Frank LeTanc posted a comment on Sunday 6th January 2008 1:12am

poor bob......alyx is off her meds again, and not even donuts can save him this time.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Sunday 6th January 2008 12:54am

I only read my own reviews once, and never read reviews of others' stories, but whatever Crys wrote/said, I wholeheartedly disagree with.

Alyx, let me state that you are brill at A/Ns. (Bob, I'll take you on any day rather than... er, oh, hello, Alyx, er, nice outfit.)

Great chapter guys. The international political stuff is getting more and more interesting.

ponderous stibbons posted a comment on Sunday 6th January 2008 12:47am

my fav line:

She grabbed Cindy by an arm and dragged her over to where Sirius stood. "My dear, has Sirius ever told you of the time he spent two days in the girls’ changing rooms under an invisibility cloak, and then had the audacity to claim he had been locked in?"

charlotte posted a comment on Sunday 6th January 2008 12:28am

You are such an awesome team in your writing and plot structures. I look forward to each from story ya'll. And Bob becareful about about those jokes at Alyx. Remember the female is concidered the more dangerous in most species.

DrT posted a comment on Saturday 5th January 2008 10:41pm

Laughed loud and long at 'Little Sirius the Crooner' -- even funnier than what I once had Harry do to Snape's willie.

Excellent development all around, esp. getting Remus at Hogwarts for Nagini-fest 97 along with Tonks. Now, if only Even could be there as an assistant flight intructor . . . or at least take up residence in Hogsmeade. . . . Oh, well, I'm sure you already have it all well-plotted out

"T"

texasranger_10 posted a comment on Saturday 5th January 2008 10:29pm

good lord let her be she hurts more people than you do. but i do love the an's i get a good giggle out of them. but with the snape clone you kept are we gonna see it in the an now. hope so snape needs a good long torture. love the story as far as how many chappies can it run until the end of time. yep that would be good.

the_elusive_snitch posted a comment on Saturday 5th January 2008 10:12pm

I absolutely love your story. You provide an excellent level of detail into what's going on the characters without overdoing any of it. I've been reading for quite some time now and am sorry to say it's taken me this long to actually post a review. I'd go back, reread, and post for other chapters and stories but unfortunately my time-turner broke; and you write some bloody long chapters.
P.S. If Bob keeps making you do the a/n's Alyx take the easy way... read a Doctor Who fanfic awhile back had a sonic-stapler in it. I'm sure they'd let you borrow it.

CaptainG posted a comment on Saturday 5th January 2008 10:02pm

I've decided to ask a rather inane question as a review today simply to see if I can get myself into the author's notes:
The little section from Hermione on losing her virginity - Bitter much?

Bobmin356 replied:

Bitter? No, not really. Just tired of male oriented stories that always make the first time a wonderful experience when the fact is, it so rarely is. This is a case where Art should be imitating life.

speedy_86 posted a comment on Saturday 5th January 2008 9:52pm

Terrific chapter again.

Alyx, I have one simple request. Can I be the keeper of your weapons (when you're not keeping them) and do the maintenance of your torture tools?
That would make me soooooo happy. Only I'd perhaps use your weapons from time to time...only to see if they're in a satisfactory state, torture tools as well.

Best wishes and happy...whatever you want to do.

speedy

Dark Angel: Version 4.0 posted a comment on Saturday 5th January 2008 9:02pm

*Gives Alyx an oversized adamentium mallet with a depleted uranium core that has the words "The Widowmaker" eteched onto the side in fancy letters*

Here, I hope this gift will appease you. I also actually like your ANs. They're funny to read.

Snowdove30 posted a comment on Saturday 5th January 2008 8:05pm

Brilliant update!! Especially loved Sirius and his singing penis... I have never laughed so hard.Hermione's brand of revenge was excellent. Did the wards at Hogwarts alert anyone to the presence of a horux? Considering Harry's past of being praised/vilified by the wizarding world, I would not be surprised if after defeating Voldemort they attempted to try and put him in Azkaban.

UdderPD posted a comment on Saturday 5th January 2008 7:57pm

This is getting booring, not the story which is brilliant but writing reviews that say yhat the story is brilliant.

I am not certain that this review will make sense to anyone.


TTFN UdderPD

kutekess posted a comment on Saturday 5th January 2008 7:02pm

Is being insane a requirement for an author? (ever notice how author and auror are similar) Have a happy 2008! Don't kill too many characters

The Midnight Poster posted a comment on Saturday 5th January 2008 6:50pm

Great Merlin's balls, I'm simply astounded that Hermione would the first magical person to do a "Drive By" ! :)

I was wondering what Tonks reaction was when she found out the truth about that prank of writing her name in the snow? :)

As always I'm looking forward to the next update.

KenF posted a comment on Saturday 5th January 2008 6:15pm

Hmmm. Much happened, but overall this chapter feels more like a transition.

Hermione's curse was just plain vindictive.

There is no suprise that Bones found out about Harry... his existance has to be the worst kept secret in the wizarding world.

Good chapter, I'm looking forward to Hermione's 7th year.

Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Saturday 5th January 2008 6:01pm

I don't know what Crys is talking about. I love your AN's. They're so... violent. It gives them that added flavor. Frankly, Bob, you just don't have that extra flare Alyx does for gore.

As to the actual story. Excellent work. I know it won't happen, but it would almost be funny if the entire thing with Voldemort ended with Nagini being clubbed like a baby seal and then Voldemort's thoughts as he is trapped in the scrying crystal and it gets hotter and hotter. Of course, he couldn't feel the heat, no senses and all, but there are other ways to describe the effects and the agony he would go through. Hmm...

Sorry, went to my happy place there for a moment.

Thank you for writing.

Mike (MoA)

dic posted a comment on Saturday 5th January 2008 5:42pm

hiho

well, it's always a pleasure reading your updates.
I'm a little bit confused as to the timeline in this chapter - nagini/voldemort crossed the horcrux ward at hogwarts on august 5th, the next "action" is on august 8th... I would have thought that this ward maybe... alerts someone?
of course that would make it (from my perspective) rather easy for harry to finish nagini and the horcrux, or at least capture them... dunno exactly how that was with voldy's spirit at that point.. anyway... I was wondering about that...
apart from that... liked it, more!
and another question I have, not directly concerning this fic: I seem to remember, that at some point, you said omething about a hp/x-men crossover... was that another attempt at humor some of us sadly don't get, or actually something that may come sometime in the future? because I would like that...
greetz dic

Bobmin356 replied:

Go back and reread. Nagini DID NOT cross the ward. She's skirting the edges of it.

Vongsawat posted a comment on Saturday 5th January 2008 5:00pm

^^
still dont get the point of the Quibbler articles.. unless theyre pointless of course.. theyre slightly humorous but more so random and inconsequential methinks =/ meh =P
love your fics, awaiting more updates ^^

Ezra'eil posted a comment on Saturday 5th January 2008 4:16pm

Lovely chapter. But whats this about Azkaban and Harry? ???

kyuubilordofthe9 posted a comment on Saturday 5th January 2008 4:14pm

Wow.... I love the autors notes at the beginning and the end. They amuse me to no end.

I love the story! I think that my favorite part so far is Minerva's comment to Cindy about the girls changing room. Oh, and I brought Alyx a present. Here. *Hands Alyx kegs of gunpowder.* Have fun!