kb0 posted a comment on Sunday 21st June 2009 6:52am

Oh boy! A new Wizard's Fall episode. I'm such a happy minion! ;-)

Thanks for the new episode. It was nice to see new parts of this story. I really liked the parts with Luna, how she tried to work things out, her troubles, etc. I also like how Harry worked on it all.

This is gripping series. Feel free to add more episodes to it.

Oh, and can I get a llama costume? :-)

Kevin
(kb0)

cheryse posted a comment on Sunday 21st June 2009 6:02am

This has been an amazing series. I particularly enjoy the emotional aspects of Luna and Harry dealing with their losses at the hands of the magical world and the course that Luna decided to take in the end. It shows more character development than the canon as well as a better understanding of human nature on your parts. Too bad the creator of Harry and Co. couldn't do the same...

As for the revenge against the world which had begun to abuse its power, I find it imaginative and appropriate - very, very well done! I do wonder however, if you intend on a follow up: such as what type of world does Harry and the islanders return to? I have to confess I am rather curious.

Edward Becerra posted a comment on Sunday 21st June 2009 4:28am

I think there's one last story you can tell here, Bob... We've already seen the fall, but we haven't seen the decay. The gradual, slow death of the wizarding world as they see their last 43 children grow up in Hogwarts.

That's a story that won't be happy, but would be painfully gripping.

Ed.

John Wilburn posted a comment on Sunday 21st June 2009 4:14am

Dear Bob and Alyx,

A really great addition to Wizards Fall. I have always enjoyed your stories, and this one is no exception. Thank you for the many hours of enjoyment.
Sincerely,
John

Nights_Silhouette posted a comment on Sunday 21st June 2009 4:12am

I like...

UdderPD posted a comment on Sunday 21st June 2009 4:11am

Excellent, thank you very much.

Now if I use the first part as the Epilogue it kind of completes the story.

TTFN UdderPD

Hagrid posted a comment on Sunday 21st June 2009 12:40am

Ah well, ter continue or not is surely yours ter decide. I have enjoyed nearly every word written, and after I got over bork bork bork, I needed ter give me lungs a rest. I don't know enough about that DNA to know one gene from another, but if yer tellin' me there is a gene called a rottenberry gene, why would anyone want that future? Sounds like a pointy eared devil like Snivelious ter me.

Keep up the good work and don't let the critics ger yah down.

Tumshie posted a comment on Saturday 20th June 2009 11:27pm

Thank you for this wonderful addition to this Universe, it helps fill in the back story quite nicely

joeBob posted a comment on Saturday 20th June 2009 10:56pm

It was great to revisit this world but Harry would not faint so easily.

Thanks for the story.

Bobmin356 replied:

You need to go back to the first Wizards Fall where Harry explained to Snape about that conversation and how he fainted twice during it.

DJ posted a comment on Saturday 20th June 2009 10:22pm

Well done as always.

Lionsgate posted a comment on Saturday 20th June 2009 9:53pm

Thanks !
You indeed are creating a whole new universe .
I can only hope the updates will come soon and that there are plenty .
Best regards Rudy

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Saturday 20th June 2009 9:39pm

A wonderfully well written and detailed explanation of the different magics as well as keeping a nice thread of humor throughout dark times.

Thanks

Prodipan Sengupta posted a comment on Saturday 20th June 2009 7:59pm

Hey,what about that little girl's magic field?Did you forgot to conclude that part or is it written just to prove that harry still has limits?Pls answar & note that there is no comment at all about updates.
Prodipan

tru posted a comment on Saturday 20th June 2009 7:22pm

Thanks you wonderful as always.

cliviussum posted a comment on Saturday 20th June 2009 6:35pm

As usual a very well-written and cogent story with a very interesting message. I'm pleased to see you have not finished with the 'Wizard's Fall' series. Perhaps you might eventually decide to share the final plans for the Avalon experiment - even though currently not in your remit?
Nevertheless, I will continue to watch your space for future creations of a different kind - now that's a phrase I've heard from somewhere. (Sinks into mood of reflection and then depression as id attempts to sift through gradually diminishing grey matter amidst failing neuro-synapses)
Tibi grates ago fabellae novae. Observabo plures fabellae tuum stylum.
Ave atque vale, Clivius

firecast posted a comment on Saturday 20th June 2009 5:45pm

Definately an interesting look at this unique world. I really like where this entire concept has gone. I really enjoy how Harry is willing to take the steps to preserve his family & friends without stepping over the line into ruthlessness & lack of caring about the other person.

The only other question that I have regarding this world is: What happens to all of the other magical creatures? The Dragons, goblins, centaurs, pixies, and so on? Are they able hide by themselves or do the wizarding charms fail over time? Are the charms on a certain area, or on the creature itself? How would the mundane world react to the eventual revelation of dozens if not hundreds of mythical species? I think that might at least make for an interesting chapter even if is only how Harry pops out to the mundane world & re-applies the charms every now and then.

As for adding my voice to those clamoring to se what happens in 1000 years? Well, I would definately be interested in reading it - that lies soley in yours & your wonderful wife's hands. I just hope that whatever the pair of you write continues to remain at the same level of excellence or even exceeds it.

By the way here is any interesting take on Harry in the future with very little magic. It's still ongoing, but it has some unique facets: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4944819/1/The_Wizard_on_the_Edge_of_Forever

Anyway cheers & keep up the wonderful work,
Mark
ghostmp@gmail.com

jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Saturday 20th June 2009 5:27pm

Outstanding Ficlet!!!! Why can't it be a combination between Mad Max and Gene Roddenberry???? I hope you do write a couple more Wizards Fall Ficlets because they're freaking awesome!!!! Do keep up the outstanding work!!!!:):):):)

LifeScientist posted a comment on Saturday 20th June 2009 5:09pm

Nice job! This does fill in some gaps and fills out some characters at the same time. I am sorry that you don't have further plans for this universe as it is one of the most interesting alternates out there. Still, this piece was an unexpected gift in the series and is most appreciated for all that.
Matt

bigzj51 posted a comment on Saturday 20th June 2009 4:23pm

2 men enter, one man leaves

Laura Wagner posted a comment on Saturday 20th June 2009 4:01pm

Thank you for taking the time to write this story as I really enjoyed it. It answered the remaining questions I had about this universe and gave Hermione a new insight into Harry.
Thanks again!