diablos_el_swave posted a comment on Thursday 16th August 2007 11:55am

MUST....CONTINUE.....OR ELSE....THREATS OF VIOLENCE!! Well, maybe not so much with the violence, but very interesting story, and i would love to see this story continued. Your writing style always keeps me interested. you're the only authors i've ever followed. Anyways, to sum up. good job!

iluvchocs posted a comment on Thursday 16th August 2007 6:27am

This was a great story - I really liek the way you describe what's happening, and Amos is a great character xD

Alorkin posted a comment on Thursday 16th August 2007 4:31am

A very nice background piece. Dumbledore's machinations in this piece, demonstrate clearly why the sentence Harry gave the wizarding world was such a good idea. To use something without regard to it's value is a waste of resources. With the ministry and the ICW being so blind under the aegis of racial purity, they deserve what they get.

Harry's rescue of Trent was perfectly W3. I hope Dumblemort enjoyed his memories. (Can you say Baaaa?)

Hermione's rescue was particularly Harry. She's probably the only one in the world who could derail his self destructive behavior.

The key sounds like a paradise. Can I go there?

Alorkin

TheHard posted a comment on Wednesday 15th August 2007 3:52pm

Hi! Nice continuation, and nice reference to Tolkien too :)... and about next to that... *shudder*

...Fini??? as ind "The End"??? but why? it loked a lot like a story for a couple of chapters at least :(... Well, it's your story, i don't care :P

...well, yeah, i care a little... another chapter, please!!! :D

joeBob posted a comment on Wednesday 15th August 2007 12:48pm

Very nice.

Good writing style, great characterizations, nice AU and plot.

The disclaimers are starting to detract, however.

Thanks for a very enjoyable read!

Donald McLeod posted a comment on Wednesday 15th August 2007 9:40am

Nice

Oh would like more, please Sir.

Ltank687 posted a comment on Wednesday 15th August 2007 6:43am

aaah!!!!! love it

john2 posted a comment on Wednesday 15th August 2007 12:23am

This story has the usual apostrophe abuse, but we all knew that already.

I'd read the first story, but prefer this one - far more detail and nuance. A deft blend of humor , characterization and plot.

Keep writing, I'll keep reading.

J (Kokopelli)

AnnieKay posted a comment on Tuesday 14th August 2007 10:30pm

*snickers* Your author notes are a wonderful addition to the story, and have the ability to make everyone laugh. Awesome job! I enjoyed this story imensely and I can't wait to see the next one in the saga.

anettemargarete posted a comment on Tuesday 14th August 2007 9:34pm

wow, thank you for writing this! i like this poor harry and his problems and it will be nice to see some of them solved.

anette

jinx66 posted a comment on Tuesday 14th August 2007 8:54pm

Every time I read the parts with Amos I heard in my head Jolly Mon

DrT posted a comment on Tuesday 14th August 2007 7:54pm

Randy rams? Truly evil and inventive, I must say.

Altogether, a very lovely story

"T"

skulLXeon posted a comment on Tuesday 14th August 2007 6:12pm

ah... this was definitely worth the time spent reading. :D very good job on this, and as i don't have much else to say, i'll just say that i'll see you next time and that i'll wait till another fantastic piece of this story comes to life....

Adios for now...
and see you before the next Luau... =D


AGX

tru posted a comment on Tuesday 14th August 2007 4:41pm

Lovely, more please. Thanks for a good read.

katelyn posted a comment on Tuesday 14th August 2007 4:25pm

loved it, simply loved it
looking forward to the next story ;]

JSX posted a comment on Tuesday 14th August 2007 2:20pm

the students in the neighboring dorms want to kill you and your computer thanx to all the laughing and the one coughing fit that this fic has inspired. thanx for that.

just one query, what is the deal with Llamas?

Meghan posted a comment on Tuesday 14th August 2007 1:03pm

I loved it. Your standard of writing everyone should strive to meet. I sincerely hope you either continue this story to the start of the first part you posted or pick up the story from the end of the first part you posted. Congratulations on making yet another stellar series.

IceBlades posted a comment on Tuesday 14th August 2007 11:05am

Darn right its only for now. Great chapter.

Oh and F.Y.I.

::All killer Penguins and soul-sucking Penguins are ruled by the Penguin Mistress, Her Highness, Aimee...::

Long standing joke with some of my friends...at least i think the soul-sucking Penguins are a joke...

Sarah5 posted a comment on Tuesday 14th August 2007 9:50am

will you write more chapters or prequel or sequel to this fic. Evil Dumbledore will this be Stargate Atlantis or SG1 crossover or sidhe or Elven or ancient ones.

Bobmin356 replied:

Sorry, but this isn't a cross over. There'll be no stargate junk or any of that sort of stuff. This is a Harry Potter story.

jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Tuesday 14th August 2007 7:04am

Outstanding story!!!! I loved it and I can't wait to see the next installment of Wizards Fall. I'm amazed at what Harry did to himself all because he was depressed. Do keep up the outstanding work:):):):)