Bobboky posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 1:46am

nice

Gwyn Raven posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 1:36am

Brilliant! I love fics where Aberforth sticks his nose in in a rather Slytherin manner :)

PaulKellington posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 12:56am

Damn I'm glad you're being swarmed by plot bunnies.

Funny, well thought out, funny, reasonable character development, funny, good twists, and funny.

Thanks for your time and efforts.

Peter Clark posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 12:49am

Wonderful, as always!

Lee Steele posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 12:36am

Hi, Loved the story, always like stories where Albus gets what he deserves. lee

Sarah5 posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 12:24am

A most amusing fun quick read!

Malimber ConDoin posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 12:15am

I'm delighted to see that you are writing again. I hope that all is well with you and that you are in good health. On a scale on 1-5 for brilliance, originality, awesomeness, liveliness, and personality you will get a 5.

That bit about Fleur saying it was too big was hilarious, I know that I will be cracking up for a while. I'm beyond pleased that Harry has had it with betrayal and that his response was not to repeat his parents mistakes, it's about time.

This has to be the ideal situation for poetic justice and how it was dished out Dumbles, it showed that pay back can be a bi- -h. Harry turning Dumbles into a raving alcoholic was divinely inspired and I love it. It's about time Harry causes headaches and not be the one receiving them.

Andrew2 posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 11:40pm

my word, a manipulative Dumbledore working for the actual good of Harry Potter?

Preposterous!

Unless you're a Goat lovin', Firewhiskey swillin' Dumbledore...

:) Love it!

james marriner posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 10:43pm

Glad to see you guys writing again. Was getting withdraws, Had to read Sunset and Sunrise to keep my addiction going.

corwalch posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 7:36pm

I love kickass Harry stories. More soon please. And beleive me I know what it's like to be attacked by rabid bunnies. LOL

alec_potter posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 7:19pm

Nice one.
Keep them coming.

Crys posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 7:05pm

One Dumbledore (more successfully and ably) pulling strings below the radar of the other. That idea takes some time to wrap your mind around.

Albus's ability to ignore the problems he's created is staggering. Nice to see that at least Abe isn't quite so willingly blind.

Unique setting/method to have a rewrite GoF with Independent!Harry story.

Rob Clark posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 6:48pm

Another fun one!

Thanks, Rob

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 6:11pm

Tournament Woes! Oh yes. This is really poetic justice for the manipulative old man. He finally got caught. What a great resolution to the Voldemort problem. That and Harry got to live on his own for a summer. Very good that he got connected with Hannah. Those hardworkig Hufflepuffs are good folks. I like Abe. He finally got one over on his older brother. Thanks for a fresh look at "The Tournament"! A very bold take! pms

Ana Maria Fernandes dos Santos posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 5:57pm

I fell down my chair laughing so hard while reading this, a master piece of writing!!. Love how all Dumbles plans were turn down and how his own brother was behind everything. Excellent as always, thanks for sharing.
Nita

rune1806 posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 5:21pm

Well done, I get home from work at 4:30am and read the story before I went to bed was laughing so much it woke my wife up. I blamed you so maybe you should hide for a while. Very funny loved it.

Rufus posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 5:09pm

I LOVE IT....
There is nothing else to say.

The master manipulator is masterfully manipulated by his brother and by Harry...

I'm currently sitting at my desk at the office and my collegues are once again looking at me funny because I was laughing out loud. One of theses days, they'll call a doctor... I just know it...

Rufus

pav posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 4:57pm

A perfect little masterpiece.

AnnaTigg posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 4:24pm

Oh my word, but the bunnies are seriously biting at the moment. Maybe you should borrow Harry's animated saw to fend them off? This is another great canon-destroying one-shot. Like Abe's manipulations and Harry's attitude, also Dumbles gets his comeuppance again! Now tell those rabid bunnies to leave you alone nso you can get on with Mutant Storm!!

Edward Becerra posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 1:47pm

Was Fleur screaming in pain, or in... ^_^

Too big, indeed. Hehehe...

Imagine the centaur bragging to his best buds when he gets home.

"Yeah, them French gals, they're really something..."

Ed Becerra