shadowtrey posted a comment on Saturday 3rd November 2007 11:19pm

Mmm, a lot more serious a chapter, this time. It's good. Something tells me that Harry's going to have a godmum within the next two chapters.

Keep up the good work, you two. You're an inspiration to the rest of us.

~T.Miller

Banner posted a comment on Saturday 3rd November 2007 10:49pm

Lots of character development. I like Cindy - and I usually have a galloping allergy of OCs. Good job with her. It's nice that Harry's finally managed to build a real home life.

Teresa Lynne posted a comment on Saturday 3rd November 2007 10:25pm

I'm glad the McGonagall has made contact with the guys through Hermione and Remus! I just hope that Lee and the other students tell her about the toad otherwise known as Umbridge before she causes more harm. If Scrimgeour doesn't watch out she'll bring him down just as easily as Fudge fell! I'm glad that Harry and Hermione know more about the journals now. Chuckle, it was cute seeing how Emma brought Cindy through the door to see Sirius after she addmitted how she felt about him! And now Remus has met Tonks......so Harry and Sirius may soon have a chance to tease him about romance! It sounds like Lavendar is getting obsessed with "Evan".....what's she planning to do, steal him from Hermione? Unfortunately she doesn't have a clue whom she's messing with since Harry and Hermione are very protective of their relationship. Is it just sour grapes on her part or a nasty attitude? As for Ron and Malfoy I'm looking forward to seeing their reaction when Harry comes back fully trained! Malfoy'll probably try something and be shocked when he's smackedown in style! Paticulary if Harry doesn't use magic to take him out! As for Ron it could go either way, either he'll be happy to see his friend back or have a snit fit that he wasn't in the know. Then again, it might be a mixture of both! Thanks for the latest chapter, as always it was great!

KenF posted a comment on Saturday 3rd November 2007 10:22pm

Poor ickle Voldiekins... his evil plot failed, as all evil plots eventually do.

I am ruminating on his ultimate demise... will he be aware of it, or will he remain blissfully ignorant (OK, maybe not the blissful part) until its non-existance abruptly ends? Only the authors know.

I enjoyed the update.

CRose posted a comment on Saturday 3rd November 2007 9:55pm

This story is looking quite good. As usual the relationship stuff is making me gag, but other than that it's a lot of fun. If it's possible could be get a better description of the house and grounds and possible the island itself. It's kind of hard to picture it right now.

Bobmin356 replied:

Then you might want to stop reading now. There is little action in this story. This is a character intensive and character driven story.

This story is ALL about the relationship so you are going to hate it. And honestly now that you know you're going to hate it, you can stop reading and not bother reviewing any future chapters.

This isn't the Sun series, or even Wizards Fall which are event driven. All the events in this story will be seen mostly in the background while the romances develop.

Kimr posted a comment on Saturday 3rd November 2007 9:12pm

Yes that excuse card will come in very handy for telling people to go away and leave me read in peace :D.

Very good chapter, but i thought a couple parts were confusing, like with the horcruxes, in one section it was said that the last horcrux needing to be found was nagini, and in another section you described the yet to be destroyed ring.

Maybe in the next chapter you might insert a conversation on which horcruxes have been destroyed and maybe a scene showing how they were destroyed and which ones still exist.

Bobmin356 replied:

The ring was found, but until the enchantments on it can be broken, it has not been destroyed.

There are two outstanding horcruxes, Nagini and Ravenclaw's brooch. All the others have been either destroyed or are in the process of being destroyed by the method described in chapter 2.

victorlimwd posted a comment on Saturday 3rd November 2007 7:53pm

think it's developing along great - keep it up! =)

Anniejay posted a comment on Saturday 3rd November 2007 7:40pm

I am enjoying the story I prefer Harry/Hermione stories and this gives a good story with a believable relationship and charactors

Chris1 posted a comment on Saturday 3rd November 2007 7:36pm

Very, very good chapter. I'm a bit worried about the direction you're taking Ginny into, though. Far too many H/Hr fics have Ginny turning into some sort of whore. Please, please don't go down that route.

Chris

DrT posted a comment on Saturday 3rd November 2007 7:16pm

Nice developmental chapter.

"T"

iluvchocs posted a comment on Saturday 3rd November 2007 6:56pm

Thanks a lot for the note - I'm supposed to be studying for exams right now,a nd I'm sure it'll encourage my teachers to be much more understanding XD This was another brilliant chapter; I love the length, and I love the way Hermione and Harry's relationship moves XD

Adam posted a comment on Saturday 3rd November 2007 6:52pm

a very nice chapter, good to see things for the guys in fiji coming along well.

also thanks for the escuse letter at the end, between another chapter of a very good story and the an my morning started the way I like :)

Akali posted a comment on Saturday 3rd November 2007 6:36pm

Hehehehe... I enjoyed that. In fact, it was great. Loved it. Update soon?

Peter Clark posted a comment on Saturday 3rd November 2007 6:24pm

'Donuts, divine food or not?'

Obviously they are. And the best part of the panel is that you would only need 2 donuts to feed the entire audience.

Wolfric posted a comment on Saturday 3rd November 2007 5:18pm

Another fine chapter. I am enjoying your story. I think your take on Harry's personality and psychology as realistic for someone who has endured the things that JKR has done to our hero. I also appreciate the sort of tentative nature of the developing relationship with Hermione. Thanks for writing. W.

Delta-Theta posted a comment on Saturday 3rd November 2007 5:00pm

*holds up a box of donuts*

Like the fic can't wait for more!!

D-T

Alex00 posted a comment on Saturday 3rd November 2007 4:23pm

Great chapter love the note.

krystal1989 posted a comment on Saturday 3rd November 2007 4:19pm

i absolutely love your stories and i can't wait for the next chapter i must admit i check everyday to see if a new chapter is uploaded and am very pleased when one is thank you so much for writing this and you guys are very wonderful writers again thanks

goddessa39 posted a comment on Saturday 3rd November 2007 3:56pm

lol and thats all im gonna say about the note

fic: Awesome. Like the new budding relationship of OCSirius. Minnie is cool. Oscar?

nurray posted a comment on Saturday 3rd November 2007 3:38pm

Hmmm... I must go back and re-read the earlier chapters with Minerva mentioned and check the timestamps.

When Minerva find the tracking device it was spinning slowly. At that time I thought Harry was already in Fiji. Later on we have the device rotating very slowly and Harry hasn't moved any further away.

Ahhh... Harry was at Hermione's house when Minerva first sees the tracking device again. Ok, the headings (and Quibbler dates) are quite important.

As Sirius and Remus are moving around the world I suggest you submit entries to the Quibbler's tale of Harry spotting from them. Not only is it a prank to misdirect people, it will annoy Harry. Sirius would enjoy doing it at least.

Harry in a batsuit? Would the wizarding world know what a batsuit is?