By Bobmin
Reviews
Princess Fictoria posted a comment on Monday 13th August 2007 3:01pm
I loved this story. The way you wrote the pain and the healing was wonderful. I do hope that you will consider writing more in this verse because I want to see the fall of this worldwide persecution of those of less than 'pure' blood.
Elleria posted a comment on Monday 13th August 2007 1:23pm
Love this.
Highbrass posted a comment on Monday 13th August 2007 1:10pm
Great beginning. Do I want to have more. Most assuridly but can it be done good enough to gel with the two pieces already written? That's a hard question to answer. Keep it up. I do love the thought you have put into this.
Cronje posted a comment on Monday 13th August 2007 1:07pm
Keep up the good work! This universe looks very promising.
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Monday 13th August 2007 1:06pm
Now that story generated a lot of mixed emotions, all of them on the poignant side. It also filled in a few of the gaps in Wizards Fall and I hope to see more such. It was amusing to see Dumbledore fall to deal with the Randy Rams and succumb to their effects; I suspect no one who was there will ever be quite the same. Overall, it was interesting to watch Harry & Hermione work through their problems, together, and both start healing. I suspect the Black and Potter seats on the Wizengamot are going to remain empty for a long time to come.
One thing that would be interesting to read will be Fawkes' viewpoint of circumstances leading up to his final departure from Hogwarts and then whatever he did 'tween there and when he finally arrived at Norman's Cay.
Rob9 posted a comment on Monday 13th August 2007 12:08pm
This is a great filler story to tell how exactly Harry was healed from losing so much in his great war against Voldy. This is just as good as the first story and I hope you continue this tale or finish up one of the new ones you have started up already.
Bob I hope the chicken condems make a cameo in the dislaimer.
DJ posted a comment on Monday 13th August 2007 11:47am
I like this story line keep it up.
PhishBulb posted a comment on Monday 13th August 2007 11:36am
This is turning into quite the epic universe here. Harry seems completely fucked up for the most part -- understandable at this point. The guy's been through a lot. Aside from the fact that he's completely falling apart, I'd envy his existance on his island.
I wasn't sure about Amos at first, but he seems to be an interesting OC. The twins and their "respective?" others were written well. All in all this seems like a great addition to the initial story and I can't wait to see where you go from here.
The only downside to the whole story so far, at least to me, is Hermione. I just don't like her here and don't think that she's proven worth to Harry. It's probably just personal, but harry settling for Ron's seconds, who apparently treated him like crap before he life Britain, without any sort of attempt at finding happiness elsewhere, speaks to Harry being completely messed up -- so much so that I'm surprised he could ever be in a healthy relationship.
I'm pretty sure I read that you decided to challenge yourself in your previous stories by writing 'redeemable' Draco and Snape. I wish you decided to further challenge yourselves by getting away from the typical H/Hr pairing. I guess creating a whole new world for the characters to inhibit will have to be challenge enough.
Great story. It's becoming a great series. While I might wish for slightly different characterizations, it doesn't change the fact that what you've written is damn good.
DaZZa posted a comment on Monday 13th August 2007 10:49am
What can I say? You guys rock! I reckon JKR woulda been better paying you and Jeconias to write HBP and DH between you - you'da done a better job than she did! For me, canon died at the end of OOtP - and fanfiction took over. Bravo.
Lucia Depenhart posted a comment on Monday 13th August 2007 10:49am
Charming!
Roberta Johnson posted a comment on Monday 13th August 2007 10:37am
Standard Disclaimer? Fortunately for us, nothing about you is standard!
Keep 'em coming, please!
And thanks!
DarQuing posted a comment on Monday 13th August 2007 10:31am
Bravo! Another amazing story, Herr Bobmin. :)
Rick D Gale posted a comment on Monday 13th August 2007 10:28am
Talented story telling as usual.
I'm afraid to say the intro's getting to the point that they distract from the story - but we all need some comic relief.
If there is an act three in this series, I hope Harry gives the Minister of Magic, the ICW, and Dumb-as-a-door what they have coming to them. They have done more to harm the wizarding world then Voldemort ever thought of.
It would also be nice if Harry could get some of the professors (Flitwick, and McGonnagall)(sp) as teachers for the new students.
I await your next creative endevor.
Rick
rippergirl posted a comment on Monday 13th August 2007 10:23am
Awesome. But then again all your work is. Nice to see a little background to this one. Keep it up can't wait to read more.
Rob Clark posted a comment on Monday 13th August 2007 10:13am
Yet again, another great story. Thanks!
Rob
SeanWH posted a comment on Monday 13th August 2007 10:09am
As usual, a simply beautiful story.
One minor nitpick, it's imu, not imi when referring to the fire-pit. My wife's from Hawaii, and she snickered when she saw that.
Sandra Smith posted a comment on Monday 13th August 2007 9:55am
I am very impressed with the stories you write. Thank you
scott2 posted a comment on Monday 13th August 2007 9:52am
Highly enjoyable, looking forward to Luna (and morbidly, her sad story)
avram posted a comment on Monday 13th August 2007 9:25am
I like this universe. Part of it is the ship, a lot of it is your writing (excellent as always). Please keep at it, and feel free to harm the llamas if that's what it calls for!
xohorsegal752ox posted a comment on Monday 13th August 2007 3:49pm