By Bobmin
Reviews
anonmg1 posted a comment on Wednesday 9th January 2008 3:24pm
Yet another magnificent chapter. One thing I'd like to mention while it's still clearly worded in my head: I find it quite amusing that now that Harry's "gone," Ginny has almost immediately romantically latched on to the next rich pureblood with low self-esteem that she can find. Not sure if that's how you intend it to be perceived, but it seems to fit well with how you are portraying her (and by extention Molly's) character in this particular fic. Also, enjoyed Hermione's finally giving Lavender just a small fraction of what she deserves. Briefly expected a scathing remark roughly along the lines of "better to be thought a prude than to be nothing but an empty head that's smaller than the tits it's perched on". Sorry if that last thing wasn't phrased like I planned it to be, but it's about 230 in the morning right now, and I never took my brain pills today, so I'm even more tired and less focused than I usually am. So good night, er, morning, and as always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
One more thing that just popped into my head: "Evan" spending a day or so in the castle as a guest of Profs Lupin and Tonks, during which Lavendar and Parvati might get an in person and more extreme version of the letter he sent Hermione that one time in I can't remember what chapter it was right now. Also possibility of Guest-Assistant-Professor Black. Maybe, maybe not. Either way, fun to think about. NOW, good whatever-I'm-supposed-to-call-the-current-part-of-the-day, I'm going to bed.
Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Wednesday 9th January 2008 1:54pm
I can't understand why people insist on flaming you guys. Your stories are so creative and well-written in general. Yes, the occasional spelling or grammar errors slip by, but if *I* can ignore it, as obsessed as I am by such details, then ANYONE can.
I am so enjoying this story so far!
rippergirl posted a comment on Wednesday 9th January 2008 1:09pm
Excellent chapter as always.(and I'm not just saying that so I don't get hurt by Alyx).Can't wait to see how Nagini is going to get into Hogwart's though I am going to guess that it includes some of the secret tunnels into the school somehow or a possible tunnel that leads directly into the sewers/tunnels that you go through to get to the Chamber. Write fast and Alyx you do a great job with the AN and anyone who disagrees should get beat upside the head with a cast iron frying pan.The bigger the better.
Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Wednesday 9th January 2008 3:01am
Love how this is developing. OK, so I'm really far behind on this story. Too bad. At least this way I don't have to wait for updates before I can read more...
Oh, and that Fan Fiction Excuse note is absolutely brilliant, by the way!
ginnysohma posted a comment on Tuesday 8th January 2008 9:11am
Another great chapter. I am so glad that this isn't over; I really didn't think this fic would go past 7 chapters and I fully expected this to be the end. So glad to see it isn't! And I disagree with Crys, Alyx. I like your AN's better. Your sarcasm and wit makes me laugh. So I'll top "Melferd's small tactical nuke" with a BIG industrial size one. With blinky lights. And lots of buttons that emit different noises but have no function. [Use it to annoy Bob.. now that your llamas are gone and I haven't seen you use your frying pan of doom lately...]
Cheers!
ginnysohma
beauty01021 posted a comment on Tuesday 8th January 2008 8:14am
yeah great chapter can't wait for more so please update agian and soon.
kainboa posted a comment on Tuesday 8th January 2008 4:54am
lmao. Great chapter as usual, can't wait to see what you come up with next.
keep up the great work :)
lunachic posted a comment on Tuesday 8th January 2008 3:34am
Oh! I forgot my question. Is there going to be alot of military talk like there was in Sunrise? Let me know so I can brush up on my terms. (I had a hard time understanding so of it the first time around). God, now I feel like Hermione, reading to prepare myself for some pleasure reading. Kind of makes me sick as I'm sure it does you.
Bobmin356 replied:
Nope, no Military terms for this story. Can't promise to hold to that for future stories.
lunachic posted a comment on Tuesday 8th January 2008 3:29am
Hey guys thought I'd let you know how much I enjoyed this chapter. I thought the bit about the Dursley's was extremely brilliant although I would have enjoyed reading about them being thrown out on their fat/bony asses. Its a thrill that I can only now fantasize about unless you decide to do it later after they can no longer afford living expenses and make me an extremely happy girl. Oh, and Alex, I happen to love the way you do AN. Tell Bob that and to put a sock it it (or incert cruel punishment of choice). I think its hilarious and I give props to both of you.
Eewec posted a comment on Tuesday 8th January 2008 3:14am
Heating rub... personal lubricant... oooo sounds like a story that needs sharing. Anywho on with the review.
I love the story and have been a fan of yours for a while now, but I have to say, the AN's are a like a breath of fresh air after driving through London; The metaphorical trip through the chapter is interesting with occasional hairy moments, but nothing says 'End of Chapter' like Alyx complaining about removing fish guts from her hair... or hitting folks with an FPIA+5, ahh fresh air indeed.
I'd send you some fire ants but international post doesn't like live animals... I think it's the unpressurised holds on the plane.
Oh, and one last thing... readers of fan fiction are actually supposed to have brains left now?!? ooops. Having spent many many many hours reading fan fic, I'm now a fan fic author in training now, first chapter of my first fic went up monday on ficwad... so is that the first sign that the end is here and I finally need to be put out of my misery?
Jane Tamplen posted a comment on Tuesday 8th January 2008 1:51am
OH, man, what a GREAT story! I can't wait for more - hurry, please!
morriganscrow posted a comment on Tuesday 8th January 2008 12:14am
The Singing Penis was wonderful!! I'm just glad I was neither eating nor drinking when I read about it.
Fab chapter all up. The revenge on the Dursleys was just right, the stuff with Amelia too, while Harry and Hermione's "first time" was dealt with perfectly.
Amit Patel posted a comment on Monday 7th January 2008 9:33pm
Nice chapter, I like the slow paced nature of this story as it does not seem rushed and all over the place to get to another action scene.
But does this now mean the end of bookspace? As Harry is back in England.
Amit Patel posted a comment on Monday 7th January 2008 9:32pm
Nice chapter, I like the slow paced nature of this story as it does not seem rushed and all over the place to get to another action scene.
But does this now mean the end of bookspace? As Harry is not in England.
jakjakattk posted a comment on Monday 7th January 2008 1:35pm
First let me just say a very big THANK you to the betas (Keith and Dorothy) for all of their work. I that you have a very hard just since Bob can’t spell and don’t worry about Alyx’s note about you pink bunny slippers she just hasn’t met her match yet. Really it’s OK if you wear pink bunny slippers, everyone does (ok well not me because I have a very small wand and can’t bear people laughing at me).
Now Bob….. Oh, wait sorry about the spelling thing. It’s just that it take so long to get your stuff through beta that…well there has to be something wrong with it. LOL
Now Bob why is Nagini already in Hogsmeade? Are you trying to get through the story early? ……..OK, don’t start throwing punches. It would be nice if your story could just have say 20 chapters.
Next topic Bob, where is Ginny? You know I know that she loves me so write it in THE DAMED STORY…..
Thanks guys for the new chapter and happy writing.
jakjakattk
drkjester posted a comment on Monday 7th January 2008 1:19pm
As usual another great chapter. I can't wait for the next thrilling chapter.
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 7th January 2008 1:04pm
Very good chapter. I am so enjoying this story.
gunny
jalva200 posted a comment on Monday 7th January 2008 12:23pm
GODI LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH CANT BEAT IT!!
jdcox61 posted a comment on Monday 7th January 2008 7:31am
Yeah! I love Hermione in see-through negligee's! There's quite simply nothing better. O yeah!
Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Thursday 10th January 2008 11:42am