patrickokc posted a comment on Sunday 23rd September 2007 1:49pm

Bob and Alyx, Once again a wonderful chapter/segment/whatever you want to call these. (I don't know if they are one shots if you keep adding to them.) I don't suppose there is a way to put a link at the bottom of the chapters to the next one on the series? Call me lazy but...well yeah I am just lazy. LOL Keep up the Great Writing and I cannot wait for the next chapter of this and your new story to be posted.
Patrick

uthamm posted a comment on Sunday 23rd September 2007 11:38am

"If the Ministry ever came to the island, he'd make them regret it. Once he was through with them, they'd rememberVoldemort as nothing more than a quaint man with an unfortunate temper problem. "

This is laugh out loud funny; one of the best lines in all of fandom!

Nice story - many doughnuts for you. You have earned that and more!

DaZZa posted a comment on Sunday 23rd September 2007 11:12am

"Pure Blood Willies are Weaker." - Bwahahahahaha! I love it! You're sick, warped, and twisted - and I love every bit of your writing. Kudos again - I can;t wait for the next installment!

Jeremy DuCharme posted a comment on Sunday 23rd September 2007 10:47am

Oh boy. Dark Luna, I think she just tripped the danger sense meter at well past the undying (or just won't stay dead) Jean Grey. You know the one that in full Dark Pheonix mode was a bit hungry so she ate a star?

Somehow I think putting the brakes on Luna was far more difficult than keeping Harry from giving into his frustrations and smashing the whole of the Wizarding World. Harry doesn't want to do it, but fears he might have to. Luna, well at this point ISTM she doesn't CARE. She just has her grief, and wants to burn it out by using the Wizarding World as the pyre.

moonstonemystyk posted a comment on Sunday 23rd September 2007 10:01am

Lots and lots of donuts for the wonderful authors. I love these stories and look forward to each one.

Teganii posted a comment on Sunday 23rd September 2007 5:57am

As the reader looks into the box that has been sitting by his side while reading "Wizards Fall: The Truth is Out There" he notices one last Krispy Kreame of the dozen he started with. "Damn!, what am I going to do now?" thought the reader. The dozen Kreames originally bought as an offering to the author for another great chapter now numbering one.

Will one do?

Thanks for another great story.

jgoodman posted a comment on Sunday 23rd September 2007 5:39am

can't wait for the next installment. I love what you are doing in this story and eagerly await the outcome. Thanks for all your hard work. I really enjoy reading your works! Thank you!!!

Highbrass posted a comment on Sunday 23rd September 2007 4:46am

Can't wait for the next bit. I really hope Dumbledore is put through a living hell for the rest of the series.

Ivy posted a comment on Sunday 23rd September 2007 4:37am

That's going to be one sick and twisted fic if you're going to continue. Oh, wait, it's simply all you...

What to do, what to do...???

I want MORE of course!!!

Ravenclawchaser68 posted a comment on Sunday 23rd September 2007 1:45am

Mmm, donuts. I like where you're going with this story, it's been a lot of fun so far. Luna and Richard's story was very touching. I'm looking forward to hearing more about Luna. She's always an interesting character, but you've added an unusual dimension that I really like. Thanks for writing!
Jay

Fenris Ulf posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 10:32pm

Heheh I love this series Harry always has so much fun messing with the ministry. Hogwarts as a petting zoo sounds like fun to me.

If this review is like a donut it would be strawberry frosted.


Rob

Chris1 posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 5:35pm

Triad? Or H/Hr with a little bit of Luna?

Very interesting developements. Thanks for sharing this with us, and providing us with hours of entertainment.

Chris

Dustin Johannes posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 4:14pm

Actually, I think I could use some of those donuts. I mean, 15 months in Iraq would have earned me a few, right? Two weeks left, and then it's off to paradise for a bit...Uh, Oahu for those wanting to know. Ok, now for your donut...

This chapter made me laugh. And laugh. And then the thought of that experimental truth serum causing major gas...I would almost bet that WWW's Flaming Flatlulence Potion was one of the ingredients. And then there were some serious issues, especially when rescueing Luna and Felicity. All in all, a great chapter.

