By Bobmin
Reviews
LDA posted a comment on Friday 21st December 2007 1:54am
loving it so far keep up the awsome work! I have to ask though will you ever write a powerful Vamp!Harry fic with it being a Harry/Tonks ship?
Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Friday 21st December 2007 1:38am
Well, that was a very enjoyable chapter. I was a little disappointed with the whole Lavender thing, as she should have had much worse done to her. At the very least, Harry should have a word with Ernie as well. The bit with the defense mastery was inspired, as well as the Americans reaction to things, but does that mean he now has to introduce himself as Potter.... Harry Potter?
Alex2877 posted a comment on Friday 21st December 2007 12:54am
BoB!!! Give Alyx back her toys.
As I have come to expect with your writings this story has only left me wanting more. I am loving the character driven aspect of this story as opposed to the stories where the story is driven by the plot and only by the plot without any character development. So PLEASE keep up the good work and get another chapter out soon so I can read more.
Thanks for the excellent work
*Hands Alyx a FPIA + 5* have fun Alyx
Jeremy Desat posted a comment on Friday 21st December 2007 12:49am
ok... firstly I taste better with chocolate syrup than mustard or mayo..... but we won't get into that....
second.... I now have this sick desire to read a Harry Potter/LotR/Star Wars crossover from you guys.... thanks for putting that in my head....
and last.... Bob with a Darth Vader mask on while you hurt him... and he likes it?? I'm not really into masks, but good show!
Nights_Silhouette posted a comment on Friday 21st December 2007 12:48am
A great chapter, keep it up.
Mike C. posted a comment on Friday 21st December 2007 12:48am
I don't usually write a reveiw but I had to get this in. I read little snippets of this story to my friend and she likes what you are doing with Harry. She has told that she thinks it's funny. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out, but please take your time and make it as great as you can.
vasilis01 posted a comment on Friday 21st December 2007 12:22am
Excellent chapter as always.
ladyimmortal posted a comment on Friday 21st December 2007 12:14am
Another excellent chapter, oh gurus of the written Harry Potter story (or typed as the case may be).
I love seeing how Hermione and Harry's relation is growing and how they are each growing as people. Hermione's answer to the Lavender problem was funny as heck. She NEEDED to be hit, dangit (and I'd've done it far sooner but I'm more violent than Hermione is).
I also really like the journal entries so DON'T cut them out. :D
--Lady I
Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Thursday 20th December 2007 11:53pm
Great to see the next part of this, and a dozen Krispy Kreme stealth donuts on the way! The characters continue to grow here, and I like the way that the relationships continue to build, too bad that couldn't happen in canon. Harry and Hermione are growing together more and More, Cindy's a delight, and could see Harry living in Japan for a while.
I'd recommend living in the Kyoto area if he wants to see more of Old Japan, along with Nara, the ancient capital in the first millinieum.
Makes me wonder in the end who is leading the Cult of Voldemort, along with what might be happening later on with that, or whether they'll always be a pests for Harry and Co. I felt a bit sad for Lavender at the end, as she let her own little insecurity run and possibly mess her life up badly, if she comes back, I hope that she can use this opportunity to actually grow up some.
dennisud posted a comment on Thursday 20th December 2007 11:36pm
Glad to see this one keep going!
I like that fact that lavander got what she deserved and that Harry seems to be on the home stretch to finally confront Snaky-lips.
Hope you read the other reviews from the "SUN" series.
dennsiud
Patrick Rice posted a comment on Thursday 20th December 2007 11:34pm
Bob and Alyx,
Another great chapter. I am really enjoying the pace of this story. I love stories with lots of detail and chapter that are long enough for me to immerse my self into.
Having practially drowned from this chapter, which is prolly good, since I could use a bath anyway, I just want to say thanks again.
PDR
Ronnee posted a comment on Thursday 20th December 2007 11:26pm
The story chapter was great. I always love the updates, but this time the author notes at the end were far more fun. Seriously, I read the story for a cool thread, lots of plot twists, threads of ideas getting woven together into a very nice package. But I read the author notes for the laughs you always cause. Please... keep up with both because they are more than worth it.
Colpinky posted a comment on Thursday 20th December 2007 11:14pm
Another good chapter. I had a funny thought as Harry was taking his test. If it weren't for the fact that he was so "upset" then I could see him dancing around singing "I've got a lovely bunch of coconuts" as he is dropping them on everyone. Keep up the good work.
satishramsatya posted a comment on Thursday 20th December 2007 11:05pm
i really like reading your stories for your AN's.
Kyle Bissett posted a comment on Thursday 20th December 2007 10:55pm
One of the things Harry said sounds like a great one-shot spamfic idea:
Harry Potte and the Teddy of Doom
It might actually be a better read than the actual book 7 was.
blind-phoenix posted a comment on Thursday 20th December 2007 10:53pm
you forgot one. We will add your biological and technological distinctiveness to our own. Your culture will adapt to service us. Resistance is futile. excellent work as always guys. can't wait for the next chappy.
texasranger_10 posted a comment on Thursday 20th December 2007 10:52pm
you two are great i think i love your AN's as much as the story. And i would love to see bob bouncing off the walls if it gets more of these AN's in here.
geart job on the story. i do love the way you wrote this one it is a quite different prespective than normal and it is done very well.
Christopher Estep posted a comment on Thursday 20th December 2007 10:28pm
Now being served: baked NEWTs and Embarrassed Aurors! Also, that means that Harry-powered portkeys are Officially Hypersonic (approximately 1,600 km/hr); no wonder he has vertiigo! (Let's see *you* come from nearly twice the speed of sound to a complete stop, without being surrounded by an entire plane!) That's actually a *disadvantage* of having such a large magical core (could *that* be why Riddle in canon prefers apparation to portkeys?)
Wilyoldjane posted a comment on Thursday 20th December 2007 10:23pm
I really love your story! Merry Christmas!
Jane
DJ posted a comment on Friday 21st December 2007 1:59am