Gwyn Raven posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 12:12pm

I love this series. I'm so glad you're continuing it.

hedwig_edwiges posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 11:19am

As good as always. I'm loving reading about this universe. And a bit sad about all the stupidity that humans beings - magical or not - are capable of. Thanks for the entertaining.

Crys posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 11:15am

Something just occured to me. [Crys pauses for the gasps of shock to die down.]
Normal mosquito on an island in the Bahamas

Plus

> "Right. The next thing is, we need to make sure everyone is inside when the ritual is performed. Anyone outside could be caught in it's effects," he said seriously

Equals

> The mosquitoes on Norman's Cay were particularly voracious

This, of course, after one (or is it two? or three?) expansions by Harry.

Andrew Niehaus posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 11:10am

Another excellent chapter. I was really feeling for Luna- it must be terrible to know when (and how) someone you love is going to die.

Eagerly waiting the next chapter!

Rogue15us posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 11:09am

This series is just getting better and better. I guess one of the reasons I like it so much is because in the world of Harry Potter that canon has showed us all this could easily happen. Just the general additudes of wizards hint of that.

Till later,
Rogue

simons_flower posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 10:22am

I'm loving this series, even the llamas.

Billy1 posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 10:14am

Heya, I love your stories. Hasn't been one yet that I haven't enjoyed. I have a question about the Wizard's Fall arc, what happened to China? Is that upcoming or did I miss if they survived the ICW going after them?

Deborahsu posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 9:59am

Wonderful! Luna is found ... and needs some healing, which she is getting. The challenge of enlarging the island is being met. And Harry has some WONDERFUL ideas for the ministry et al, though he won't be able to actually use most of 'em.

Thanks for the update! I'm really enjoying this story!

Dale Dietzman posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 9:30am

As always, your stories are great reading and very well done.

I have one small dis-continuity with your first story of the cycle, "Wizard's Fall" and this one.

In WF you said that Su Li had divorced Blaise Zabini, whereas in this story you had Blaise both divorce her and cast her out of the Zabini Family for her actions, publically disgracing her (and well deserved might I add?).

Since I like this version better, would you consider fixing the minor detail in WF?

Or will this remain to tease future readers, just like your use of units of the British Army in the SOB/SOB Cycle, where you used the units as they are today, after the British Army was totally reorganized, and not how they were at the time the stories would have happened?

Either way, a hearty well done on another great reading treat for HP fans everywhere.

Dale

Mark Blaine posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 9:30am

Good. I felt sorry for Luna.

Steves Place posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 9:11am

This is such a wonderful series of stories but I get confused on which order they are in. Could you maybe label the stories like this...
Wizards Fall: 1 Beginning...
Wizards Fall: 2 Rescue...
Wizards Fall: 3 Puff...
Wizards Fall: 4 Truth...
Wizards Fall: 5 next?
Wizards Fall: 6 next? etc.

It would just make it easier to go to the right one and find them in proper order.

Thanks

Steve

Orion posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 8:48am

Love this series. Always a good read, and i'm glad that it continues on.

Princess Fictoria posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 8:33am

As usual, I totally love your humorous yet realistic story telling. One thing I would like, if you feel so inclined, is a bit of insight into just how Dumbledore and the others are justifying their actions.

The sheeplike masses I can sort of understand. It is similar to Germany under Hitler... you change the way things are bit by bit until they are amazingly different from where you started... a difference that would have raised fear and open dissent if it were done all at once, but one tiny bit at a time and most simply go with the flow... but the ones who orchestrate the changes... I guess I just can't quite grasp how dumbledore is okay with himself and the changes/deaths he is creating.

Percy I can understand... but Charlie and Kingsley, I guess I am a bit confused how they can justify the terror and bloodshed that they are supporting when they both fought so hard against similar evil acts during the war.

No matter what, I eagerly look forward to reading the next installment.

Rick D Gale posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 8:23am

Again we are humbled by your writing talent and story telling.

Another great story in the continuing saga of Harry and Hermione (and now Luna).

What is it with Harry and Hermione? I mean, it's a great pairing and everything... Oh, never mind.

I can't wait to see what you have in store now that Luna is on the island.

I look forward to your next chapter.

Rick

Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 8:15am

Well, all I can say about that is just brilliant. A great story building up to the release of the nanites and using the Avalon equation. Great job, thank you.

Jamey posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 7:38am

When you were writing of Luna, and mentioning her dryad blood, were you thinking of Rodin's "Caryatid Who Has Fallen under Her Stone"?

kainboa posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 6:56am

great chapter, loved the scene at the end where harry's picturing various ways of getting back at the ministry

keep up the great work :)

riegert8 posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 6:53am

It nice that how Harry learn about Luna problem's and that went after her. It seem it be a long time for Luna to heal over the death of her Husband,It hard to see from this chapter that Harry and Luna would be that close in the future but then again she is in an lot of pain. I love the fight between Blaise and his ex-wife Su, but it said about Su that she would kill her parents in law. It also prove that she is so much like Percy. It sad that Percy would try to have his ex-love Penelope Clearwater arrested. I think it sad that Molly is a loon, I would think they get rid of her for that reason. I am disappointed that Charles would back up the Ministry with so many of his family is on the run, what is worse is that he be put in the same group as Percy. I love that Dumbledore was arrested, but it also kind of prove that stupid people work at the ministry to believe that would help people he hardly know then to turn his back on long time friends. I thought it really sad that that Minerva McGonagall died by Auror's, this prove what type a person Dumbledore turn into. Dumbledore meet McGonagall in 1940 when he started as Transfiguration teacher and she was a student, they started working together in 1956 when she took his place as Transfiguration position and he started working some where else in the school. If he could turn his back for someone that he work with and been friends with for so many years, there is no limit in what he would do.

Sakya posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 6:48am

Oh, Gods. I love it. Each one is better than the one before.

webdoc posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 6:43am

And yet another great installment. Here are some more donuts