texasranger_10 posted a comment on Monday 15th October 2007 5:13am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued

excellent, a polt line i have not seen. and you make it work so well to. i love the way you are doing the relationship h/hr. taking it slow and steady. your journals help with that. as always great story.

as far as bashing dumbles and ron. bash away i never did like the way jk did the thing in the stories and they did not get in trouble for it. they both got away with to many things.

texasranger_10 posted a comment on Monday 15th October 2007 5:12am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued

excellent, a polt line i have not seen. and you make it work so well to. i love the way you are doing the relationship h/hr. taking it slow and steady. your journals help with that. as always great story.

as far as bashing dumbles and ron. bash away i never did like the way jk did the thing in the stories and they did get in trouble for it. they both got away with to many things.

Treck posted a comment on Monday 15th October 2007 5:08am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued

Snip: Alyx sighed and shook her head. "Do we really need a mascot? I mean you've had penguins, llamas, Emus, Hippogriffs, Elephants, Killer Whales and a clown named Bobo in our disclaimers. Why not do something new and different?" /snip

You need Dr. Doolittle.

(pause to read chapter)

Ok. Now that I've read the story I just have one comment...

What the hell did you waist a chair? Don't you think it would have been better if Ron and/or Draco were sitting in it when Harry launched it into space?

uthamm posted a comment on Monday 15th October 2007 4:39am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued

Very nice! I really like the Sirus and Remus combination and can't wait to read the Cindy/Sirus interaction. Nice work on the Legislation about potions - do I sense the hint of something brewing there?

Nice work - will the next chappie have McGonagall storming the island?

Memory King posted a comment on Monday 15th October 2007 4:33am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued

This was an excellent update.

Riyan posted a comment on Monday 15th October 2007 4:22am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued

Awesome chapter. I'm very much looking forward to how this story will move forward. Am I right in assuming that it's only going to be another two chapters or so, based on your projected word count?

By the way, it looks like you may have missed a closing italics tag somewhere around the June 10th, 1995 journal entry.

daewos posted a comment on Monday 15th October 2007 4:00am for Chapter 2 - Year Four Continued

Excellent chapter - I love stories that take the time to really fill in the characters so that I can see what makes them tick and you have certainly done that!

I look forward to seeing how you take this forward as it has the potential to be your best story yet, even better than Wizards Fall. (Incidentally, any chance of more WF soon?)