jdcox61 posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 5:49am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Pretty cool. I like it, I can't help but wonder what's the story about when you pretty much take all of canon you could use, pile it up in the yard and watch it burn? But... you guys know what you're doing, so I'll gladly wait form more to come along and i'm sure i'll enjoy it.

Thanks B & A!

UdderPD posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 5:42am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Brilliant.

webdoc posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 5:36am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

This looks to be a great story, can't wait to read the rest.

ReaderX99 posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 5:27am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

heh, now that is a good start to a story.. wipe out the whole shootin match and start from scratch! so much for dumbles plans and volde is squished back to spirit land..

thanks for writing!

Shadow High Angel posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 5:19am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Love the start, interesting twist on Dumbledore and others falling from power the way they did but great to read. Can't wait to see what happens in the second chapter.

MrRobertsIII posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 5:18am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Cute. I liked the idea of a Muggle!Harry making Voldy a muggle as well.

jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 4:47am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Awesome Begining!!!! I can't wait to read what happens in the next chapter. The Pen is mightier then the Sword so they say and this chapter proves that 100 percent. So is this the story that spawned the email Alyx sent out about just shooting her? Do keep up the awesome work and update soon please:):):):)

Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 4:36am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

That's nice. Some fluffy goodness at the end, dumbledore disgraced, voldemort eaten (too bad he was probably dead at the time), wormtail killed, Sirius free - what a great story!

Thanks for creating this. I suppose more of the story will be about Harry & Voldemort's fight.

I'm looking forward to more.

Tom A.

Adrianne posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 4:25am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

omg this is going to be such a good story
i cant wait for the next instalment. keep them coming

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 4:19am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

All right, another great story that looks to be building up here, and will be looking forward to what happens next, will Nagini show up some more, might she be an independent agent now, as well as what'll happen when the return high falls off Hermione, I'd wager Harry will be hurting before it's all said and done, LOL.

Dragen posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 4:03am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

What a great start to another one to your stroies; so Sirius and Remus warned Harry about the a*s Dumbledore, who instructed Snape to be even harder on Harry in the coming year.

So Dumbledore's plans aren't going the way he wanted, and Sirius and Remus teached Harry to protect his mind.

I like what The Prophet said about Harry and his Prophecy... and thanks to the prophecy, Harry can keep his magic.

PLEASE update again soon.

fairylights posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 3:47am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

OOOOOhhhhh!!!! So many possible ways this could go...I can't wait to see what you do with it! I loved the exploding Cup, I have a vision of precious jewels bouncing across the floor and landing at Dumbledore's feet.

uberwald posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 3:19am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

i love it when you come up with something new :)

clayton day posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 3:18am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Oh my, Oh my! What a sugar rush at the end. I always wondered how it would have worked out if Harry had just learned to say NO! and stick to his guns.
Thank you for one version of that.

slayersfan01 posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 3:07am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Wow, this is amazing. I don't know if you realize it (and I am NOT trying to hint that you should, far from it) but the ending to this chapter is a great ending to a one shot. But please continue this fic anyway! I love you idea. Harry will keep on training and become a much better person while waiting for the big confrontation between Voldemort and himself. However, there is a big chance it won't happen since Nagini killing Voldemort's weak form, that there is a horcrux inside the snake, and the prophecy being destroyed just might have finished off Voldemort for good.

Still though, it would be nice to see what happens next. However, I hope this doesn't take you away from the Wizard's fall series!

biged78 posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 3:04am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

A very interesting start. Will read more as you continue to write. You two are my favorite Harry Potter authors. Thank you for sharing your stories with the rest of us.

kainboa posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 2:21am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

great chapter, love the scene where harry breaks the wand and says, politely of course, "sod off"

keep up the great work :)

la13 posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 2:17am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Ooh, another fun story!! So excited to be here for the start of it.

I can't wait to see how Sirius and Remus will teach Harry on their own and what will happen with that. Plus, I'm very intrigued to see how much interaction he'll get to have with the rest of the canon characters (I can guess that he'll see Hermione maybe just a little....)

Looking forward to see how this one turns out!

Vayne posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 2:05am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

So... He's got his land on Fiji and the girl he's in love with... All he needs now is a sheep, a cow and a couple of books on equine husbandry.

Tracey Cantillon posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 2:05am for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

I really thought you couldn't top Sunset and Sunrise but looks like I could be seriously wrong.....this looks like it may be the best yet....please please keep up the good work...you both are keeping me sane ha ha ha ha