rune1806 posted a comment on Sunday 4th November 2007 1:42pm

great update, loved the halloween byplay it is need to see harry grive over the lost of his parents. i look forward to the next update.

jalva200 posted a comment on Sunday 4th November 2007 12:42pm

God i love yalls storys.

I don't mind little action as long as there some fluff ;) i love to picture Hermione in a bakini *drool* keep up the great work you two and *Slips Bob a couple of donuts* anyway love the story keep it up!

ily.the.cat posted a comment on Sunday 4th November 2007 12:20pm

I like it. It seems like it has been more than three chapters. Does it seem like that to you. I love all of your stories. YOU are amazing writers.
Sammi

Graup posted a comment on Sunday 4th November 2007 11:57am

Wow, Harry actually used the "L" word? Amazing!

I enjoyed the new girlfriend, Cindy, in this chapter. She is a load of sunshine to our favorite 5 year old going on 40.

The silencing charms were hilarious - and I especially enjoyed the breakfast review of the noises.

Hermione and Harry are moving rather quickly in this story - maybe a bit faster than I anticipated. I can guess that you are going to be moving quickly through this piece of fiction, and have other plans for them.

McNair trying to get a Harry Potter day? You really lost me there. Why would a death eater want a Harry Potter day? I hope this will become clearer in the future.

As a request, can you convert Nagini into a light side snake? He could be another familiar for Harry? Kind of a twist on the whole Horcrux thing.

If you don't do that, can Nagini at least eat Umbridge?

Thanks for the story. However, I need to get working on my excuse letter.

Graup

TheHard posted a comment on Sunday 4th November 2007 11:36am

Nice Chapter! I Liked it a lot... hope the next one is soon! :)

...And, you don't need to get all that people togeter to discuss the divinity of the donuts... everybody know it's true, anyway.

Nice Excuse Note! It's gonna be really useful in my job xD... but, Making love??? are you kidding? nothing is that important, sorry :P

joeBob posted a comment on Sunday 4th November 2007 11:10am

Thanks for the update.

delta16669 posted a comment on Sunday 4th November 2007 10:43am

Haha. I believe Making Love could possibly be just as or a little less important than reading the newest chapter. But reading definately trumps admitting to having a family.

How are they gonna kill Nagini? Chop off its head and then burn the horuxes?

Clell65619 posted a comment on Sunday 4th November 2007 10:40am

Love this fic, chapters are a bit long though....

HA! Take that!

00_Knight posted a comment on Sunday 4th November 2007 10:38am

As always a excellent chapter to an excellent story!

P.S: The "FAN FICTION EXCUSE NOTE" has already come in handy, and works quite well I might add! I have enclosed a box of digitized donuts,{Donut Shop} that I hope are as tasty and as glazed as they were when I put them on the scanner.

PS: Stickiness from donuts + technology = Armagadon

GinnyLover posted a comment on Sunday 4th November 2007 10:03am

Very nice, chapter title should probally be Year 5 part 1 though :)

fallingmonkey3 posted a comment on Sunday 4th November 2007 9:58am

This is a great fic so far you guys. I've really enjoyed it. I also have read Sunset and enjoyed that one. You guys are great authors. By the way, donuts are divine food lol... The length of the chapters is great as well. Update soon!

Gardengirl posted a comment on Sunday 4th November 2007 9:40am

I enjoyed this! Not that I don't always enjoy your updates, but this was fun. I'm glad that Harry got pulled out of his funk and am curious what will happen when Hermione puts a drop of blood on her notebook cover. I am always happy when Sirius is a) alive and b) getting action. It's fun seeing Cindy's muggle perspective on things, too. Cheers ~

PerfesserN posted a comment on Sunday 4th November 2007 9:06am

Excellent chapter!
I love the interpersonal details here, some are fairly easy to predict. For instance, when Harry and Hermione place a drop of blood on thier journals they'll be in each other's heads, right? I'm totally alright with that.
Emma Granger as the Yenta (matchmaker) is a nice touch too. I just hope Sirius and Cindy don't blow it.
Meanwhile, how did Harry's case of magical exhaustion affect Volimort?
Enquiring minds want to know. . .
N!

Bobmin356 replied:

One of the nicer things about being the person doing the writing is that I get to snicker at people who think they know what comes next. Sorry Perfesser, I reckon you'll have to wait til chapter 4 to see what happens. :D

Harry's exhaustion didn't affect his potential, therefore it didn't affect Voldemort. The exhaustion was akin to him catching a cold. Its not really something that will affect his magic, or Voldemort's.

scott2 posted a comment on Sunday 4th November 2007 8:42am

Highly enjoyable :)

Robin Hood posted a comment on Sunday 4th November 2007 7:15am

dang, and I should have been using this note all semester.

Colpinky posted a comment on Sunday 4th November 2007 6:40am

See, that's what I've been missing for the last several years...an excuse note!!!! How many times would I have gotten more sleep, more work done, etc. if I'd only had that. Keep up the good work ya'll.

Mionefan posted a comment on Sunday 4th November 2007 6:27am

I continue to admire and enjoy you're treatment of H/Hr fiction. Looking forward to the next chapters.

tntornado posted a comment on Sunday 4th November 2007 6:24am

GREAT great story!

Cool that Cindy and Sirius are getting closer - looking for good things from that.

Everything else was great reading about too - can't wait for the next update!

TnTornado

Bribles posted a comment on Sunday 4th November 2007 5:42am

I just have to say that you two are the best online writers that I have ever encountered. I would even go as far to say that you two are the best writers I have encountered anywhere, including on and offline.

You two inspire me to try and improve my writing abilities. You are amazing, and I hope that you will try to gete published one day, even though I could see why you might not want to.

I hope you post again soon!!!

bsc3165 posted a comment on Sunday 4th November 2007 5:37am

First, I'd like to thank you both for sharing your gifts with us!! I am entirely enjoying your current stories as well as your finished stories. Your characterizations of the Harry Potter world are truly capivating. Looking forward to all new chapters and stories. And thank for the excuse note. Brian