goku90504 posted a comment on Tuesday 20th April 2010 10:21am

Great story though i'd like to see an epilogue including more of mollys n ginnys reactions and more of the wizzarding worlds reactions

Aberbadger posted a comment on Sunday 28th March 2010 2:15am

I loved that bit between hermione and the headmistress... here she is, thousands of miles away from her loved one, roommates and ex-friends getting on her nerves, biggotted government officials breathing down her neck because she's not of good stock (with nine good ingredients), and her headmistress knows the one secret that could blow everything up... And what was her biggest worry...?
"For a moment, I thought she was going to confiscate my journal"!!!
BEAUTIFUL!

Zamia posted a comment on Friday 12th March 2010 2:38am

Thanks for such a great and beautiful read. Your A/N were nearly as good as the yarn. All the best for the future. Cheers.
Z

pacobell posted a comment on Wednesday 10th March 2010 5:06pm

This was a fantastic story I loved the slow build of the romance and the day to day life of the characters. It also becomes the second story I have read to have what I would consider a perfect ending. This one brought me to tears cause it was happy and just great. Great great work I look forward to reading your bigger stories.

dan26 posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd February 2010 6:42pm

Home is where the heart is at least in Harry and Hermione'd lives

dan26 posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd February 2010 6:18pm

I guess you could say its a once in a lifetime genuine love between a man and a woman

dan26 posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd February 2010 2:07pm

Dumbledore a war hero and Harry Potter a modest hero

Nancy Austin posted a comment on Saturday 20th February 2010 8:08am

Still loving it! Quick bit of info:
"Her fall couldn't have been more opportune, as it removed her from the path of a killing curse hurled from one of the castle's arrow ports."
The phrase for the slits in a castle wall is arrow loop.
I really appreciate the fact that your stories rarely have distracting typos, mis-spellings, horrible grammar, etc. They are a pleasure to read.

mooneysfate posted a comment on Saturday 20th February 2010 7:48am

i really like the developemnt of the story. it was very believable and not a super harry story. i love all of your stories!!

Paul Blay posted a comment on Saturday 20th February 2010 6:27am

Puter Outer -> deluminator

Although you could make the case that McGonagall thinks of it as a puter outer.

Paul Blay posted a comment on Saturday 20th February 2010 5:25am

> He had used most of the last of his money to pay the fines for
> forcing a bondage bind on a phoenix. Once the bind was broken,
> the bird had disappeared, leaving him behind.

Use of bind as a noun is rare, and only for certain technical areas. Usually bind is a verb. Either binding or bond would be an acceptable noun for that sentence.

danielosborne77 posted a comment on Friday 19th February 2010 8:06pm

very compelling story

danielosborne77 posted a comment on Friday 19th February 2010 4:52pm

top quality work

Nancy Austin posted a comment on Friday 19th February 2010 9:34am

<==========================> This is the closest thing to a toothpick I can come up with. What I put into supper is rarely clear. My husband doesn't ask, but he does appear startled when I say, "I hope it's OK. I actually followed a recipe."

Fic Chick posted a comment on Sunday 14th February 2010 11:37am

"It's funny, he loves the Japanese culture, but he abhors their food."

Has he tried teppanyaki? That's completely different from other forms of Japanese cuisine.

Fic Chick posted a comment on Sunday 14th February 2010 8:49am

"Minerva looked at Harry appraisingly. It never occurred to her that he would be multilingual."

Why not? If she saw his NEWTS shouldn't she have realized that from the one he received in languages?

gadriam posted a comment on Wednesday 10th February 2010 2:23am

It doesn't matter how many times i read this. It's a bloody brilliant story. Keep up the good work, remember that Okapi's can be trained and I'm also told they make an excellent barbecue.

g

Forever&3moreSeconds posted a comment on Monday 8th February 2010 3:19pm

I loved that. Cookies and weapons of mass destruction to you both! ;]
Ruth =)

delrusant posted a comment on Thursday 4th February 2010 11:55pm

Using the press and the belief it generates without proof in wizarding britain against itself is an original setting for a HP fanfic, the story afterward is really a lot more character building driven than action, magic, or intrigue. It was very pleasant but a bit too slow from times to times.

Thanks for the time you spent writing it.

Kristine posted a comment on Wednesday 13th January 2010 2:06pm

please fix the font size! i can barely see to read it now.