DJ posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:55am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Good Start but have you not delt with Voldi? Or are you using the horcrux? So he can come back. I look foward to the rest.

makr posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:53am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Yet again another story from great writers that defy 90% of HP fanfiction out there. Between this and your other stories this is above most of the fanfiction out there for the sole reason that you aren't taking plot from Rowling. You take the characters and play your own plot while keeping them in character.

Highbrass posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:51am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

I likey. I'm interested to see where it goes from here. I also hope this doesn't mean 'Wizards Fall' is though. I really do enjoy some of the things you put Dumbledore though.

Kirk Staley posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:45am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

I almost thought this was an one-shot story.

Decumo9 posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:45am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

sweet start, though I did not quite expect Dumbledore to die so soon, not that it wasn't funny or anything, just seemed a little quick.

Elleria posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:44am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Pretty amusing..I like Voldie getting eaten by his own snake.

es posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:43am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

awwwwww. you two just keep reaffirming you places as my favorite author(s).

daeshie posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:35am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

i liiike. its pretty good, i'm glad its HHr.
But afterwards where is it going? surely not another voldemort based story, but i think by the title it's going to be a bit like a paper revolution.

kb0 posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:34am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Ah, back with another manipulative Dumblydore. I don't mind, I find those amusing. :-) Hmm, propheycy -v- goblet; I guess that works. So all Harry has to fight are the Horcruxes I presume. It should be interesting. I like how you pulled Hermy to Fiji -- very sneaky. :-)

FenrisWolf posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:33am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

It's a great start. Once again, I have no bloody clue where you can take it from here, as all the major questions seem to have been dealt with, but the same could've been said about your Wizard's Fall arc, and that's at four parts and still going. Needless to say, I'll be waiting anxiously to see where this leads.

Michael63 posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:31am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

I loved it!

And you picked the perfect place to end it. Enough to establish the new universe and close off a few plot lines, but plenty left open to fuel new stories.

I enjoyed it, and as always look forward to your future stories.

AnnieKay posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:22am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Very Nice! I can't wait to see what happens next.

Greg Johnson posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:16am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

This was fun to read. I can't wait to see where you go with it! Keep up the good work.

TheHard posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:02am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Truly? are you going to continue it? It was a nice "resume" for a starting, but, with dumbledore dead, voldemort dead, etc... and, now??? I'm looking for it!

Thanks!

Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:00am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Well, an amusing story so far, I'm curious as to what's next. I rather loved the way you killed Dumbledore this time, you guys really don't like him do you.

mathiasgranger posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 10:46am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Well..there is a lot to still be dealt with...Horcruxes...I'm sure Dumbles had something about them in his private journals...the Weasley family....it should be interesting to see what you do with them.

What kind of tutors Harry will have, what Voldemort being killed by Nagini means to the Horcruxes...did he lose one by default or does Nagini have two pieces now?

Thanks for writing,
Matt

Thanks for writing,
Matt

ladyimmortal posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 10:41am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!

Okay, that was one heckuva starting to this story!

As usual, I will wait with bated breath for ze next chapter!

RoseWolf posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 10:30am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Wonderful beginning. Alyx was right, just this would have been too short. It's so rare to actually find a new plot in fanfic, I haven't read anything quite like this one. Keep up the good work.

I assume the adult rating is for future chapters?

Wolf

Chrisyansick@hotmail.com posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 10:28am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Interesting premise... With Dumbledore dead, Voldemort eaten, Fudge imprisioned... am curious to see where you will bring it in the next chapters...

liquidfyre posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 10:24am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

*giggles insanely at the idea of nagine eating voldy*

good story and start there keep it up please

if you dont you wont like the consequences *glares about in what he hopes is an evil sinister sorta way*