicely written and well thought out. I like how you are building Harry and Hermionie's relationship slowly and not doing what most fan fiction authors do; which is to make them immediately fall deep in love at the age of about 14.

But I have one question; did you intentionally put in that bit about Voldemort being killed y Nagini to ruin the whole plot point about Harry's magic in chapter 1? I am not trying to say that it was a bad point. It was just something that gave it right away for me and I was wondering if that was you intention in that chapter to put small clues that might be caught by some readers.

Keep up the good work and have a great holiday

lunachic posted a comment on Wednesday 12th December 2007 8:00am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Love the story plot so far. Although you really hate Ron and Dumbledore don't you? I also see you have a thing with transporters (portals/doors). But that's ok, I like conistancy from my favorite authors. I also like your disclaimers, I see you've moved on to abusing Alex, Snape and Dumbledore were getting a tad bit messed up. ;)

Arkeus posted a comment on Thursday 15th November 2007 7:27pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Very good, though i dislike the whole comparison between harry and james. Not your faul anyway, it's just that i have seen it too much.

jalva200 posted a comment on Sunday 4th November 2007 12:34am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

OMG I FREAKING LOVE IT!!! God i love yalls stroys so freakin much, i so cant wait to reead more and finish off the Sunrise sries, soon as i have more time i shalll! Anyway keep up your great beautiful work and if ya ever need ideas on what to write, i got so many damn storys idea that i want to use but just havent been able to and i know you two could make them great as freak!! Also one last comment... DOWN WITH DH!!!! JK sucks ass for writing that book.

nintschi posted a comment on Saturday 27th October 2007 2:21am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

nice story :)
it made me smile and I liked the idea with the globet and powerless harry for a while ?
write more nintschi

juju jula posted a comment on Friday 26th October 2007 3:33am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Now you've done it. I read another story where Hermione's parents appeared once and I wondered why their names weren't Dan and Emma...

Well now on to the important part of th review:
This is an interesting start and I liked it a lot.

I thought it was especially funny for Dumbledore to survive the "Lemon Drop incident" only to be hit by a bus and then run over by a lorry.

I like your style of writing, it is quite fun to read and I can't wait for more.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 22nd October 2007 9:28am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Outstanding, very well done. Liked it a lot.

gunny

riegert8 posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 2:49pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

What I am having problem understanding is the reason Dumbledore escape prison, all his action was under the title of Chief Warlock. What are you saying that all warlock before and After Dumbledore are thief's and dishonest, In my option that Dumbledore cross the line and he was not stealing in line of his job but for himself. So him not going to prison was lame excuses, for me that I would think that who ever become chief warlock is going be scum

ponderous stibbons posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 3:09am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

That's a lot to happen in chapter one. Bloody good job. Pat your self on the backside and all that. Or your partner's backside, whichever s/he prefers.

gadriam posted a comment on Monday 15th October 2007 9:38pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

This is one hell of a storyline. Yes, this chapter could stand on it's own, but more is always welcome. Just keep the scale down, please? There is no need to make the chapters progressively grander.

g

Kalen Darkmoon posted a comment on Monday 15th October 2007 2:13pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Cute first chapter and taking a similar vein to my own story. Harry finally standing up and saying "no" while essentially airing all of Bumblebore's dirty laundry in the press. The dirtiest of course being Harry's home life forced upon him by Dumbledork. I'm certain the wizarding world wouldn't be too thrilled to learn that Dumb-as-a-door put their, then infant, savior in the home of abusive muggles who raised him worse than a Malfoy treats their house elves.

Steve Stephan posted a comment on Monday 15th October 2007 9:52am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

OK, I like it but I have one complaint. I think that this chapter is more of an overview that could just as easily spanned quite a few chapters, and given much more detail. With it in this layout, however, it's rushed and comes at you hard and a little justifiably ironic. I hope that you have this story laid out and I hope that there will be much more to it than what you've covered so far. I'm curious as to whether you'll follow the same line of thought with Sunset/Sunrise as far as pairings go. Also, what to do with Ron. He didn't have his opportunity to be jealous, having nipped that one in the bud. Ginny, on the other hand still has said opportunity, having the crush and all.

Off to the next chapter.

Steve Stephan aka Geovanni Luciano

noylj posted a comment on Monday 15th October 2007 8:58am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

This would be a good one shot. I hope that it is not just 2 chapters.
How is Harry going to discover horcruxes if DoubleDumb took the information to his grave? What would be nice is if Moldie really lost his magic and would be no more than a wraith for all eternity, without the magic to affect the world around him. Who has to defeat/vanguish a powerless wraith?

gil ligad posted a comment on Sunday 14th October 2007 5:31pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

And wow.

Really, really wow - and this is only the first chapter?

How much more are we looking at?

Looking forward to more ...

rune1806 posted a comment on Sunday 14th October 2007 1:51pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

that was very different, i like the idea so far.

Steves Place posted a comment on Sunday 14th October 2007 7:30am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

PS...
Ooops, I maybe should have mentioned that I am currently reading one of the longest and best stories I have ever read. Yes Bobmin, it is in fact, Sunset and Sunrise over Britain. A work of true ART.
Steve

Steves Place posted a comment on Sunday 14th October 2007 7:21am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Good grief Bobmin, Don't get your nickers in a twist over my statement of yet another H/Hr pairing. I ment no insult to you. As it happens, the last 12 stories I have read were all H/Hr and almost identical as there is only so many ways one can write this pairing. Having said that, I so very much enjoy your stories, no matter what pairing there is as you have a writing style and ability that I envy very much. Also, I might add that your pairings are the most believable of almost all that I read. It was just at that moment my thoughts were on someone writing something so very different than I have been reading. Your stories interest me simply because they are most different from the usual and of all the H/Hr pairings that I have read, I prefer your versions of that and that is why I sigh at the summery of yet another H/Hr but read it because you always have a unique take on this. Sorry if you felt offended by my comment. I have written the start to a new story that will not have any permanent pairing and does indeed have a very independent Harry in charge. As you had suggested, if I want a story like that I will likely have to write it myself. LOL
Please, I would go nutz without my BOBMIN injection to perk me up so don't through me out because I inadvertently twisted your nickers. LOL
Steve