in-kinsfire posted a comment on Saturday 20th October 2007 5:18am

Very nice. I'm glad this was expanded from 6.6k words. Please continue.

Wilyoldjane posted a comment on Friday 19th October 2007 7:59pm

Lawn chairs in space? I really liked that!!
Can`t wait to read more, please update soon!!!
Jan

Anaknisatanas posted a comment on Friday 19th October 2007 8:53am

I love the new story. I can see Ron being a git for a while to come and no worries, I won't hold my breath on seeing the golden trio get back together.

Shadalarion2 posted a comment on Thursday 18th October 2007 5:32am

Good reading here, as for Nagini the snake, I like to some way Harry can save her or maybe have her intelligent enough to as for help in removing the horcrux and becoming a free snake. (would not be suprised if Dumbledork stolen her when she was a baby snake from the Potter Family vault and gave her somehow to voldy).

Sandrine Lupin posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 5:32pm

really nice job....
I can't wait to read the next chapter.
So good luck and courage for the writing

Ronnie McMains posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 5:24pm

I'm enjoying this immensely, as I enjoy nearly everything you write (Attack of the Fanfic Authors notwithstanding). One note though. Isn't it Heliopaths that the Ministry is conspiring with, rather than Heliotropes? As I recall, isn't heliotrope a color (according to Wiki, it's a pink-purple shade)? I've read way too many fanfics where Luna goes on about the Ministry hiding Heliopaths (can't help it, H/L is one of my favorite ships).

Keep up the good work, and when is that X-men crossover coming?

riegert8 posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 2:49pm

What I am having problem understanding is the reason Dumbledore escape prison, all his action was under the title of Chief Warlock. What are you saying that all warlock before and After Dumbledore are thief's and dishonest, In my option that Dumbledore cross the line and he was not stealing in line of his job but for himself. So him not going to prison was lame excuses, for me that I would think that who ever become chief warlock is going be scum

beauty0102 posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 2:24pm

yeah great chapter can't wait for more so please update agian and soon.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 1:32pm

Patented bat suit!

*snicker*

Where's the flaming turkey?

GinnyLover posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 9:47am

Loved it! Especially the *dramatic voice* LAWN CHAIR IN SPACE!!!!

Is Harry a Horocrux?

Bobmin356 replied:

No, Harry is not a horcrux.

EricThorsen posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 8:59am

Excellent work. I like the pro-Sirius AU as well. One of the things that I like about your work is you write believable Harry/Hermione without making Ron Evil. I like how you just faded him out in this story. Keep up the good work.

Manatheron posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 8:22am

First and foremost, Excellent chapter! It's always interesting to see where your minds are wandering too. I do however have a question. Your Fanfiction.net stories... Do you intend to continue them? or have you done so and I forgot to add you to the alert list?

Bobmin356 replied:

We have NOTHING active on fanfiction.net All of the stories over there have been completed and those story arcs are done.

Teganii posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 6:11am

Great chapter. I'm realy enjoying the building of the emotional bond between the two teens. Like all teen relationships there are ups and downs. We see a lot of ups, will there be downs as well? The make up parts could be interesting as well.

Will we see Remus build a relationship in this story or will this be too much to cover?

Once again, thanks so much for sharing your stories.

ponderous stibbons posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 3:51am

Thanks for the long long chapter. Glad this fic isn't overboard like Parallels or Sunrise - the focus is on training rather than its final rewards. And Hermione is being treated as something more than Harry's sidekick and romantic damsel.

ponderous stibbons posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 3:09am

That's a lot to happen in chapter one. Bloody good job. Pat your self on the backside and all that. Or your partner's backside, whichever s/he prefers.

webdoc posted a comment on Tuesday 16th October 2007 11:50pm

Oh yeah... I just thought of a character you haven't used in the disclaimer section. Nagini, maybe have a nagini stew. Ok I need to stop over medicating. I'll go and mumble to myself in the corner.

webdoc posted a comment on Tuesday 16th October 2007 11:46pm

Exclellent read. Another fine written work. Greatly anticipating future chapters.

VelvetMouse posted a comment on Tuesday 16th October 2007 9:22pm

Yay!! You totally made my day with this update. Most excellent and I can't wait to see how this story plays out.

One question though - Harry mentions that Sirius and Remus are back to using their real names because Sirius managed to get his name cleared in Britain. But it's not until later that Remus talks about finding Peter's body. So how on earth did Sirius manage to clear his name without having Peter??

biblios posted a comment on Tuesday 16th October 2007 8:25pm

dear bob and alyx, so good to see you still writing and a nice new story line, will you be doing much more to the harry's key stories? I loved sunset/sunrise and hope this has as much to get my teeth into...
I would love to see more Cindy esp as she grounds sirius, minerva and her bright ideas must appear soon, and wheres tonksy for remus? or will he get someone else, and do the fijians have another help/cure for werewolves, can rings help as it si a 'curse' always wondered if enough power and an unfocused spell (eg ring not wand, or wandless) would work to cure the curse... and humm multi animagi then ;-) cant wait I love a goos animal harry but something no typical, saw a hummgbird once, and a robin, always wanted a thestral but its magical...!!! enough chat or this will match your chapter lengths ;-), hope Evan gets to come to Hogwarts, may be a dance? Yule Ball inspires Minerva, or a meeting in diagonnaly with Ron getting his comeupance, please please do something to Ron, from a great height, with dung, and may be a permenant result? and of course Malfoy has to try something on Hermione when she has no wand and she 'rings' him... hum like a bird, a greater creasted booby may be.
lol biblios

joeBob posted a comment on Tuesday 16th October 2007 3:22pm

Swell chapter but it has a MAJOR canon error!

In her last book, "Death to all continuity and series integrity", JKR renamed the "Puter Outer" (sic) to "deluminator".

You can't call this a "Harry Potter" story if you don't stay try to canon! ;-)

(Incidentally, by that logic, JKR still owes us the seventh Harry Potter book.)