ROBERT_1958 posted a comment on Sunday 10th February 2008 12:41pm for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued

Great story.


Where is Dobby & Winky?

Elizabeth3 posted a comment on Wednesday 6th February 2008 3:45pm for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued

The scene with they lawn chair converstaion between Atlantis and Houston had me rolling from laughing! I loved it!

Tammerz posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2008 4:29am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued

Great chapter, and this story is intriguing, it's written in an original style.

Just one thing- Snakes are venomous, not poisonous.

Anansii posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd January 2008 3:25pm for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued

Just a quibble - Harry might well be unaware that sushi is Japanese, not Chinese, but I have trouble believing Hermoine wouldd be, and fail to enlighten him. Or Dan or Emma for that matter. It's kinda like having someone suggest a French restaurant, and have the invitee say "Ok, but let's not order pizza."

dennisud posted a comment on Sunday 9th December 2007 1:13pm for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued

I kinda hoped the DA-Six from the 5th book would still be involved and they are by what Luna's Dad is doing with those off the wall stories, but I'd like to see neville, Ginny and Luna more. Ron can find a shark to talk to (;-))

dennisud

jackstraw posted a comment on Friday 7th December 2007 10:23am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued

A basic principle of contract law is that you cannot have a contract if both sides do not agree to the terms. Harry never could have had a binding contract (even in canon) because he never agreed to the terms of participating in the Tournament. That always bothered me in GOF. How can he possibly be forced to participate when he never put his name in? However, after he began to participate then he could have had been held to an implied contract that was enforceable to a degree, but he was never obligated to participate. And even after this, most contracts entered by a minor are unenforceable or Harry could say that because he never understood his obligations, since he never formally entered into a contract, and thereby could still break the contract.

Of course, in PofP after Harry refused, the Goblet could have tried to enforce the contract (as it had spit out his name) and then the prophesy could take primacy which cause a clash of magics. But I don't think Harry could have ever lost his magic, even for that moment because of an unenforceable contract. His refusal to participate and the throwing down of his wand could have affected other charms that Dumbledore had placed on him that were dependent upon his acknowledgement of Dumbledore's position as guide or substitute father-figure. Something like that.

I know there is the catch-all excuse that magic contracts are different than regular contracts, but that part doesn't work for me. Otherwise, smashing story so far!

Bobmin356 replied:

Let me see if I get this.... you're attempting to apply principles of LAW to fantasy fiction?

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Might I suggest trying some CSI or LA Law fan fiction if you want that sort of stuff.

Arkeus posted a comment on Tuesday 4th December 2007 12:54am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued

Hey, good!
A lot of things i mildly disagree with in technicalities, but it's well enough done so i will shut up.

Good ideas about fuuji and so on.

ponderous stibbons posted a comment on Friday 23rd November 2007 9:42am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued

Enjoyed this on the second read. WIll probably still enjoy a third.

Best line:

Surprisingly, the twins spoke to Neville and they promised him that they would keep Ron under control.

sanghamitra posted a comment on Monday 12th November 2007 3:27pm for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued

Hmmm ....... this is a refreshing change from super Harry and his merry band. Though I like your writings a lot, that one went a bit too overboard so I had to stop. Hope this continues in the same flavour as it is now, or like your first couple of stories.

Robert Cook posted a comment on Tuesday 6th November 2007 6:06am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued

Excellent story that I've read a couple of times now. I did catch one thing that I wondered about however. 'Sirius shook his head. "I had the same thought. Moody thinks otherwise." ' Should that have been Moony or is Mad-Eye in on what is going on and just not mentioned before?

Anxiously awaiting chapter 4.

jalva200 posted a comment on Sunday 4th November 2007 12:42pm for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued

God i love yalls storys.

I don't mind little action as long as there some fluff ;) i love to picture Hermione in a bakini *drool* keep up the great work you two and *Slips Bob a couple of donuts* anyway love the story keep it up!

Hemotem posted a comment on Thursday 1st November 2007 2:59am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued

A very good story I must say. Now that you have gone and done two chapters of a good story when can we expect to see another =) No rush of course but as I said it is a good story and I do hope to see more of it soon.
Thank you.


Hemotem

djo posted a comment on Wednesday 31st October 2007 3:55am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued

great first chapters - looking forward to read on!

power214063 posted a comment on Tuesday 30th October 2007 1:44am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued

please update soon i want to know what ollivander said about the tracking thing

knightsbridge posted a comment on Monday 29th October 2007 7:05pm for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued

Thanks for dialing Hermione down a bit...actually a LOT. During DH I had wished someone would stuff her in that bloody beaded bag and sealed it shut. Okay, so I'm not an HP/HG shipper, but this Hermione is a tad softer, and isn't leading Harry around by the nose.
I love the names you create:'Milly Thistlewhistle'? Harry's unibrow teacher...lol, has anyone noticed that without being plucked, waxed or whatever they do, Daniel is rather close to a unibrow? My girl and I were walking in Ft. William (Scotland) while the cast was filming in the town, and Philomena actually snorted whe she saw this short kid with one eybrow. I doubt he was amused.

nintschi posted a comment on Saturday 27th October 2007 6:15am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued

please update very soon I really love this story.
take care
Nintschi

Uranium posted a comment on Saturday 27th October 2007 2:23am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued

Great story!
Love the harmony ship.

looking forward to the next update.

DawnsRedemption posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd October 2007 6:16am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued

Love the story.
Its definitely one of those feel good stories, I love the realistic way they get together. Please continue it rocks!!

Just one mistake. In chapter 1 Wormtail is killed in Riddle Manor, in chapter 2 Remus finds him in the Gaunt home.

Bobmin356 replied:

This really isn't an error. It's a matter of perception. In chapter 1, Voldemort considered the house his. He is, after all, the last member of that family alive. In chapter 2, Remus comes along and calls it what he knows it as, the Gaunt home because they were the last family to live in it.

Both viewpoints are right, not an error.

aengus posted a comment on Monday 22nd October 2007 11:36pm for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued

I just have a simple question. I think that you two said that you were H/G shippers and were taking the sunset/sunrise series as an experiment, seeing if you could write something like H/Hr.

My question is, have you two joined the H/Hr shippers or do you just like both pairings.

Other than that, great story as usual

aengus

deathzealot posted a comment on Monday 22nd October 2007 2:46pm for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued

Interesting.... This is new, yet refreshing and I hope you guys keep this going and I eagerly await the next chapter. Though one question is Cindy a Squib or at least Magical Related Muggle. Anyways see you in the next chapter.