Aberbadger posted a comment on Thursday 20th December 2007 10:11pm

Are the Quibbler Headlines more along the lines of Nonjon's Harry Having Fun angle, Rowling's Stubby Boardman is really Sirius Black angle, or (I can't remember Who's) Xenophilius Lovegood passig on secret information to international governemnt agencies?

Freddie posted a comment on Thursday 20th December 2007 10:09pm

SO all that is left is the snake, and according to padfoot, it won't reach the chamber till the following summer break. so does that mean harry will be a hitwizard going after the cult of V, and helping his godfather fixing the govt.

Nice plot something unique.

All your stories are awesome.

Merry Christmas and A Happy New Year
Freddie.

hedwig_edwiges posted a comment on Thursday 20th December 2007 9:43pm

It was a pleasant surprise to see another chapter up. I do love the Quibbler's news and I miss seeing more of Luna. Great job and a good laugh.

Philipe posted a comment on Thursday 20th December 2007 9:24pm

Love the test.. We didn't see anything from Voldie this chapter tho.. I like the book entries, and don't want them remove.. i just don't like the quibbler's stories all that much.. sometimes they are funny, sometimes just page space..

And Alyx, excuse me for a moment.

Bob, :fishslap:

See ya next chapter.

KenF posted a comment on Thursday 20th December 2007 8:40pm

I liked the "mums are sneaky" line. Especially coming from Hermione.

The Japanese culture exam was very good. His return trip was even better. However, after that defense exam, I am now a proponent of coconut control.

Ignore those fools that gripe about the pace of this story. I find it quite enjoyable, and like the fact that this is a bit different from most of what we see.

Jeremy posted a comment on Thursday 20th December 2007 8:38pm

I really enjoying the story, but I think you should have Harry's reaction to the crazy stories the Quibbler is printing on him

Bobmin356 replied:

You did have his reaction, in the last chapter. He has more important things to do than pay attention to the newspapers and the quibbler isn't delivered to Fiji.

Drake posted a comment on Thursday 20th December 2007 8:16pm

Actually the saving roll can be a 1, after all, what if the guy who sets it off forgot to wire the bomb to the boom boom mechanism. Or worse, he forget to put the battery in.

Lovely chapter, made me teary eyed one moment, and had me pumping my arm the next. Have a merry Christmas if you celebrate it, and if not have some good Chinese food.

FenrisWolf posted a comment on Thursday 20th December 2007 6:28pm

Ah, yes, "BONZAI!", the warcry made infamous by legions of Japanese gardeners as they were about to trim back the growth of their miniature trees.....

Now back to the story.....

Potter Thinker posted a comment on Thursday 20th December 2007 1:51pm

One of the best pieces of fanfiction created thus far. Can not wait for more.

Amit Patel posted a comment on Thursday 20th December 2007 12:34am

Hi,

Just read your story and I have to say that it is nicely written and well thought out. I like how you are building Harry and Hermionie's relationship slowly and not doing what most fan fiction authors do; which is to make them immediately fall deep in love at the age of about 14.

But I have one question; did you intentionally put in that bit about Voldemort being killed y Nagini to ruin the whole plot point about Harry's magic in chapter 1? I am not trying to say that it was a bad point. It was just something that gave it right away for me and I was wondering if that was you intention in that chapter to put small clues that might be caught by some readers.

Keep up the good work and have a great holiday

power214063 posted a comment on Wednesday 19th December 2007 9:52pm

please update soon

hpotterfreak87 posted a comment on Tuesday 18th December 2007 3:08am

I really love this story, and I can't wait for it to be updated again! Great work!

IssaBissa posted a comment on Thursday 13th December 2007 12:02pm

What an absolutely fabulous story you have going here and I am absolutely delighted to come across it! I have seen similar story lines to this before but never of this quality nor this well thought out. Keep up the Great work you two!!!! I can't wait for more of your wonderful story!

Allen_b posted a comment on Thursday 13th December 2007 3:45am

Another excellent story. Keeps me from doing my work and chroes at home. I have to print out the excuse form from a couple of chapters ago.

Love the story keep up the good work.

lunachic posted a comment on Wednesday 12th December 2007 8:00am

Love the story plot so far. Although you really hate Ron and Dumbledore don't you? I also see you have a thing with transporters (portals/doors). But that's ok, I like conistancy from my favorite authors. I also like your disclaimers, I see you've moved on to abusing Alex, Snape and Dumbledore were getting a tad bit messed up. ;)

AnnaTigg posted a comment on Tuesday 11th December 2007 8:32pm

I really enjoy this take on Harry. I'm beginning to wish JK had matched Harry and Hermione, as I think they make a great couple. Hope you're going to post more very soon, as this fic is excellent.

Dahlias posted a comment on Tuesday 11th December 2007 10:12am

Once again, you're brilliant. I just love this fic because of the realistic plot and the characterization which I can find true, I can sit back and see that yes, this could happen if JK veered in this manner.
Though, the plot twists concerning Lavender and the whole mystery of whose checking Hermione's stuff can only mean it's Lavender or some chick... possibly Ginny? Seeing as no boys are allowed in the girls tower.
Tonks and Remus... not a surprise there but I would like to see more of them, it's nice to see that Tonks is the 'aggressive' one and Remus the shocked one - hell I would date him :)
Well, can't wait for the next chapter... Blessed Be!

Dahlias

David305 posted a comment on Monday 10th December 2007 6:36pm

Still very good.
The Intercontinental turned into the International, which proves that you have a talent at Transfiguration! (g)
Cheers,
David

Kyle Bissett posted a comment on Monday 10th December 2007 11:52am

Ahh... You mean that Crookshanks isn't going to get two extra legs and a celery fixation? Darn.

dennisud posted a comment on Monday 10th December 2007 8:50am

I am very exitied to see how this one turns out.

I like the pacing and graually build up here using such a nice twist and though its definitely a Dumble-bash, its still good. Not Order of the Pheonix, and even Fawkes seems to ne MIA!

Also I like how Ron and Ginny are also maturing and I'm so juiced to read how Harry will walk down the main hall of hogwarts blowing the Wizarding worlds minds!

Please update soooooon!

dennisud