Darke Gray posted a comment on Saturday 1st September 2007 8:07am

Great continuation of the this universe. I really love the whole idea of this universe and can't wait to read more of it. I also noticed how each story seems to be getting longer, maybe you will break down and put these into an actual 'chaptered' story. You could have the first story you wrote as a prologue and have the rest explaining everything up to it, but instead of several different 1 shots put it in 1 story. Either way, keep up the great work.

DG

Fenris Ulf posted a comment on Saturday 1st September 2007 7:57am

hrmm... I'm not sure what to say I loved this story and the whole wizards fall series so far. Angie is her Coven are a pretty interesting group of charecters and Ron and Ginny coming back to say "Hi!" was nice. So Ginny will get her potter eh? What happened to Molly, Charlie, and Arthur Weasley? Did I miss something with them are they coming to the island? I should probably go back and read part one again...

Being denied Donuts is cruel and Unusual punishment. As payment for this story with my review I am sending a bakers dozen of cholesterol, fat, and sugar free donuts that have all the yummy taste but are as good for you as Carrot Sticks.... does that deserve another chapter?

Rob

PhoenixAnkaa posted a comment on Saturday 1st September 2007 7:34am

I am thoroughly enjoying the Wizards Fall AU universe you are creating. I was hooked from my first read of Wizards Fall, which I have subsequently read an additional two times, and this installment did not disappoint in the least.

Thank you for all the enjoyment I have received from reading your work. I look forward to your next installment.

PA

skulLXeon posted a comment on Saturday 1st September 2007 6:54am

aww.... and thus another piece of this saga is brought to an end... good fic once more, the only thing i really have to say is that you've left me quite curious as to who the tracker was, even if he didn't play a big role in the story....
good job as usual....
see you when you update... i'll bring you donuts then... XD

Adios for now...

AGX[TAIL]

steveh11 posted a comment on Saturday 1st September 2007 6:34am

Hell, if you write stuff like this you should be entitled to doughnuts, surely?

In general, superb. I noticed a few proofreading errors, but nothing major. And that scene with Ron and Ginny talking to Hermione? Priceless. You join the small, select band of authors who've made me cry.

Now go and write some more. Please? ;-)

Steve.

tw posted a comment on Saturday 1st September 2007 6:24am

Wonderful Chapter. I would have to say that this story is "above par" so to speak.
Since you are being denied dougnuts, here are some! After all, anything shall be given so you update again. 00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000

-Signed Tim.
PS Bob, let alex have some of the dougnuts...then you can tell her to lay off your case!

razor_M posted a comment on Saturday 1st September 2007 6:04am

When I first saw the title, I thought you guys were high when you named it. But I understand now, and as always think this story kicks ass!!
-Razor

Sarah5 posted a comment on Saturday 1st September 2007 5:56am

Please continue this fic It is entertaining.

Will Harry team up with any others magical beings Merepeople Centaurs High Elves
Dragons House Elves Unicorns Wicca Shamans othr religious or magical practioners?

ThunderGod posted a comment on Saturday 1st September 2007 5:20am

dammit..its early on a sunday morning and my brain decides to throw something at me

on the train in the first book when harry and ron are talking, ron mentions a second cousin or something whois an accountant and the impression given was that he was a sqib..so the weaslys may not be as pure as everyone thinks....

dic posted a comment on Saturday 1st September 2007 5:11am

well, I think your "wizard's fall saga" is quite good... interesting ideas, and, as always, nice long chapters... but they're not really chapters, aren't they? I mean, if I understand it right, theses all belong to the same series, with the first published being the end of what happens, with invoking these equations... well if thats the case, I would have thougt it more practical to make it all one story with multiple chapters, instead of several oneshots...

but anyway... I really like it, you rock! ^^
kepp it up!

lelila posted a comment on Saturday 1st September 2007 5:03am

i am loving this series. i like this harry. i like hermione being forced to open her eyes about the different possibilities of magic, especially with the addition of wiccan magic. the dragon is great addition. makes me want 1. hee hee. the soulmates concept was interesting. so ginny's soulmate is one of harry and hermione's children, eh? it's very fitting. it's one of harry's better halloweens but he still had to suffer a bit with the not getting to see his own parents and dealing with the pain. and dumbledore, well, he's just a work of art. *shakes head* as is percy. they deserve more than just a few pranks, altho i do love the pranks. when does luna show up? soon, i hope? as i hope there is still more of this au to come?! please! *begs*

texasranger_10 posted a comment on Saturday 1st September 2007 4:41am

you do so good with these. keep it up.and i do so love the disclaimers you do.

Arvin Betancourt posted a comment on Saturday 1st September 2007 3:55am

Love this story

I can't wait for luna's appearance.

Deborahsu posted a comment on Saturday 1st September 2007 3:25am

I'm sure glad you put "for now" after the "Finis" or I'd be REALLY sad! This is a wonderful story, with much more to tell!

Rob Clark posted a comment on Saturday 1st September 2007 3:03am

Another excellent story in this AU. Good thing they've got this nice Harry, I'd have probably gone done my 'better dead list' starting with Albus and Percy. :)

Rob

Clell65619 posted a comment on Saturday 1st September 2007 2:48am

I'm really loving this series, and even though we know how the Wizarding world ends, it's always fun for Harry and the twins to bitch slap them a bit.

Lang posted a comment on Saturday 1st September 2007 2:28am

Found a typo: "Think about it. The monster in the closest..." should be closet.

Anyways, if you're lacking donuts come to Canada and go to a Tim Horton's... if you're not already in Canada...

I'm loving the Wizard's Fall universe. And I love how they're so long. I usually read them 2 or 3 times each, just to make sure I got everything out of the story. I also find myself reading them again maybe a month or so later.

Can't wait for the next installment!

taxzombie posted a comment on Saturday 1st September 2007 2:14am

An excellent addition to your this version of your rendition of the HP universe.

A solid bit of work and greatly appreciated. Loved the pranks and the Puff too. Where there's one, might there not be more? After all, she is an adult female dragon. Who's to say she can't lay a clutch of eggs, it magic afterall and just think of the possiblities of flight of Puff's children. Good with kids, able to give nosy aurors a hot foot, (or maybe a little higher?)

Adding the Wiccan was interesting. More for Harry to try and rescue. The magical underground railroad sounds like it's just getting started.

Thank you again for a most entertaining and interesting read.

lazypr posted a comment on Saturday 1st September 2007 1:49am

I've definitely enjoyed this new series. I was hooked on the Sunset seres as soon as I started it and this is just as great as that one. Please keep writing!

Amejisuto posted a comment on Saturday 1st September 2007 1:45am

I like it! I love it! I want some more of it!

HEE! Seriously though, this was great! I can't wait to see what you pull out of your hats for the next bit. I wish this was on Insane Journal so I could use the appropriate gleeful icon. Puff is great and the pranks they pulled on the Ministry and Dumbles is priceless! Great job!