Fenris Ulf posted a comment on Tuesday 13th November 2007 12:24am for Chapter 3 - Year Five

Thanks for another great update. The notebooks between Harry and Hermione are interesting. I can't wait to see what the journal does with the blood in the pentagram. It's good to finally read a story where Sirius gets a good break even if it's just for awhile. OC's have this bad tendancy of meeting squishy ends.

BTW I attached some Donuts via HTML for Bob maybe the HTML won't be removed and Bob will get his sugar free donuts.

Rob

sanghamitra posted a comment on Monday 12th November 2007 4:42pm for Chapter 3 - Year Five

don't mind me asking but whats the deal with DONUTS !!

AK posted a comment on Sunday 11th November 2007 5:03pm for Chapter 3 - Year Five

Why would Scrimgeour try to take over Hogwarts? Fudge's reason was the paranoia instilled by the presence of Dumbledore. But since McGonagall doesn't have anywhere near the political clout why would the ministry work so hard at controlling a school? Plus Scrimgeour didn't seem to be really the pureblood bigot type.

And about science: Science does not deny magic, actually science does not deny anything. Science merely explain any observed phenomenon to the outmost of our present knowledge. So for example when science says that the closest distance between two points is the straight line, it merely states what has been observed. If something that denies that statement were to be observed then the science involved would have to be corrected. :)

And thanks for the much reduced amount of italics, my eyes thank you.

BrinkL posted a comment on Saturday 10th November 2007 3:30am for Chapter 3 - Year Five

haha. story is brilliant. p.s. i love the author notes. they are as ingenious as your stories! keep it up. can't wait to read the next chapter.

IceBlades posted a comment on Wednesday 7th November 2007 11:50pm for Chapter 3 - Year Five

Chapter all gone? Have to return to normal college life? BORING!

Great chapter guys, I can't wait for the next one. Maybe I'll be able to shell through that one in one go and not have it punctuated by lab reports.

Happy writing!

Genericrandom posted a comment on Wednesday 7th November 2007 3:35pm for Chapter 3 - Year Five

Although this is a good story with a very unusual execution and gets Harry away from Hogwarts (and keeps him away, a terrible inconsistency in 'leaving Hogwarts' stories) the best part is easily the Fan Fiction Excuse Note. I love it, I've saved it to my computer, and I'm considering printing it out and hanging it on my door. It's awesome.

that1 posted a comment on Wednesday 7th November 2007 9:01am for Chapter 3 - Year Five

Yay, another chapter.

Fun stuff, keep it up.

Mel Evans posted a comment on Tuesday 6th November 2007 3:45pm for Chapter 3 - Year Five

I just read the chapters you've written so far and I love your story. Can't wait to see what happens when Harry and Hermione use the Journals!

webdoc posted a comment on Tuesday 6th November 2007 8:55am for Chapter 3 - Year Five

Bravo!!!!!!

I am out of donuts, been eating them all on my daily trips to the hospital in toledo to visit my dad. Otherwise I'd give ya some

la13 posted a comment on Tuesday 6th November 2007 7:54am for Chapter 3 - Year Five

Ooh, another great update! I like the way you write Sirius, I think you're probably right about Azkaban making him a bit immature.

I also liked seeing Professor McGonagall figure everything out. If anyone did you know she would!

Tlcatlady posted a comment on Monday 5th November 2007 2:57pm for Chapter 3 - Year Five

yay!!

Voldemort is Dead posted a comment on Monday 5th November 2007 2:29pm for Chapter 3 - Year Five

You forgot about having a cat and cleaning out the litterbox, feeding and giving fresh water daily.

Great story so far.

a_wanderer posted a comment on Monday 5th November 2007 10:29am for Chapter 3 - Year Five

It made me laugh. I don't even recall seeing any grammar or spelling errors. I like the depth you have given the characters. I'm not certain about how you've chosen to draw Ginny.

NTP

Bobmin356 replied:

Don't be too quick to judge Ginny from one reference. She's young and won't be portrayed as a slut in this story. On the other hand, she will be very interested in boys with a bit of a roving eye.

She doesn't have a big role in this and we won't much of her.

rathvander posted a comment on Monday 5th November 2007 7:52am for Chapter 3 - Year Five

LOL

That note is the best.

Oh and the chapter is awesome as well ^_~

Thanks for the update, it's helped pass the time at my oh so boring job.

SamGadschie posted a comment on Monday 5th November 2007 6:41am for Chapter 3 - Year Five

Hi there,

very good one!

SamGadschie

PS: Please check up on Lasik. Especially for somebody who is near-sighted, the growth of the eyeball ends in the late twenties. Lasik should not be done before that age.

morriganscrow posted a comment on Monday 5th November 2007 5:52am for Chapter 3 - Year Five

Fab chapter. Cool story. No excuses needed.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Monday 5th November 2007 4:37am for Chapter 3 - Year Five

I think my favorite part was the dance number.

Hehehe.

kcgx23 posted a comment on Monday 5th November 2007 12:02am for Chapter 3 - Year Five

Great chapter, I can't wait for more.

jalva200 posted a comment on Sunday 4th November 2007 11:23pm for Chapter 3 - Year Five

*Prints out your form*

Hehehehe now i got the excuse the bosses been wanting!

GOod chapter, keep up the greatness!

Can't wait till more and till the next update i shall go to work!

TTFN

diablos_el_swave posted a comment on Sunday 4th November 2007 5:06pm for Chapter 3 - Year Five

But toddlers and guns mix so well....