Tlcatlady posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 1:16pm

"Unfortunately for her, Veela can't use their charm on Centaurs to knock them into a stupor. Instead, she excited him into a full rut. They pulled her from the maze after listening to her scream for ten bloody minutes. All she'd say when she was carted off to St. Mungo's was 'ees too beeg!'"

That has got to be the best line I've read in a long while. Love it! TLC

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 12:53pm

*snicker* I love it that Abe is more truly the master manipulator that Albus tried to be and failed. I loved how an alert and aware Harry was able to truly play hell with all of Albus' game playing as well as managing to forge his own love life, not what Albus had programmed for him and, really, there's a good chance that Ginny could turn out very much like her mother; it's nowhere near a certain, but it's certainly a reaonably strong probabiliity. In any case, this is a delightful "rebellious teenage Harry" story.

ladysavay posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 12:42pm

Potter was out from under Albus' thumb and finally beginning to live his life on his own terms.

As it should be! Very well done. Glad to see you two back in action and doing what you do so very well.

Thanks for this one!

JChaos posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 12:35pm

Wonderful!

Jarrod posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 12:27pm

That was most excellent! You really don't see the turn around to Abe coming until the very end. This would have been great as a full length novel type but I can definitely understand just breezing through the idea like this. Keep the good work rolling!

Cheryl MacDonald posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 11:56am

Boy did you stick it to Bumbles. I had a good laugh over this flick.

LifeScientist posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 11:31am

Nice job. May more bunnies of this sort bite you in the future.
Matt

Colpinky posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 11:23am

Again, another good story. It was just fun. That and I love it when Dumbledore gets smacked around like that.

kb0 posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 10:30am

Haha! That was really hilarious. It reminds me of one of my stories (where Harry does the unexpected in the TwT), but you took the idea on a more comedic route and, as usual for your stories, carried it off superbly. It's *always* fun to see Dumbledore out manipulated! :-)

Kevin
(aka kb0)

Jujuberry posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 10:21am

Very funny story! I really liked reading all about Albus Dumbledore's terrible, horrible, no good, very bad year ;D

Abe was a pleasant treat and it was terrific to see Dumbledore out-dumbledored.

Thanks for sharing and making me gigle!

SassyFrass posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 10:12am

Absolutely hilarious. And really, I wouldn't mind reading an expanded version of this. hint, hint.

MrRobertsIII posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 9:36am

That was a fun read. Abe's third world love tour had me laughing.

Philip Jacobs posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 9:24am

Well, I didn't think that Abe had quite that much of a Machiavellian streak in him, but this was definitely an enjoyable take on the whole "Harry gets clued in by someone from the Wizarding World" genre. Everything follows logically forward, though I'm a little surprised that Harry completely shut out all his former friends, unless for some reason even Hermione decided to jump on the anti-Potter bandwagon prior to the first event (though, given that he toasted Snape practically in front of her, I can see where she would have drawn back along with everyone else.)

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 9:21am

Cute. Thanks for sharing it with us.

noylj posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 9:17am

No horcruxes? You still have a pureblood ruled British WW that needs to be toppled. Would Herms really allow herself to be pulled out of school?
Love for a longer version and Bumbles finally losing it and actually attacking Harry's mind in front of the Wizengamot or some such.

DrT posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 9:13am

LOL! Very cute and a very fun read I don't think Hermione would have ratted on Harry like that, but the rest was believable. I esp. liked Harry refusing to rescue Ron or take the trophy

jilumasam posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 9:01am

What a very sneaky Abe!!!!!

Great little one shot....

Liz :)

Jeremy Desat posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 7:57am

As always, I love your stories. This was hilarious, and brilliant... even if it didn't have X-Men in it. *coughcough*

Ken Warner posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 7:51am

amazing story - and a much better 4th year than canon. I loved the flashback style, and self-pitying Albus is too precious for words.

thanks for a great read

thumper posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 7:40am

Rabid Snorkack!!!!! rofl I love this