Meghan posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 12:51pm

Woot! :D Great start, looking forward to more, now I am off to bed. ;)

gadriam posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 12:49pm

Brilliant. I really want to see where you take this. In one swift move, you have eliminated most annoying things, leaving a lovely foundation for pretty much anything. I'll be around..

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Hagrid posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 12:48pm

Its good ter see the two of yeh takin' on the last good book that JK wrote. Between the Half Baked Plot and Didn't happen I wonder who confunded her. This however, is a right bit of a scream, I would say I were howlin' when I read it, but that brings up those red loud letters, and that's not what I meant at all.

Terry Swain posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 12:48pm

Great story. :)

PamelaC posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 12:45pm

wahoo! a new ... STO-O-RYYYYYYY!!!
Great start. Cheers and thanks. Healthy celery snacks for you!!

taxzombie posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 12:15pm

Hoo Hoo! An excellent new storyline, and it doesn't have llamas! Excellent.

Enjoyed the crumbs receiving their rewards, well most of them anyway. Finding the alert for this was a very nice way to end the day. Thank you for a delightful read.

crew posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 12:07pm

great story great story

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 12:06pm

I'm a bit puzzled. If Harry isn't powerless, evilbaby!LV shouldn't have been either.

And this is no HBP, so no Horcruxes, I assume.

So if the prophecy still holds, either Nagini gets severe indigestion LV somehow absorbs/becomes part of Nagini?

I'm honestly rather surprised that you didn't just leave Harry magicless. It certainly would have been different. :-)

But I'm sure you have other ideas that will be interesting.

Thanks for sharing this with us.

mastapsi posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 12:06pm

Or not, I forgot about horcruxes...

mastapsi posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 12:04pm

Interesting, I really have no idea where you will go with this now. This could easily stand alone without follow up.

So that makes me curious.

Teganii posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 12:03pm

Why would anyone traid in a llama for an oversized bird? Looking to make giant omlets?

This is a great twist to all the Harry Potter stories. Instead of the rush to war it's the wait and see approach. Nicely done.

SO Hermoine didn't get asked to go to the ball by Victor? Did the other schools leave after Dumble's little fiasco?

I'm hoping for some Ron bashing. Any possibility in this happening? In Wizards Fall you killed the wanker offer by "fighting the good fight" so to speak. That took a little bit to digest. With all these Krispy Kreams lying about, having a "Good Ron" just may turn them all sour.

Thanks for the new story.

DJ posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:55am

Good Start but have you not delt with Voldi? Or are you using the horcrux? So he can come back. I look foward to the rest.

makr posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:53am

Yet again another story from great writers that defy 90% of HP fanfiction out there. Between this and your other stories this is above most of the fanfiction out there for the sole reason that you aren't taking plot from Rowling. You take the characters and play your own plot while keeping them in character.

Highbrass posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:51am

I likey. I'm interested to see where it goes from here. I also hope this doesn't mean 'Wizards Fall' is though. I really do enjoy some of the things you put Dumbledore though.

Kirk Staley posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:45am

I almost thought this was an one-shot story.

Decumo9 posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:45am

sweet start, though I did not quite expect Dumbledore to die so soon, not that it wasn't funny or anything, just seemed a little quick.

Elleria posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:44am

Pretty amusing..I like Voldie getting eaten by his own snake.

es posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:43am

awwwwww. you two just keep reaffirming you places as my favorite author(s).

daeshie posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:35am

i liiike. its pretty good, i'm glad its HHr.
But afterwards where is it going? surely not another voldemort based story, but i think by the title it's going to be a bit like a paper revolution.

kb0 posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:34am

Ah, back with another manipulative Dumblydore. I don't mind, I find those amusing. :-) Hmm, propheycy -v- goblet; I guess that works. So all Harry has to fight are the Horcruxes I presume. It should be interesting. I like how you pulled Hermy to Fiji -- very sneaky. :-)