texasranger_10 posted a comment on Monday 15th October 2007 5:13am

excellent, a polt line i have not seen. and you make it work so well to. i love the way you are doing the relationship h/hr. taking it slow and steady. your journals help with that. as always great story.

as far as bashing dumbles and ron. bash away i never did like the way jk did the thing in the stories and they did not get in trouble for it. they both got away with to many things.

texasranger_10 posted a comment on Monday 15th October 2007 5:12am

excellent, a polt line i have not seen. and you make it work so well to. i love the way you are doing the relationship h/hr. taking it slow and steady. your journals help with that. as always great story.

as far as bashing dumbles and ron. bash away i never did like the way jk did the thing in the stories and they did get in trouble for it. they both got away with to many things.

Treck posted a comment on Monday 15th October 2007 5:08am

Snip: Alyx sighed and shook her head. "Do we really need a mascot? I mean you've had penguins, llamas, Emus, Hippogriffs, Elephants, Killer Whales and a clown named Bobo in our disclaimers. Why not do something new and different?" /snip

You need Dr. Doolittle.

(pause to read chapter)

Ok. Now that I've read the story I just have one comment...

What the hell did you waist a chair? Don't you think it would have been better if Ron and/or Draco were sitting in it when Harry launched it into space?

uthamm posted a comment on Monday 15th October 2007 4:39am

Very nice! I really like the Sirus and Remus combination and can't wait to read the Cindy/Sirus interaction. Nice work on the Legislation about potions - do I sense the hint of something brewing there?

Nice work - will the next chappie have McGonagall storming the island?

Memory King posted a comment on Monday 15th October 2007 4:33am

This was an excellent update.

Riyan posted a comment on Monday 15th October 2007 4:22am

Awesome chapter. I'm very much looking forward to how this story will move forward. Am I right in assuming that it's only going to be another two chapters or so, based on your projected word count?

By the way, it looks like you may have missed a closing italics tag somewhere around the June 10th, 1995 journal entry.

daewos posted a comment on Monday 15th October 2007 4:00am

Excellent chapter - I love stories that take the time to really fill in the characters so that I can see what makes them tick and you have certainly done that!

I look forward to seeing how you take this forward as it has the potential to be your best story yet, even better than Wizards Fall. (Incidentally, any chance of more WF soon?)

gil ligad posted a comment on Sunday 14th October 2007 5:31pm

And wow.

Really, really wow - and this is only the first chapter?

How much more are we looking at?

Looking forward to more ...

rune1806 posted a comment on Sunday 14th October 2007 1:51pm

that was very different, i like the idea so far.

Steves Place posted a comment on Sunday 14th October 2007 7:30am

PS...
Ooops, I maybe should have mentioned that I am currently reading one of the longest and best stories I have ever read. Yes Bobmin, it is in fact, Sunset and Sunrise over Britain. A work of true ART.
Steve

Steves Place posted a comment on Sunday 14th October 2007 7:21am

Good grief Bobmin, Don't get your nickers in a twist over my statement of yet another H/Hr pairing. I ment no insult to you. As it happens, the last 12 stories I have read were all H/Hr and almost identical as there is only so many ways one can write this pairing. Having said that, I so very much enjoy your stories, no matter what pairing there is as you have a writing style and ability that I envy very much. Also, I might add that your pairings are the most believable of almost all that I read. It was just at that moment my thoughts were on someone writing something so very different than I have been reading. Your stories interest me simply because they are most different from the usual and of all the H/Hr pairings that I have read, I prefer your versions of that and that is why I sigh at the summery of yet another H/Hr but read it because you always have a unique take on this. Sorry if you felt offended by my comment. I have written the start to a new story that will not have any permanent pairing and does indeed have a very independent Harry in charge. As you had suggested, if I want a story like that I will likely have to write it myself. LOL
Please, I would go nutz without my BOBMIN injection to perk me up so don't through me out because I inadvertently twisted your nickers. LOL
Steve

Michael Foerster posted a comment on Sunday 14th October 2007 5:49am

WOW, just wow! And there will be more....! (does a Snoopy jiggle.)

delta16669 posted a comment on Sunday 14th October 2007 5:22am

I LIKE IT!

Though I did think that he lost all of his power. And if that happened I thought that you would send Harry to boot camp or something. Make him learn hand to hand combat and how to handle weapons

Can not wait for the next installment

wavelink99 posted a comment on Sunday 14th October 2007 2:50am

and by protagonists I mean antagonists

wavelink99 posted a comment on Sunday 14th October 2007 2:47am

It's very interesting, but you seem to have done away with most the protagonists in the first chapter. If it was any other author but you, I would probably say that was really stupid.

I do wonder as to where you are taking this story. I understand it will be a H/Hr, which is a good pairing, but will you focus solely on the romance and Harry's training?

dexterz posted a comment on Saturday 13th October 2007 2:32pm

did the dark lord really become a muggle or did every one think that he had lost his power? being killed of by the snake is better than being offed by a defective wand.....update soon

rathvander posted a comment on Saturday 13th October 2007 11:49am

Interesting twist. You've got a really easy to read way of writing. Detail but not too much, fluid dialogue that stays with how you're developing the characters, and humor :D. Well carry on and all that jazz :D. Looking forward to the next installment whenever it decides to meander down.

~Rath

Donald McLeod posted a comment on Saturday 13th October 2007 9:40am

I like this woud like some more.

a_wanderer posted a comment on Friday 12th October 2007 7:46am

Hmm, if Voldemort was actually NOT magicless how did Nagi eat him?

spritestar posted a comment on Friday 12th October 2007 2:59am

a wonderfull start to what appears to be a promissing story. Thank you, both of you.

PS. Be carefull of that Emu, they love to bite