shadowtrey posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 12:27am

*claps* Another good story! I'm beginning to really enjoy these stories, and wish they came more frequently.

Keep up the good work, you two. And contact me if you need a ward against llama's.

Hagrid posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 11:51pm

Well I must say that the two of yeh 'ave been busy (lemon). With much island enlarging and population expanding (jelly). Its hard not ter want ter go back and smash stuff in England (glazed). But I suppose yeh have plans, and I shouldn't just go forth like a half giant in a cauldron shoppe (bear paws). So I'll just take this last half dozen krullers with me a sit under a palm tree and watch.

Greg Johnson posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 11:42pm

As always a great read! Can't wait for more. Keep up the good work.

Crys posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 11:37pm

You put MoA and Homer Simpson in the same list?

Dolly Llama? *blink* *snicker*

The rescue of Celeste was well in character, but I think that whole thing was more to give the current status of all the principals.

> sprig of mistletoe wedged in her bra
*snort* Let's see, if you're supposed to be kissing her under the mistletoe, and it's in her bra . . .

> "And what about you, Harry? Do you see yourself in the worst possible light?"
[slight grin] "We are our own worst critic."

> The Headmaster had created a ward to shunt people attempting to apparate to or from the MLE to a special holding room. Kingsley and others had altered the holding room
*hysterical laughter*

Oooh, evil with the mosquitos.

> You can have fun storming the Ministry later.
"Bye, boys! Have fun storming the castle!"

Well, that entire chapter was clearly Luna's story. Sad as most of it is (not to mention the side note of the dryad blood), it all felt perfectly believable.

Continues the excellent story. Thank you.

Gardengirl posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 11:31pm

Well, that does explain about Luna and the nanites (nannites?). This bizarre and disturbing story is so beautifully crafted and engaging that I look forward to every installment. Cheers, and whatever chemical inducements you require for it, obtain in great quantities ~

Jujuberry posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 11:28pm

Yay! More wizards fall, and this time with Luna. Such a sad situation, and you wrote Richard and Luna's relationship so beautifully. Hermione has a tough job ahead of her.

Thanks again!

Meg posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 11:25pm

Oh, how I love this story. :D

Thanks for the update!

*heads home to wash llama smells off*

Meg

Amejisuto posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 11:13pm

OMG! ~flails~ Even though I knew what was coming for Luna I'm still so damn sorry for her. So glad to see more of this verse, it's great and original and just YAY! And what you did to Dumbles, and having Harry, Hermione and the Twins glamored? Had me rolling on the floor! Well done!

I'm looking forward to your X-men thingie too, when it gets done. YAY!

fx posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 11:03pm

I hate Charlie in this fic. Can't wait for more. Good job. Here's a box of smoething round and sweet :)

LifeScientist posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 10:54pm

Great job on this--really funny, particularly given the serious matter that you're dealing with....and the bit about Fred's head......just great. I like where you're taking this and as usual your characters are well thought out and their actions and motivations believable.
Hopefully you'll enjoy chewing on this review because as a diabetic and geneticist I simply can't send you donuts.

Viridian posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 10:49pm

So some more folds of the original plot are revealed - and they are quite intricate indeed. Luna's raging grief being the catalyst for the eventual Wizards Fall was a nice touch. There don't seem to be that many pieces left to fill in.

When you do the final one, would there perhaps be an epilogue for when the island returns?

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 10:41pm

Wow, some hard times this chapter, Luna is going to have some difficulty, but I look forward to what happens that they are able to help her, and Minerva...I wish she had been able to make it to the island for a while, and honestly, Dumbledore seems to be falling into a fiery pit of his own in the future. Harry does try so hard here, and look forward to what happens with he and his island later on.

charlotte posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 10:28pm

I am very addicted to your stories, all of them. This one has a wonderful blend of the serious with humor and concepts that make you think. The dolly lama was inspired. I am still laughing.

zac posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 10:18pm

this is an absolutly inspired series. btw congrats on breaking 100000 words for the series.

KenF posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 9:41pm

This is the way to start the day. I really feel sorry for Luna, but I'm also curious about the extend of her abilities.

I can just imagine Luna turning dark, and launching a reign of terror with her army of snorkaks.

Teresa Lynne posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 9:39pm

An excellent chapter! I enjoyed seeing Luna and Richard together; it's too bad that he couldn't have survived and made it to the Cay with the others. McGononagall's wake was very moving.......but I'd always hoped that she'd made it out and joined Madam Maxine in creating a better school than Hogwarts. So the other enclaves have been destroyed? I hope the refugees make it to the Cay and then get the chance to help Harry and the others kick ministry butt! The break out was great, no doubt dear Anthony will have nightmares for years about his up close and personal meeting with Bellatrix, Snape and Voldy.....with their esteemmed associate Dumbledore....snicker. It's a pity that the Ministry and company never realized just how close they came to having the Dark Lord Harry and the Dark Ladies Hermione and Luna. Then again, if that had happened they'd have deserved it big time! Thanks again for the story!

busted posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 8:57pm

I love this story!! Thanks for the update :D

morriganscrow posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 8:47pm

Bravo!
A fabulous blend of fun, sadness, anger and hope. Your characterizations are wonderful, backed up by spot-on dialogue and polished storytelling.
More please?

Wilyoldjane posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 8:02pm

I love this series!!! Very interesting how things could go after the fall of Voldi ( can we change his name in Waldi?) Can ´t wait to read more!!

DrT posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 7:32pm

Yet another brilliant chapter. Bravo. I was hoing this was the 'intro Luna' chapter, and as usual you did a great job with her character. I esp. enjoyed the breakout, of course.

"T"