Twylyte posted a comment on Wednesday 1st June 2011 1:21am

An incredible story. An interesting, entertaining and quite often amusing tale that masterfully wove canon elements and characters with new situations and ideas to create a masterpiece!
Excellent work, though I must say some of my favourite parts were the Quibbler headlines.
-Twy

Cassandra30 posted a comment on Friday 25th March 2011 12:44am

What a terrific idea! The Marauders Ride Again!

Myuu November posted a comment on Sunday 20th February 2011 10:51am

I really enjoyed reading this story. It is certainly different, and very captivating. I like the way the timeline is given above each part. The chapter arrangement makes sense, though they are a bit on the long side. The diaries are good, and even though the general idea is not exactly new, the way they work is. They make for a good stylistic means, too. Extra points for the tutors and for Harry's arm that hurts in the cold after his defense exam.
While I was not much interested in the articles by the Quibbler, I enjoeyd Snapes stay at Gustav's. His house is ingenious, I loved the Holey Room. And Snape quoting the Potter Puppet Pals: "What is that mysterious ticking noise?"
Good job, thanks for sharing! :)

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Tuesday 15th February 2011 2:12pm

"What is that mysterious ticking noise?"
HAHAHAHAHA!!! I love that one! Great story and the ending was pretty good. I wouldve liked a bit more Ginny action. Maybe she cohorts thrown a hussy fit? Eh. Anyway, well done!

Separ posted a comment on Monday 14th February 2011 2:45pm

Great story, though I had hoped for a bit more preview into their future at the end ;-)

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Sunday 13th February 2011 2:56pm

Are there any HP/LOTR crossovers you would recommend? It sounds interesting even if my favorite fanfic authors didn't write it. (That's you two, by the way ;))
Great chapter once again. I wonder if you two have written anything that wasn't good... Doubtful. ;)

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Sunday 13th February 2011 4:54am

I'm asuming when you say eighty degrees you mean Fahrenheit because 80* celcius would be a furnace... Do they use fehrenheit in Fiji? Eh, whatever this is fiction!
Great chapter as always.

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Saturday 12th February 2011 7:18pm

I might be wrong, but was that a reference to Monty Python and the Holy Grail in the authors notes?
Great story; I like the character driven plot just as much as your usual style. I'm glad you two are willing to experiment with different writing styles. It makes your stories more fun to read.
Keep up the great work!

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Saturday 12th February 2011 12:19pm

Another great chapter! The authors note was pretty funny. Well played.

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Saturday 12th February 2011 12:19am

Harry and Sirius' little pool fight was really funny! I almost rolled off my bed laughing! Good job!

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Friday 11th February 2011 7:09pm

Once again, you two manage to think of something unique. I've read fics where Harry lost his magic, but not where he lost it before killing Voldemort, or their connection meaning their magic was equal even if Voldie did a ritual. Very interesting, although it reads a little like a one-shot. Did it start as one? Anyway, once again, well done.

lwj2 posted a comment on Sunday 30th January 2011 10:18pm

Very Well Done. Thank you, this is one of the most enjoyable stories I've read in the Potter fanfic world.

And, quite frankly, I've enjoyed it more than Rowling's last two books.

lwj2 posted a comment on Sunday 30th January 2011 12:53pm

Generic reader 3.1412 [moustache, mild obesity] notes (prior to reading this chapter, but after reading the prologue/disclaimer) that he is enjoying this series immensely and thanks the authors for sharing it.

He also notes (strictly as an aside that two of his favourite authors may have an interest in) that salt/brackish marshes are (at least where he lives) smelly places, frequently feature buzzards circling and that crabs eat almost anything.

blue icing posted a comment on Sunday 30th January 2011 5:52am

Another great fic! Brilliant!

visjith posted a comment on Saturday 25th December 2010 8:50am

I loved the end of Great Albus Dumbdork. Great work.

LordSia posted a comment on Thursday 9th December 2010 8:59pm

Great fic... And the name was accurate, but not quite so overdone as I had thought. Well done, all in all.

mimsical_dream posted a comment on Monday 29th November 2010 1:12am

*shivers*
(whispering) They're onto me! Oh, if only I had run in the opposite direction when I saw the "Trespassers welcome with a Bit of Potato" sign.

There is nowhere safe to lurk anymore.

kashikoineko posted a comment on Monday 15th November 2010 5:24pm

I read your story in one go. It was hard, and its 2:21 AM but I just couldn't stop! I really loved the "articles", the insane Snape (I did not miss the "What's the source or the ticking noise" puuuure genious) and the way you (while sometimes it was a bit much) portrayed Harry and Hermione's insecurities. Good luck with your other stories.

kashikoineko posted a comment on Monday 15th November 2010 5:24pm

I read your story in one go. It was hard, and its 2:21 AM but I just couldn't stop! I really loved the "articles", the insane Snape (I did not miss the "What's the source or the ticking noise" puuuure genious) and the way you (while sometimes it was a bit much) portrayed Harry and Hermione's insecurities. Good luck with your other stories

maddsloth posted a comment on Thursday 21st October 2010 1:14am

First this is my first review for the story, I have read a few of your others and liked each one I read, so I would like to thank you for writing this story and the others.

While I will not knock you for your ‘cruciatus’ it is clearly worse than canon being as how canon Harry’s first expositor was much longer and several times by Voldemort who I would think is much more powerful then this DE… my problem with it though is a wizards power is a is not all that important, all someone had to do was seek up behind Dumbledore and Crucio him for a few seconds and he is as scary as a shark out of water, as Harry showed he can still bite but he is not in a position of dominance and the same could be said for Voldemort we know of at least one DE that turned on him Regulas, if another just decided to Crucio Voldemort it would not matter how powerful Voldemort was. You have magic altering the life span of people and healing people I would think the more magical power you have the more protection it would offer from that curse…

That ignores the fact that Harry was taken by surprise by the attack did he think the guy was coming up to him to talk about the weather while his friend attacked the boat?