Michael Foerster posted a comment on Sunday 14th October 2007 5:49am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

WOW, just wow! And there will be more....! (does a Snoopy jiggle.)

delta16669 posted a comment on Sunday 14th October 2007 5:22am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

I LIKE IT!

Though I did think that he lost all of his power. And if that happened I thought that you would send Harry to boot camp or something. Make him learn hand to hand combat and how to handle weapons

Can not wait for the next installment

wavelink99 posted a comment on Sunday 14th October 2007 2:50am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

and by protagonists I mean antagonists

wavelink99 posted a comment on Sunday 14th October 2007 2:47am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

It's very interesting, but you seem to have done away with most the protagonists in the first chapter. If it was any other author but you, I would probably say that was really stupid.

I do wonder as to where you are taking this story. I understand it will be a H/Hr, which is a good pairing, but will you focus solely on the romance and Harry's training?

dexterz posted a comment on Saturday 13th October 2007 2:32pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

did the dark lord really become a muggle or did every one think that he had lost his power? being killed of by the snake is better than being offed by a defective wand.....update soon

rathvander posted a comment on Saturday 13th October 2007 11:49am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Interesting twist. You've got a really easy to read way of writing. Detail but not too much, fluid dialogue that stays with how you're developing the characters, and humor :D. Well carry on and all that jazz :D. Looking forward to the next installment whenever it decides to meander down.

~Rath

Donald McLeod posted a comment on Saturday 13th October 2007 9:40am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

I like this woud like some more.

a_wanderer posted a comment on Friday 12th October 2007 7:46am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Hmm, if Voldemort was actually NOT magicless how did Nagi eat him?

spritestar posted a comment on Friday 12th October 2007 2:59am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

a wonderfull start to what appears to be a promissing story. Thank you, both of you.

PS. Be carefull of that Emu, they love to bite

Bocephus posted a comment on Friday 12th October 2007 2:42am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Sooo.....Nagini swallowed the blob. That CAN'T be good.

On the other hand, Hermione in Fiji...........

beauty0102 posted a comment on Thursday 11th October 2007 2:45pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

yeah great chapter can't wait for more so please update again and soon.

jmljasmine posted a comment on Thursday 11th October 2007 3:44am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

I like! You are right, it is different... but I like! :)

sanghamitra posted a comment on Wednesday 10th October 2007 11:58pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

good begining ... but with so many major characters taken care of, it seems you're cooking up something really wicked !! cant wait for more chapters !!

Stygius posted a comment on Wednesday 10th October 2007 10:30pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

The new dark lord... Nagini the Snake?

lol, now that would be a story... congrats on this so far... i do like the idea of harry giving up his magic, even though i don't fully understand the reasoning behind how he can still do his magic... and yet still voldy has 'lost' everything? hmmmm...

the last scene with harry hermione, was very fluff... though nice... for once i would like to see Mr. Granger as a proper dad, one who keeps an eye on harry at all times, u know, no hanky-panky... and perhaps a smart and slytherin Mrs.granger.

besides that congats, and look forward to what complication you bring in the next installment...

Infin1x posted a comment on Wednesday 10th October 2007 9:36pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

*Standing Ovation* Bravo! The most original idea I have seen in a long while.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Wednesday 10th October 2007 4:46pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

One further thought, here. Would the explosion of the Goblet have been helped along by its absorbtion of Voldemort's powers? Considering the link 'tween them, both directly and via the prophecy, I could see the Goblet's drain of Harry's powers as also draining Riddle's, perhaps even moreso as Harry's name was entered on Riddle's command. *chuckle* 'Twould be poetic justice if all future versions of Riddle, created from any of the remaining Horcruces (Horcruxes, whatever) came out squibs.

Graup posted a comment on Wednesday 10th October 2007 4:40pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Great start to another of your stories.

I am surprised, though, that you haven't made a story detailing Dumbledore and Voldemort in cahoots to throw down the magical world, with Dumble and "the hyphenated one" splitting the proceeds.

Anyway, thanks for the entertainment.

jakjakattk posted a comment on Wednesday 10th October 2007 10:44am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

An interesting story.

So fare….

I think that you have felt like me, I found that from the half blood price, the story looks like JKR just wanted to finish the story.
I envy the forethought of your discussion to got back fare enough to take it onto another path. But one of the things that I caught on to very early was your switch to the very early couple that was thought to blooming of Hermione and Harry.

I look forward to seeing more of this story.

Keep up the great imagination.

jakajakattk

John Wilburn posted a comment on Wednesday 10th October 2007 9:48am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

This is really good. I'm glad that you are still writting hp/hg stories.
Sicerely,
John

00_Knight posted a comment on Wednesday 10th October 2007 6:28am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

WHOO HOO! Praise the Donut Lords!

This is great, and that you shall continue it is even better! I'm curious as to what this story will follow as Voldemort is currently in the belly of his former snake, and everyone thinks he's a muggle now... oh and what the hell happened to HEDWIG?!?!?! I've noticed in all your stories Hedwig is either non-existant or not very important... So is she dead in this one or not important enough to include. ( A snowy white owl stares at you like she would love to peck your eyes out)

Anyway this an interesting read, that doesn't sound dark at all, though you could make it dark by having undead lamas from the Umbrella Corp. escape the secret laboratory on Fiji! ;) (no actual reason for that comement, except that you guys seem to have moved from colorful penguins to lamas)

Until next time... or a chance meeting at a Krispy Kreme factory.