And that's that. I've got nothing else to add for now. Hopefully the next review you guys get from me comes from the confines of my own room out in the middle of the Pacific Ocean. Happy writing.

Until next time...

Dustin

lelila posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 3:03pm

oh, u're cruel and i have to agree with u on that. hundreds of mosquito bites would be way worse than a straight killing curse. and a strip search by umbridge? that's just downright evil. i am very much believing that u absolutely hate dumbledore.

harry disguising himself, fred, george and hermione as they stormed the ministry cells was just great. i'm glad to see luna enter the story arc now. i feel so bad for her. i'm glad she found someone she could love so much but to know that he'd be taken away from her is just horrible for her to deal with. i'm glad harry and hermione r there to help her.

what can i say except how much i love and enjoy these stories? i can only sit back and wish for more to be written and that u never quit fanfic.

joeBob posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 2:46pm

Yay! Those accursed disclaimers are getting shorter.

Thanks for the new chapter.

You're writing about a Super Harry yet you had him laid low by a bit of breeze?!?!

Also, by California state law, the "Pacific Coast Highway" is California state road One (CA-1). By California legislature unofficial decree: "Flyover" states including Oregon are unimportant. ;-)

This is still a great tale. Love the back story on Luna.
Thank you!

Bobmin356 replied:

Thanks, we'll make sure to make the disclaimers longer from here on. If you don't like them, don't read them.

Tlcatlady posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 1:40pm

I look forward to seeing the development of Harry-Hermione-Luna. I always enjoy reading what you two come up with. . .and I agree with Harry-hundreds of mosquito bites are much worse than a killing curse! Thanks again guys :O)

twilliams1797 posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 1:21pm

ok, one sugar free donut for you, no carbs either.. Pretty smart to limit the stories to one shots like this, no 'deadline' hanging over your head, and the self contained stories are interesting as well, just like watching episodes of Star Trek, this one is like the time when... well, you know. Thanks for spending the time to tell us a story, even if the new season of 'must watch tv' is here. My time is better wasted reading this.

TimW

jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 12:42pm

Outstanding chapter!!!! I so can't wait to read what happens in the next chapter. This story made me laugh so much that I think my roommates might start to think I've gone all cracked on them oh well. I loved the ending with Harry dreaming up what he would love to do to different people that have screwed up everything. Any chances we'll get to see some more breakouts in the next installment of Wizard's Fall???? Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)

karen posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 12:26pm

I love this story!

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 12:24pm

Further thoughts after my initial comments:

Given what happened to Minerva, I wonder what happened to the other two who quit with her as well as what happened to Filius Flitwick? Given the role he played in saving Hermione, I'd expect Harry to make a particular effort to find him and either bring him to the security of the Cay or make sure that he was totally secure where he was. Given how the sudden termination of Nantech would've adversely impacted several programs, I wonder if any of the governments tried to investigate? I'd imagine that'd keep Kingsley rather busy.

From Su-Li's response, improvements in muggle morality obviously haven't made their way into the wizarding world, "just following orders" went away as exculpation with the Nuremberg trials just after WW II. I think Blaise took the ethical and moral response to what was happening and I suspect that may, subconsciously, be knawing at Su-Li, too. Tough for her, as the first story makes clear, she chose and has to pay the penalty. In the meantime, the wizarding world is depriving itself of it's most powerful and creative members as well as, I rather suspect, vastly limiting its gene pool and insuring its death anyway (one could argue that Harry & Co. just accelerated what the pureblood-only movement was doing to the wizarding world, anyway.

I admit, I loved the bit with the mosquitos and I'm sure the Ministry will properly appreciate Harry's present.

Finally, 'twill be interesting to see if going through the publisher gets Kingsley's agent anywhere in tracking Hermione. I rather suspect that they built in multiple levels of confusion, misdirection, and obfuscation between where she actually is and the publisher and I suspect there're traps along the route to impede and harass investigators.