busted posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 8:33am

I really look forward to reading more of this story. I like what you have done so far with it.

"The cat was not only out of the bag, it peed on the floor and ripped up the curtains!" That line made me LOL :D

I have always liked the idea of Harry and Hermione together. I really hate Ron and Hermione together because Ron is a tactless git. I dont have a problem with Harry and Ginny though.

Nights_Silhouette posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 8:30am

An ok story.

Rick D Gale posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 8:24am

I LOVE IT!

What a way to get Voldemort, Dumbledore, Fudge, and Malfoy out of the way in one fell swoop! Now Harry (er, Even) can start his life over new with people whom he trusts, and who in turn, love him.

I'm not sure, but I think you wanted a 'fourth' parchment coming out of the goblet, not a 'forth', but other then that I would say this chapter is near flawless - as are all your works.

I am excited to see what mayhem this group comes up with, and will be looking forward to your next installment of this or any other work from you.

Rick

Minerva Granger posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 8:02am

Um, Wow?! Keep going, I love this one!

Allan posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 7:47am

god i love you guys...everytime you bring out a new story i almost sqee like a girl...but i don't....I look forward to the rest of this....i even look forward to your X-men title even though am not a fan of ginny

ily_thecat posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 7:42am

Wow. This is really good. I just finished reading Sunset and Sunrise over Britain. You are really good at this. I think that even though you took away one of the major plot lines you also put a new one in.

lafbnz posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 7:14am

i like this so far--- getting rid of dumbledork so early- and voldy- what will be next

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romero posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 6:50am

Sirius is so clever. I enjoyed reading this story and was thrilled when justice was served.

Chloe Broefan posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 6:35am

I love this fic so far...I adore your Harry/Hermione fics (sorry, Harry/Weasley and Hermione/Weasley don't ever work for me, I loathe The Ginny - it sounds like an STD, although I'd guess she's an FTD except all the rash, none of the flowers)I can't wait to read more. I'm picturing Harry and Hermione and bathing suits...

BJH posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 6:34am

Neat concept and story, I liked how it was Nagini who ate Tom, amusingly poetic, but with the two main villians gone, who will be the baddie for any follow ons? You could use Snape, let him be an illegal animagus like the Marauders, a snake would find it easy to escape. Another idea would be Nagini since you made such a point of making her both intelligent and commumicative.

I do have to admit that I was disappointed that Harry got his magic back, I was looking forward to the Muggle adventures of Harry Potter.

BJH

Kyle Bissett posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 5:55am

The story feels like you did too much in chapter one without leaving a story to build up in chapter two. But it's still much better than the official ending, from Harry Potter and the Obviously Contrived Plot Devices.

I'm surprised that I've never seen a writer use the most blatantly obvious counter to the magical contract idea in GoF. The Goblet spit out Harry's name because it was tricked into thinking there were four schools instead of three. As such, the contract is magically binding to a Harry Potter who does not go to Hogwarts (Since it was one of the other three schools). Since the Harry Potter in the story does go to Hogwarts, it is not binding for him. A contract signed by John Smith is binding for the John Smith who signed it, not every person in the world who happens to be named John Smith.

jdcox61 posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 5:49am

Pretty cool. I like it, I can't help but wonder what's the story about when you pretty much take all of canon you could use, pile it up in the yard and watch it burn? But... you guys know what you're doing, so I'll gladly wait form more to come along and i'm sure i'll enjoy it.

Thanks B & A!

UdderPD posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 5:42am

Brilliant.

webdoc posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 5:36am

This looks to be a great story, can't wait to read the rest.

ReaderX99 posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 5:27am

heh, now that is a good start to a story.. wipe out the whole shootin match and start from scratch! so much for dumbles plans and volde is squished back to spirit land..

thanks for writing!

Shadow High Angel posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 5:19am

Love the start, interesting twist on Dumbledore and others falling from power the way they did but great to read. Can't wait to see what happens in the second chapter.

MrRobertsIII posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 5:18am

Cute. I liked the idea of a Muggle!Harry making Voldy a muggle as well.

jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 4:47am

Awesome Begining!!!! I can't wait to read what happens in the next chapter. The Pen is mightier then the Sword so they say and this chapter proves that 100 percent. So is this the story that spawned the email Alyx sent out about just shooting her? Do keep up the awesome work and update soon please:):):):)

Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 4:36am

That's nice. Some fluffy goodness at the end, dumbledore disgraced, voldemort eaten (too bad he was probably dead at the time), wormtail killed, Sirius free - what a great story!

Thanks for creating this. I suppose more of the story will be about Harry & Voldemort's fight.

I'm looking forward to more.

Tom A.

Adrianne posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 4:25am

omg this is going to be such a good story
i cant wait for the next instalment. keep them coming