Tournament Woes
Chapter 1
By Bobmin
Reviews
Orion posted a comment on Thursday 16th April 2009 10:22pm for Chapter 1
I like plot bunnies, they get you (threaten, beg, blackmail, badger, present an well composed PowerPoint presentation) to write great little one-shots and epic length novels. While we still await the next chapter of your WIP novel length story, this was a most satisfying reintroduction into your world of writing.
Thanks.
dg Fry posted a comment on Thursday 16th April 2009 9:35pm for Chapter 1
An excellent story. Something we've all wanted to see happen to Dumbledoor.
I really like your plots and characterization.
Thanks
Mesterio posted a comment on Thursday 16th April 2009 5:28pm for Chapter 1
Got to say, thats a pretty amusing wrap up to almost all of the problems posed in Harry Potter. The only thing left would be the numerous Death Eaters still alive, but without a master i suppose they're pretty much useless. Good Job.
Mark Blaine posted a comment on Thursday 16th April 2009 11:46am for Chapter 1
Well, interesting.
Laura Wagner posted a comment on Thursday 16th April 2009 11:44am for Chapter 1
Thank You for writing this story. I really enjoyed it and liked how everything turned out. Too bad Hermione had to be made out to be on the stupid side. Any story that destroys Albus and where Harry has a backbone is good in my mind.
PATRICIA ELSEY posted a comment on Thursday 16th April 2009 5:14am for Chapter 1
Loved both the new stories but the ending of Tournament Woes really made me laugh. Imagine the Great Albus getting outwitted by his brother and his poker buddies ha!
Saere posted a comment on Thursday 16th April 2009 2:46am for Chapter 1
Fleur's fate is cruel, but so bloody hilarious that I can't do anything but laugh at her.
Another amazing story! Thanks for writing. :3
Shadowolf3400 posted a comment on Thursday 16th April 2009 2:29am for Chapter 1
I like this story, especially the idea of using the Goblet to kill of Voldie (Lucius, Fudge, and Peter are just bonuses!) And having it all arranged by Aberforth was genius!
IssaBissa posted a comment on Thursday 16th April 2009 1:34am for Chapter 1
Ha!!!!! I love the chapter!!!!! This is great!!!! YOu have done a fabulous job!!!! I am loving all of the ficlets you are putting out these days! I hope to see more of your wonderful work soon!
JP posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 10:48pm for Chapter 1
Awesome - lovin the Aberforth action. Poor Nepalese goats though. The Wombat
Bob Officer posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 8:05pm for Chapter 1
Most excellent.
I see you caught the major flaw in Albus, well.
SP posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 6:52pm for Chapter 1
Albus took a deep breath. "The first contestant to fail was from Beauxbatons: some girl who was part Veela. She had run up against a Centaur and mistakenly tried to use her Veela charm to pass him by. Unfortunately for her, Veela can't use their charm on Centaurs to knock them into a stupor. Instead, she excited him into a full rut. They pulled her from the maze after listening to her scream for ten bloody minutes. All she'd say when she was carted off to St. Mungo's was 'ees too beeg!'"
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"Alastor Moody pointed it out to me once we subdued the centaur. Once the girl had been removed from the maze, the centaur went off in search of someone else. He found the Durmstrang champion. That poor lad will never be the same again.
;__; *goes off to vomit*
joeBob posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 5:34pm for Chapter 1
Awesome bunny, brilliantly satisfying.
Thanks!
Darkon posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 5:12pm for Chapter 1
You two continue to preform up to your usual standards (it's a good thing). So that you can get back to your WIPs, here is some Rabid Plot Bunny Away-tm. Not sure if it works but I've never been bitten by one while using it.
Tammy Driver posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 3:18pm for Chapter 1
He paused at the bottom of the stairs. What next? he mused. Perhaps it's time to bring Sirius in and clear his name. Harry would like his real guardian back, I'm sure.
I'd like to read a story about how Abe would go about this.
Minerva Granger posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 2:37pm for Chapter 1
Loved it.
Shadalarion2 posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 1:56pm for Chapter 1
Oh God that was most excellent. Abe pulling a fast one over dumblemoron.... Good show.....
Jonathan posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 12:35pm for Chapter 1
Excellent story.
00_Knight posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 11:06am for Chapter 1
Excellent as always!
Darkmanu posted a comment on Friday 17th April 2009 12:04am for Chapter 1