allygator posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 10:23am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Awesome start...wow a new concept, I've read a lot of HP fanfiction and I don't think I've seen anything similar at all. This story has lots of potential and with your excellent writing style I'm sure it will be a fantastic read. Can't wait for more...update soon!

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 10:17am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

*snicker* Ohh, I love that alternative approach to the start of GoF. Developments from hereon, though, should be quite fascinating. I do wonder what happens, since Nagini ate the powerless Tom, to Tom's spirit since there are several horcruces/horcruxes lying around.

I do like the way things are developing 'tween Harry & Hermione and that looks quite promising.

Good start to what promises to be a very interesting story.

Joseph Fritz posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 10:14am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Great start!

Ken Warner posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 10:11am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

wonderful start = too bad about Aberforth, he was not apparently guilty of anything

interesting to see how the horcruxes manage to activate the prophecy

thanks for yet another great arc

patrickokc posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 10:10am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Yet another wonderful start to what I am sure will be an awesome story!!! I am very excited to read more of this arc, as well as the wizarding Fall and your xman cross over. Keep up the great work!
Patrick

Jason Karr posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 10:07am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

This is a good story. Looking forward to what Hermione's folks are going to do when she gets home.

Melferd posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 10:07am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

I love the new 'verse!!!
Yeas!! and thank you for making a new one to play in!!!

I completely LOVE takecharge!Sirius and Remus..I always thought they were way too hobbled and submissive to Dumbledore.

And to be continued...
**is dizzy from squee and fangirl snoopy dance**

Teresa Lynne posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 10:02am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Ah, another excellent story to enjoy! As always, I'll be waiting with anticipation for the next chapter(s)! It was good to see Dumbledore, Peter and Voldy get the shaft, and marvellous to see the reunion of Harry and Hermione! Many thanks for writing this!

kellygreenpassion posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 9:52am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

ME LIKE VERY MUCH.
IT WOULD HAVE SEVERED DUMBY RIGHT TO CHOKE ON THAT LEMON DROP

hedwig_edwiges posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 9:52am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

For all the doubt about being able to work with Harry/Hermione pair (all that time ago, before Sunset/Sunrise o.B.), it seems like you two fell in love with thir pairing. And you sure like to torture Dumbledore. Maybe the poor old man deserves some rest now. Even without the name, there was possible to taste Ms. Skeeter's words in those news.
Hoping for more here and in Wizard's Fall timeline.
Great work, as always.

Voldemort is Dead posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 9:51am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Excellent!

Michelline posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 9:42am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Awesome! I loved the Dumbledore downfall. Somehow, I'm thinking Hermione is no longer upset over missing the Yule Ball.

grenouille posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 9:33am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Oooooooooookay. Don't quite know what to think. Guess I won't until next time.

fountaam posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 9:31am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Short and sweet.

Memory King posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 9:25am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Excellent work, looking forward to the next one.

redjacobson posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 9:23am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

fun story; but; i have to wonder; where do you go from here? Sirius is free; Voldemort is snake-snack; Dumbledore is road kill, so; what's next, the Dark SnakeLord Nagini?

red

Meg posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 9:15am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

YAY! NEW STORY!!!!!!

I dearly hope that Alyx's llama went to a loving home rather than having you torture the poor thing to death. *glares at Bob*

I'm liking what I see of this story so far. You have a lot happening in this chapter, and the style of telling makes it feel like longer than 7-ish weeks have past. Maybe that's just because there were 6 scenes, and I'm used to Wizard's Fall right now. :)

Looking forward to seeing how majorly, wildly AU you can go. :D Especially since you've done away with so many characters already.

Thanks,

Meg

freakyfinger posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 9:14am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

It seems very unique in that you say there will be many chapters, but I do not see what else can happen. Harry and Hermione get together (I hope), they find out that Voldemort was killed by his snake (He was wasn't he?), and they live happily ever after (You better!)!

Robert1 posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 9:12am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Y'know, I'm going to go out on a limb and guess that you don't care much for Dumbledore. Don't know what gave me that idea, just call it a loony theory. That said, I love everything you've ever written (at least, everything you've posted) and I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work.

Treck posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 9:07am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

ok. I'm officially lost.

Is Tom dead or are their horcruxes keeping him active despite being Nagini chow.