The Power of the Press
Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued
By Bobmin
Reviews
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Monday 22nd October 2007 12:01pm for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued
Hands Treck a compass that doesn't work. Now you'll be even more lost.
I've fought the urge, but I just have to ask, is that a Tate's Compass? After all, "He who has a Tate's is lost."
Kali_Potter posted a comment on Monday 22nd October 2007 7:50am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued
It's good. Really good.
tntornado posted a comment on Monday 22nd October 2007 12:34am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued
I really like this story - Action storys are nice, but no matter the ship, storyline or even the fandom, the story itself, not the action parts are what matter, and so far you've done a great job on this story.
Keep it up, and update soon!
Looking forward to reading more!
TnTornado
greenansatsu posted a comment on Sunday 21st October 2007 2:51pm for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued
I like the style of the story and its entertaining to read but, I'm failing to see the plot. Hermione and Harry have a semi-long distance relationship? Hopefully you'll surprise me with a twist next chapter but so far this is just an overly perfect very well written, Harry gets a holiday fiction.
I still like your stories though and will continue to read and wait eagerly for your next chapter to whatever you write.
Donald McLeod posted a comment on Saturday 20th October 2007 11:14am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued
I love Hermione and Herry Fic's. Whitch of you thought of 'I accidentally levitated a lawn chair into orbit.' later to be ID as Chines
'Commander McMonagle looked at shuttle pilot Curtis Brown and shook his head. Who knew NASA has experts on lawn chairs?'. It must be the emu killer.
in-kinsfire posted a comment on Saturday 20th October 2007 5:18am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued
Very nice. I'm glad this was expanded from 6.6k words. Please continue.
Wilyoldjane posted a comment on Friday 19th October 2007 7:59pm for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued
Lawn chairs in space? I really liked that!!
Can`t wait to read more, please update soon!!!
Jan
Anaknisatanas posted a comment on Friday 19th October 2007 8:53am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued
I love the new story. I can see Ron being a git for a while to come and no worries, I won't hold my breath on seeing the golden trio get back together.
Shadalarion2 posted a comment on Thursday 18th October 2007 5:32am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued
Good reading here, as for Nagini the snake, I like to some way Harry can save her or maybe have her intelligent enough to as for help in removing the horcrux and becoming a free snake. (would not be suprised if Dumbledork stolen her when she was a baby snake from the Potter Family vault and gave her somehow to voldy).
Sandrine Lupin posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 5:32pm for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued
really nice job....
I can't wait to read the next chapter.
So good luck and courage for the writing
Ronnie McMains posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 5:24pm for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued
I'm enjoying this immensely, as I enjoy nearly everything you write (Attack of the Fanfic Authors notwithstanding). One note though. Isn't it Heliopaths that the Ministry is conspiring with, rather than Heliotropes? As I recall, isn't heliotrope a color (according to Wiki, it's a pink-purple shade)? I've read way too many fanfics where Luna goes on about the Ministry hiding Heliopaths (can't help it, H/L is one of my favorite ships).
Keep up the good work, and when is that X-men crossover coming?
beauty0102 posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 2:24pm for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued
yeah great chapter can't wait for more so please update agian and soon.
dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 1:32pm for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued
Patented bat suit!
*snicker*
Where's the flaming turkey?
GinnyLover posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 9:47am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued
Loved it! Especially the *dramatic voice* LAWN CHAIR IN SPACE!!!!
Is Harry a Horocrux?
Bobmin356 replied:
No, Harry is not a horcrux.
EricThorsen posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 8:59am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued
Excellent work. I like the pro-Sirius AU as well. One of the things that I like about your work is you write believable Harry/Hermione without making Ron Evil. I like how you just faded him out in this story. Keep up the good work.
Manatheron posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 8:22am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued
First and foremost, Excellent chapter! It's always interesting to see where your minds are wandering too. I do however have a question. Your Fanfiction.net stories... Do you intend to continue them? or have you done so and I forgot to add you to the alert list?
Bobmin356 replied:
We have NOTHING active on fanfiction.net All of the stories over there have been completed and those story arcs are done.
Teganii posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 6:11am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued
Great chapter. I'm realy enjoying the building of the emotional bond between the two teens. Like all teen relationships there are ups and downs. We see a lot of ups, will there be downs as well? The make up parts could be interesting as well.
Will we see Remus build a relationship in this story or will this be too much to cover?
Once again, thanks so much for sharing your stories.
ponderous stibbons posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 3:51am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued
Thanks for the long long chapter. Glad this fic isn't overboard like Parallels or Sunrise - the focus is on training rather than its final rewards. And Hermione is being treated as something more than Harry's sidekick and romantic damsel.
webdoc posted a comment on Tuesday 16th October 2007 11:50pm for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued
Oh yeah... I just thought of a character you haven't used in the disclaimer section. Nagini, maybe have a nagini stew. Ok I need to stop over medicating. I'll go and mumble to myself in the corner.
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 22nd October 2007 1:15pm for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued