lol posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 4:33pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

more more more more youre very good!!

irenechocalate posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 4:33pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

lol! I always loved stories of maniplulative Dumbledore getting punished! Like your disclaimers! All the best to your story!

Inziladun posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 4:33pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Great ideas in this fic, even if it wasn't a fake (that Harry had lost his magic) it would have been a good plan too...

Darkness posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 4:28pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Nagini kills Voldie, after calling him a useless creature. Hee hee, you just made my day! Ah well, the mental image of Harry in a tank facing off against muggle Dark Lord was nice while it lasted.

Very unique and original take on the whole "Harry needs more time to train" fic. Not only that, but he can enjoy life too! Looking forward to the next one.

Lufio posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 4:28pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

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Hee, that's amusing.
Where will you go next? The slate
The slate is open for much.

Chris1 posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 4:27pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Ohhh!! ^_^

Really interesting start :)

I wonder where will the conflict come from, since you took out most of the major players.

Thank you, Bob and Alyx, for sharing this with us :)

Chris

morriganscrow posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 4:25pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Oh, this is going to be a fun ride!
Loved the chapter. Albus almost choking, then surviving, only to be run over, was priceless.
I do hope you can bring Neville and Luna into this, oh, and the Twins, but I won't mind too much if Ron and Ginny are evil/jealous/killed in painful ways.
I look forward, with breathless anticipation, to the next update.

Gustav posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 4:16pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Love it and looking forward to the next chapter.

/G

Amamama posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 3:51pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Intriguing start! I do wonder how you'll get Voldemort to rise again - some neo-deez in the future perhaps, deciding it's a good thing to get his snakeness back? While canon is fine by me, and I don't mind JKR's Dumbledore at all, nor H/G, I do find your AU to be a fun twist.

Ana Maria Fernandes dos Santos posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 3:45pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

OMG!!!!!

When I think that you did your best you go and did even better everything you have done so far!!!. I love the story, I was laughing sooooo mad with the situation you put Dumbledore in I couldn't even breath :P, I love your Independent Harry and the mischief Remus and Sirius. I can hardly wait for more :)Thank you for sharing with us.

Ana

pfeil posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 3:11pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Now /that/'s a fun way of starting a story. That's one impressive muse you have there. (Or is it 2, since there are 2 of you?)

nurray posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 2:47pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Woo-Hoo your back with another multi-chapter epic (I hope) and H/Hr. I am salivating for the next chapter already.

*clean up on desk 3, cleanup on desk 3*

An interesting premise. Never thought of using the prophecy against the magic of the goblet.
Well done.

I would have thought, killing of Dumbledore was premature as Dumbledore re-appearing shortly after Voldemort 'announces' his return to the wizarding world, no doubt by killing a pile of people would add the ability of a true denouement between Harry and Dumbledore to occur at some point.

Voldemorts return could have been the killing of Dumbledore.

I just find that Dumbledore's death was too 'convenient' at that point in the story.

Ltank687 posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 2:46pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

love it... will voldemort come back through the Horcux of Nagini?

Yamikeckley posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 2:32pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

it was a welcome surprise to see this story pop up in my email account for notification. i enjoyed the new unique way that you got rid of Harry's problems. Hope that more comes out soon.

YK

dave gerecke posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 2:30pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

So, how are you going tohave some sort of conflict if the MOB is dead as is Moldyshorts, and Fudge and his ilk are in prison.

Having said that, what a ripper of a story
dave

Rufus posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 2:28pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Yay... Excellent as always... The "it's all psychological" way I had yet to read... The way Harry counter manipulated Dumbledore and all the others is masterful. Even Wormtail and Nagini.

Really excellent.

I can't wait to read the next part...

Laughing Cat posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 2:24pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

This is going to be an extremely interesting story, I think. Especially because, much like the first half of Into The Woods, your first chapter appears to be a full story. I look forward to seeing how the story develops from here.

ursis001 posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 2:17pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Hey Alyx and Bob,
Great story, as usual.
Thanks ursis001

haphazard1 posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 2:10pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

Wow. This was certainly different. And I mean that in the good sense of different. :-)

Talk about falling far and fast...Albus wiped out financially, politically, professionally, and personally, then killed in a muggle accident. Ouch.

So the foretold Harry vs Voldie fight is still on. Interesting. Between the Horcrux and eating the homonculus, I'm guessing Nagini is going to become a host/vessel for the dark lord.

And it's great to see Harry/Hermione.

Fantastic beginning, and it is always great to see a new story from you.

clmilton posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 2:02pm for Chapter 1 - The Goblet of Fire

wow, Harry turns the world on its ear and then disappears. The question is, what will happen when he resurfaces? Wizarding world won't know what hit them.