FenrisWolf posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:33am

It's a great start. Once again, I have no bloody clue where you can take it from here, as all the major questions seem to have been dealt with, but the same could've been said about your Wizard's Fall arc, and that's at four parts and still going. Needless to say, I'll be waiting anxiously to see where this leads.

Michael63 posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:31am

I loved it!

And you picked the perfect place to end it. Enough to establish the new universe and close off a few plot lines, but plenty left open to fuel new stories.

I enjoyed it, and as always look forward to your future stories.

AnnieKay posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:22am

Very Nice! I can't wait to see what happens next.

Greg Johnson posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:16am

This was fun to read. I can't wait to see where you go with it! Keep up the good work.

TheHard posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:02am

Truly? are you going to continue it? It was a nice "resume" for a starting, but, with dumbledore dead, voldemort dead, etc... and, now??? I'm looking for it!

Thanks!

Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:00am

Well, an amusing story so far, I'm curious as to what's next. I rather loved the way you killed Dumbledore this time, you guys really don't like him do you.

mathiasgranger posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 10:46am

Well..there is a lot to still be dealt with...Horcruxes...I'm sure Dumbles had something about them in his private journals...the Weasley family....it should be interesting to see what you do with them.

What kind of tutors Harry will have, what Voldemort being killed by Nagini means to the Horcruxes...did he lose one by default or does Nagini have two pieces now?

Thanks for writing,
Matt

Thanks for writing,
Matt

ladyimmortal posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 10:41am

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!

Okay, that was one heckuva starting to this story!

As usual, I will wait with bated breath for ze next chapter!

RoseWolf posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 10:30am

Wonderful beginning. Alyx was right, just this would have been too short. It's so rare to actually find a new plot in fanfic, I haven't read anything quite like this one. Keep up the good work.

I assume the adult rating is for future chapters?

Wolf

Chrisyansick@hotmail.com posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 10:28am

Interesting premise... With Dumbledore dead, Voldemort eaten, Fudge imprisioned... am curious to see where you will bring it in the next chapters...

liquidfyre posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 10:24am

*giggles insanely at the idea of nagine eating voldy*

good story and start there keep it up please

if you dont you wont like the consequences *glares about in what he hopes is an evil sinister sorta way*

allygator posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 10:23am

Awesome start...wow a new concept, I've read a lot of HP fanfiction and I don't think I've seen anything similar at all. This story has lots of potential and with your excellent writing style I'm sure it will be a fantastic read. Can't wait for more...update soon!

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 10:17am

*snicker* Ohh, I love that alternative approach to the start of GoF. Developments from hereon, though, should be quite fascinating. I do wonder what happens, since Nagini ate the powerless Tom, to Tom's spirit since there are several horcruces/horcruxes lying around.

I do like the way things are developing 'tween Harry & Hermione and that looks quite promising.

Good start to what promises to be a very interesting story.

Joseph Fritz posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 10:14am

Great start!

Ken Warner posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 10:11am

wonderful start = too bad about Aberforth, he was not apparently guilty of anything

interesting to see how the horcruxes manage to activate the prophecy

thanks for yet another great arc

patrickokc posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 10:10am

Yet another wonderful start to what I am sure will be an awesome story!!! I am very excited to read more of this arc, as well as the wizarding Fall and your xman cross over. Keep up the great work!
Patrick

Jason Karr posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 10:07am

This is a good story. Looking forward to what Hermione's folks are going to do when she gets home.

Melferd posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 10:07am

I love the new 'verse!!!
Yeas!! and thank you for making a new one to play in!!!

I completely LOVE takecharge!Sirius and Remus..I always thought they were way too hobbled and submissive to Dumbledore.

And to be continued...
**is dizzy from squee and fangirl snoopy dance**

Teresa Lynne posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 10:02am

Ah, another excellent story to enjoy! As always, I'll be waiting with anticipation for the next chapter(s)! It was good to see Dumbledore, Peter and Voldy get the shaft, and marvellous to see the reunion of Harry and Hermione! Many thanks for writing this!

kellygreenpassion posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 9:52am

ME LIKE VERY MUCH.
IT WOULD HAVE SEVERED DUMBY RIGHT TO CHOKE ON THAT LEMON DROP