dhampirkinfolk posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 7:23am

That was funny as hell. I say we the HP universe needs more centaur on veela action. End up with a bunch of little tauric pegasi that can throw fireballs. And wouldn't that be fun?

Jonathan Langford posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 7:21am

Very nice. Especially the part about Abe being behind it all...

C. Harris posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 4:54am

First, yayayay for a rabid plot bunny.
Second, that was great. I don't think I've ever seen a Abe behind the scenes fic. It was wonderful. And I liked how the last line left room for a sequel.

Treck posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 4:41am

Grabs Bob's bunny...

Get back in there. Sirius isn't free yet.

Damn it's nice to see you two back!

whatareyouevensaying posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 4:07am

Very good short, it's hard not to enjoy seeing Albus so down...when he brings it on himself, that is.

Babs posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 3:59am

Aberforth the master strategist! And Albus giving everything the worst possible spin, except where he himself is concerned. A very enjoyable read.

David Najarian posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 3:23am

Yet another great story. Keep up the good work!!

Mickey posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 2:29am

Yawn. Wake me up if something actually happens, as opposed to two old geezers talking.

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 2:05am

Great fun, thanks.

webdoc posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 1:57am

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

David305 posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 1:31am

Another very amusing one-shot!
Only glaring boo-boo is the same as in the other story: Albus was the Supreme Mugwump of the International Confederation of Wizards, and the Chief Warlock of the British Wizengamot. You have the offices scrambled.
Keep it up!
Cheers,
David

k13cat posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 1:21am

LOL Now that is a barrel of monkeys I didn't expect. Clever and oh so fun of a downfall for Dumbledore. I do like that Harry stood his ground & wouldn't forgive RW & HG. And putting him with Hannah is a new one for me, as is Andromeda acting as his guardian.

Maybe your muse will give us Harry meeting Sam in a different story--because that sequence of events sounds intriguing.

DJ posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 1:05am

HA HA HA Thanks that was even more fun then the last one keep it up.

jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 12:56am

Awesome story!!!! Love the disclaimer!!!!

Carol Layland posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 12:34am

I think that the email announcement that I got about this story put it down as GOOOOODIE. I totally agree with that accessment. Another wonderful, immaginative one shot from Bob and Alyx. I hopw that they always continue with this wonderful way they have of telling a story. I eagerly await the next one and also the next posting to Mutant Storm. Carol Layland

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 12:33am

Another nice one shot here, and fun to read a Harry that takes charge, a Dumbledore who gets all he truly deserves, and we don't end up with him playing his little games forever, even after he dies. Nice, and a plus to see Harry paired with Hannah, who doesn't get nearly enough loving in fanfiction, imo.

heathw posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 12:14am

Ableforth the chess master. I like it.

Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 12:13am

Well, that was an interesting twist. I really like Aberforth metaphorically stabbing Albus in the back, lord knows he deserved it here. Outstanding story, and two in one day, life is good.

morriganscrow posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 12:01am

Cute. Very cute. And, high on my approval scale, Dumbles gets shafted. Well done indeed.

Alex2877 posted a comment on Monday 13th April 2009 11:54pm

An excellent short story.