lelila posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 1:49pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

oooh, very interesting. i can't wait to see where this story goes. i don't think i've seen another story go quite so far in the direction that harry refused to participate in the tri-wizard tournament. and dumbledore and wormtail dead already?! hee hee. that pleases me greatly! and voldy's snake turned on him. that's good!! i want more! update soon!!!

Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 1:47pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Excellent start! I love that this will be continued. The writing is different in tone and subject matter than your previous stories, but it was done so well. Really Great! I loved it. Set 'em up and knock 'em down.

One thing ... was this a mistake?

Sirius gripped Harry's shoulder supportively. "If she feels as you do, I suspect it won't matter."

Harry scowled at him. "Evan, remember?"

Harry seems to be correcting Sirius mistakenly using the wrong name, but the name 'Harry' wasn't spoken.

Thanks for sharing. Great work Bob and Alyx.

Mike (MoA)

Alex2877 posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 1:46pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

I like keep it going

Alex00 posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 1:40pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Awesome start I can not wait for more.

simons_flower posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 1:31pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

What an interesting beginning.

GinnyLover posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 1:27pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

WOW! Very nice! Very interesting AU. Cant wait to see what happens next!

riegert8 posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 1:22pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

It is great that Lupin and Sirius found out about Dumbledore plan for Harry being tri wizard tournament, it sad that plan also mean that Snape would be worse with Harry. This prove that Dumbledore is behind how Snape treat Harry, but what is his excuse how he treat the other students that not in his house and how about Neville. It great that Harry gave Dumbledore a chance to figure a way that Harry don't have be in the tournament but he turn out not smart enough, it great how Harry put a stop to Dumbledore plans. It really sad that Harry find out how little Dumbledore care for, you have to feel bad for Hermione to watch her best friend leave. I am sure about Ginny for at this time Ginny and Harry are not the close, I wonder if Ron realize that he lost a good friend. It sad that Harry gave up his magic, but really good to know that he still has his magic. I knew that Dumbledore like to manipulate people for his pans or what he want done, I am shock that he would steal from Harry and thirty other orphans. It great that he would have to pay for his crimes, you have to feel bad for Aberforth to have pay for his brother crimes only he has nothing to do with it. What it sad that Dumbledore don't feel bad for what he done. It funny that Nagini would attack Peter and Voldemort, there no doubt that this not the end for Voldemort. The best part of the chapter when Hermione met up with Harry again and I have no doubt that she is going to have question since she seen him use magic. I look forward in reading more.

LifeScientist posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 12:55pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Fascinating! I'm most interested to see where this goes, its a concept that I'm quite sure I've never seen done in fanfic before. Lots of potential here--and though I wouldn't go so far as you did, I can't argue with you about certain parts of the disclaimer.
Looking forward to more
Matt

Riven posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 12:54pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

interesting, very interesting.
i am looking foward to reading the next chapter in this. but i am also looking foward to your next chapter of your other story, infact i would say im looking foward to that other story more.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update it.

Meghan posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 12:51pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Woot! :D Great start, looking forward to more, now I am off to bed. ;)

gadriam posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 12:49pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Brilliant. I really want to see where you take this. In one swift move, you have eliminated most annoying things, leaving a lovely foundation for pretty much anything. I'll be around..

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Hagrid posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 12:48pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Its good ter see the two of yeh takin' on the last good book that JK wrote. Between the Half Baked Plot and Didn't happen I wonder who confunded her. This however, is a right bit of a scream, I would say I were howlin' when I read it, but that brings up those red loud letters, and that's not what I meant at all.

Terry Swain posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 12:48pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Great story. :)

PamelaC posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 12:45pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

wahoo! a new ... STO-O-RYYYYYYY!!!
Great start. Cheers and thanks. Healthy celery snacks for you!!

taxzombie posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 12:15pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Hoo Hoo! An excellent new storyline, and it doesn't have llamas! Excellent.

Enjoyed the crumbs receiving their rewards, well most of them anyway. Finding the alert for this was a very nice way to end the day. Thank you for a delightful read.

crew posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 12:07pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

great story great story

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 12:06pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

I'm a bit puzzled. If Harry isn't powerless, evilbaby!LV shouldn't have been either.

And this is no HBP, so no Horcruxes, I assume.

So if the prophecy still holds, either Nagini gets severe indigestion LV somehow absorbs/becomes part of Nagini?

I'm honestly rather surprised that you didn't just leave Harry magicless. It certainly would have been different. :-)

But I'm sure you have other ideas that will be interesting.

Thanks for sharing this with us.

mastapsi posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 12:06pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Or not, I forgot about horcruxes...

mastapsi posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 12:04pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Interesting, I really have no idea where you will go with this now. This could easily stand alone without follow up.

So that makes me curious.

Teganii posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 12:03pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Why would anyone traid in a llama for an oversized bird? Looking to make giant omlets?

This is a great twist to all the Harry Potter stories. Instead of the rush to war it's the wait and see approach. Nicely done.

SO Hermoine didn't get asked to go to the ball by Victor? Did the other schools leave after Dumble's little fiasco?

I'm hoping for some Ron bashing. Any possibility in this happening? In Wizards Fall you killed the wanker offer by "fighting the good fight" so to speak. That took a little bit to digest. With all these Krispy Kreams lying about, having a "Good Ron" just may turn them all sour.

Thanks for the new story.