Orion posted a comment on Saturday 3rd November 2007 10:38am

Wonderful Chapter.

matrixcrawler posted a comment on Saturday 3rd November 2007 10:27am

Thanks for the excuse, but my wife didn't except it.

Hemotem posted a comment on Thursday 1st November 2007 2:59am

A very good story I must say. Now that you have gone and done two chapters of a good story when can we expect to see another =) No rush of course but as I said it is a good story and I do hope to see more of it soon.
Thank you.


Hemotem

djo posted a comment on Wednesday 31st October 2007 3:55am

great first chapters - looking forward to read on!

power214063 posted a comment on Tuesday 30th October 2007 1:44am

please update soon i want to know what ollivander said about the tracking thing

knightsbridge posted a comment on Monday 29th October 2007 7:05pm

Thanks for dialing Hermione down a bit...actually a LOT. During DH I had wished someone would stuff her in that bloody beaded bag and sealed it shut. Okay, so I'm not an HP/HG shipper, but this Hermione is a tad softer, and isn't leading Harry around by the nose.
I love the names you create:'Milly Thistlewhistle'? Harry's unibrow teacher...lol, has anyone noticed that without being plucked, waxed or whatever they do, Daniel is rather close to a unibrow? My girl and I were walking in Ft. William (Scotland) while the cast was filming in the town, and Philomena actually snorted whe she saw this short kid with one eybrow. I doubt he was amused.

nintschi posted a comment on Saturday 27th October 2007 6:15am

please update very soon I really love this story.
take care
Nintschi

Uranium posted a comment on Saturday 27th October 2007 2:23am

Great story!
Love the harmony ship.

looking forward to the next update.

nintschi posted a comment on Saturday 27th October 2007 2:21am

nice story :)
it made me smile and I liked the idea with the globet and powerless harry for a while ?
write more nintschi

juju jula posted a comment on Friday 26th October 2007 3:33am

Now you've done it. I read another story where Hermione's parents appeared once and I wondered why their names weren't Dan and Emma...

Well now on to the important part of th review:
This is an interesting start and I liked it a lot.

I thought it was especially funny for Dumbledore to survive the "Lemon Drop incident" only to be hit by a bus and then run over by a lorry.

I like your style of writing, it is quite fun to read and I can't wait for more.

DawnsRedemption posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd October 2007 6:16am

Love the story.
Its definitely one of those feel good stories, I love the realistic way they get together. Please continue it rocks!!

Just one mistake. In chapter 1 Wormtail is killed in Riddle Manor, in chapter 2 Remus finds him in the Gaunt home.

Bobmin356 replied:

This really isn't an error. It's a matter of perception. In chapter 1, Voldemort considered the house his. He is, after all, the last member of that family alive. In chapter 2, Remus comes along and calls it what he knows it as, the Gaunt home because they were the last family to live in it.

Both viewpoints are right, not an error.

aengus posted a comment on Monday 22nd October 2007 11:36pm

I just have a simple question. I think that you two said that you were H/G shippers and were taking the sunset/sunrise series as an experiment, seeing if you could write something like H/Hr.

My question is, have you two joined the H/Hr shippers or do you just like both pairings.

Other than that, great story as usual

aengus

deathzealot posted a comment on Monday 22nd October 2007 2:46pm

Interesting.... This is new, yet refreshing and I hope you guys keep this going and I eagerly await the next chapter. Though one question is Cindy a Squib or at least Magical Related Muggle. Anyways see you in the next chapter.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 22nd October 2007 1:15pm

Outstanding, love the fun stuff. Love the length of the chapters. I HATE short chapters.

gunny

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Monday 22nd October 2007 12:01pm

Hands Treck a compass that doesn't work. Now you'll be even more lost.

I've fought the urge, but I just have to ask, is that a Tate's Compass? After all, "He who has a Tate's is lost."

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 22nd October 2007 9:28am

Outstanding, very well done. Liked it a lot.

gunny

Kali_Potter posted a comment on Monday 22nd October 2007 7:50am

It's good. Really good.

tntornado posted a comment on Monday 22nd October 2007 12:34am

I really like this story - Action storys are nice, but no matter the ship, storyline or even the fandom, the story itself, not the action parts are what matter, and so far you've done a great job on this story.

Keep it up, and update soon!

Looking forward to reading more!

TnTornado

greenansatsu posted a comment on Sunday 21st October 2007 2:51pm

I like the style of the story and its entertaining to read but, I'm failing to see the plot. Hermione and Harry have a semi-long distance relationship? Hopefully you'll surprise me with a twist next chapter but so far this is just an overly perfect very well written, Harry gets a holiday fiction.

I still like your stories though and will continue to read and wait eagerly for your next chapter to whatever you write.

Donald McLeod posted a comment on Saturday 20th October 2007 11:14am

I love Hermione and Herry Fic's. Whitch of you thought of 'I accidentally levitated a lawn chair into orbit.' later to be ID as Chines
'Commander McMonagle looked at shuttle pilot Curtis Brown and shook his head. Who knew NASA has experts on lawn chairs?'. It must be the emu killer.